江苏省高考英语-第三部分-写作层级训练-第二步-通览全局写作分类突破-第四讲-以纲悟意洞察提纲类写作.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,第四讲以,“,纲,”,悟,“,意,”,，洞察提纲类写作,李仕才,一、题型特点,二、写作技巧,1.,仔细研读题目。做到三定：定体裁，定人称，定时态。,2.,分析整合要点。对所给的要点进行分析及重新整合，并适当进行细节扩展。,3.,斟酌具体表达。结合文章要点及关键词确定选用的具体词汇及句式。,提纲作文要求考生根据所给出的提示性文字，首先确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述，表达主旨。它的特点是提纲既体现了文章的层次，又规定了各段大致的内容，为考生提供了写作思路。,【典例示范】,(,江苏卷,),生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张，请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报,”,Happy Teens,”,专栏投稿。,注意：,1.,对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译,。,2.,词数,150,左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数,。,3.,作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等,。,简要描述事情的经过,打篮球,碰撞,争执，等等,分析发生冲突的原因,1.,遇事不够冷静,2.,谈谈避免冲突的做法,(,请考生根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两种做法,),参考范文,Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.During the basketball game yesterday afternoon,Su,Hua,and Li,Jiang,bumped into each other,trying to catch the ball.Then they started shouting and yelling,and it turned into a horrible quarrel.,To be honest,it was Sus fault but Li was also to blamethey were not calm enough and both said some really mean things.They cared too much about winning and losing.As a matter of fact,blocking,pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.,To avoid such conflicts,we should be kind to one another,which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life.It is also a virtue to forgive and forget,especially in such a competitive and stressful society.Instead of blaming each other,we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place.,Dont be self-centered and try to be considerate.We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.,能力提升练,1,(2018,常州一中质检,),假如你是新华中学的学生李华，偶然看到在你市求学的美国学生,Tom,在网上发帖，要大家给他推荐一本学习汉语的书。你手头正好有一本合适的书可以借给他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：,1.,说明写信原因；,2.,描述书的情况；,3.,约定见面时间和地点。,注意：,1.,词数,150,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3.,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,Dear Tom,，,Im Li,Hua,a student of,Xinhua,Middle School.,Best wishes.,Yours,，,Li,Hua,参考范文,Dear,_,Tom,，,Im,_,Li,_,Hua,_,a,_,student,_,of,_,Xinhua,_,Middle,_,School,.,The other day,I learned quite by chance that you were in need of a book to help you improve your Chinese.I happen to have one,which I think might help you.,The book is entitled,Ne,w,Practical,Chinese,and it is intended for beginners at your,level.Not,only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life,but it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs.,Edited by three language experts,it has been popular with the readers ever since it came out two years ago.,If it is convenient to you,lets meet at 3 pm,this Sunday at the entrance to the Peoples Park,where I can give you the book face to face.,If not,try to find another time that is suitable for both of us.,Best,_,wishes,.,Yours,，,Li,_,Hua,能力提升练,2,(2018,苏北四市,(,淮安、宿迁、连云港、徐州,),高三年级摸底考试,),人们对待机遇有不同的态度，请以,“Opportunities,favour,the prepared mind”,为题，按要求用英语写一篇,150,词左右的文章，要点如下：,注意：,1.,可参照以上内容适当发挥；,2.,文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。,对待机遇的态度,结果,你的观点,梦想着成功，却迟迟没有行动，等着天上掉馅饼,只能看着机遇从身边悄悄溜走,(,请举例说明,),默默努力着，为机遇的到来做好充分准备,最终迎来成功的喜悦,参考范文,Opportunities,favour,the prepared mind,There are two kinds of people taking completely different attitudes to building a bright,future.One,is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future,，,but without any action,，,while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared.,The message conveyed above is crystal clear:Opportunities,favour,the prepared,mind.The,difference between the two lies only in the way each treats,opportunities.Successful,people always make adequate preparations to seize,opportunities.Unsuccessful,people,，,on the other hand,，,work little and just wait,，,seeing them pass by.,To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities,，,lets take the Chinese diver Wu,Minxia,for,example.In,order to win the gold medal in the Olympics,，,she trained hard day after day and eventually made it.Therefore,，,we should make efforts to make our dreams come,true.Its,universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts.,能力提升练,3,(2018,江苏启东中学高三检测,),假如你是李华，请根据下图中围绕,“,拒为低头族,”,(,stop,phubbing,),这个话题写一篇,150,词左右的英语短文。,词汇：,phubbing,(,低头族,),phone(,手机,),snubbing(snub,冷落的进行时态,),内容包括：,1.,你身边有,“,低头族,”,吗？他们的表现；,2.,“,低头族,”,给学习和生活带来的影响；,3.,就如何,“,拒为低头族,”,提,1,2,点建议。,要求：,1.,文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；,2.,可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事；,3.,文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。,Nowadays,many people are addicted to their phones.,参考范文,Nowadays,_,many,_,people,_,are,_,addicted,_,to,_,their,_,phones,.,They look at their phones everywhere all the time,ignoring the people around them.In recent years,many activities have been organized to appeal to people to stop,phubbing,.,There is a lot of,phubbing,around me.My cousin likes playing with mobile phones very much.He cant stop sending text messages,surfing the Internet,playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones.,However,phubbing,disturbs not only our studies,but also our life.,Phubbing,whether playing phone games or sending text message,particularly in class or at work,is a big waste of time.Whats more,it can lead to health problems.For instance,using a mobile phone too much can cause eyes or back and neck pain.,In my opinion,it is high time we threw away our phones and raised our heads.We should do more exercise and take part in real-life activities.Only when we use phones reasonably can we lead a happy life.,