人物介绍英语作文课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,西宁第四高级中学 苏生鸿,English Writing,英语书面表达,Introduction,to,a person,writing,必修一,Unit5,Nelson Mandela-,-a modern hero,1.Lets think about how many words when you describe a person!,How to write about,a great person,有毅力的,有能力的,热心肠的,随和的,精力充沛,慷慨的,智能的,雄心的,有吸引力的,determined,perseverant,capable,warm hearted,easy going,energetic,generous,intelligent,ambitious,attractive/,charming,健忘的,诚实的,幽默的,勤奋的,独立的,谨慎的,多话的,健康的,耐心的,宽容的,forgetful,honest,humorous,diligent,independent,cautious,talkative,healthy,patient,tolerant,严格的,谦虚的,考虑周到的,杰出的,乐观的,悲观的,热情的,心不在焉的,脾气不好的,举止得体的,有天赋的,strict,modest,considerate,outstanding,optimistic,pessimistic,enthusiastic,absent minded,bad tempered,behave well,gifted/talented,2,.Make the following sentences with,the words above,.,温家宝总是举止得体,。,李泳不但很有天赋而且很勤奋。,XXX,是个很有能力的班长。,王海军有一颗宽容的心。,吴尊很受年轻人的欢迎。,林乔禹正在中山大学主修音乐。,Writing,Wen,Jiabao,always,behaves himself/well,.,Li Yong is not only,gifted,but also,diligent,.,XXX is a very,capable,monitor.,Wang,Haijun,has got a,forgiving,heart,/,is,tolerant,.,Wu,Zun,is,very,popular with,the young.,Lin,Qiaoyu,is,majoring in,music at,Zhongshan,University.,Collect information,Sort them in proper order,Make an outline,Examine your composition to perfect it,3.Give some tips when you write about a great person?,4.,人物简介的一般步骤：,Give the right order,(,),教,育,：,education,(,),外,貌,性格,appearance,character,(,),生,平,big events in his or her life (in order of time),(,),评,估,evaluation,(,),概,况,age,sex,birth-place,background,概,貌,育,平,评,5.,Useful expressions and sentences in writing a person,.,1,）,.Birthday and birth place:,Sb,was/were born in on,她与,1867,年,12,月,7,日出生与波兰。,eg,.She was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867.,2).Family background,a),Sb,was/were born in/into a poor/rich family,b)his/her family was so poor that,c)his/her father was very strict with him,d)the son of a poor family,e)when he was a small boy/young,f)as a child/as a boy of 15,g)during his/her childhood,h)spend his childhood in,i)live,a happy/hard life,亚伯拉罕,.,林肯，一个贫穷家庭的孩子，与,1809,年,2,月,12,日出生与,Kentucky,。,eg,.Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809.,查理,.,狄更斯出生贫穷，只受很少的教育。,Born of a poor clerks family,Charles Dickens had little schooling.,3,）,Education background,be admitted to college,graduate fromdepartment of university,when at college,he majored in,receive a doctors degree,go abroad for further studies,4,）,Big events in ones life,be interested in/be fond of,work hard at,serve as,devote his lifetime/himself to,concentrate himself to,do research about/into,make up ones mind to do,sth,.,do,sth,with great determination and perseverance,be strict in,sth,.,have a way of doing,sth,try ones best to do,sth,.,encourage,sb,to do,fight for,give up ones life for,sb/sth,win a prize/the first prize in competition,receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for,be good at do well in,be crazy about enjoy,make rapid progress in,set a new world record of,equal the world record,win(won)a gold/silver/bronze medal,be selected to/become a member of,study hard train hard,go through hardship,overcome many difficulties,have a gift/talent for language,etc,one of the best/most important,set a good example for,a model teacher/worker,be respected by everyone,speak/think highly of,be honored as(an excellent athlete),His hard work brought him great success.,He is the pride of China.,His heroic story spread all over the city.,5,）,Evaluation,6,）描写人物外貌和性格特征,good-looking funny-looking ugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired,warm-hearted kind-hearted absent-minded bad-tempered near-sighted far-sighted,a strong will tall short pretty naughty smart wise bright diligent lazy healthy humorous charming,（迷人的）,attractive talkative confidence independent patience,A.,概况,（尽量用非谓语,/,同位语结构,/,定语从句，使文章简洁，通顺,),1)Born in _ on _,_ is a _.,2)_,the son of a _ family,was born in _ on _.,3)XXX,_,is a beautiful girl/handsome boy.,monitor of Class 5/7,B,外貌,性格,(,巧用,with,做定语,),梁志波是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜,Liang,Zhibo,is a,near-sighted/far-sighted,boy _.,杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发。,Yang,Yang,is,good-looking/ordinary-looking/funny-looking,_.,何泽宇高高瘦瘦,浓浓的眉毛,看上去挺帅的。,He,Zeyu,is a,tall and thin,guy _,looking very handsome.,with a pair of glasses on his nose,.,with long hair,.,with thick eyebrows,C,生平,(,尽量用复合句,倒装,非限制定语从句等，润色文章,),1,）,侯耀文,不仅对科学感兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。,Not only,_,but also _.,2,）,祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国家作出了贡献。,Zu,Longtao,set a new world record of swimming,_.,is,Hou,Yaowen,interested in science,he has a gift for music,which,makes a great contribution to China.,D.,评价（注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语,/,词组）,1,）,裴继升给我们作出了榜样,大家都赞扬他,Pei,Jishen,_,so all the people _him.,2,）,鲁迅是中国最伟大的小说家之一,并且将会作为杰出人物为人们所永远记住,.,Lu,Xun,is one of the greatest novelists in China and will _an outstanding man forever.,sets us a good example,speaks highly of,be remembered as,6.,实战演练,Write a short passage about,Nelson Mandela.,Nelson Mandela was born near Transkei,on July18,1918.He completed law degree at university,when he was 22 years old.,He is a great black leader,who devoted all his life to fighting for the equal rights for the black people.,It was 1952,when he opened a law office to help poor black people on their problems.,A few years later,Mandela encouraged people to use violence against anti-black laws to get the same rights as white people.,So he was put into prison.The reason,for which he won the 1993 Nobel Peace Prize,was,he that never gave up fighting for the freedom of all the blacks.,What he did,was for his people,his country,not for himself.So he is a warm-hearted,brave,determined and unselfish man.,As far as I am concerned ,he is a great man.,7.Conclusion:,1.,人物简介的写作步骤,:,概,貌,育,平,评,2.,5,个句子整合语言点,：,1,）姓名性别教育经历,2,）个人特点爱好,3,）工作表现，特点,4,）业绩（荣誉）,5,）评价,3.,用非谓语,/,同位语结构,;,巧用,with,做定语,;,倒装,4.,记住,常用描写人物的形容词,试题,1,根据下列提示，写一篇介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平的文章。,1,袁隆平,1937,年,9,月,7,日出生在重庆的一个贫困农民家庭。,2,1953,年毕业于西南农学院，毕业后被分配到湘西农校任教。,3,1964,年开始从事水稻研究,。,1981,年荣获我国第一个国家发明特等奖，被国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父”。,4,生活简朴，不计名利。,注意,：,1,）要有标题。,2,）介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。,写作要求,:,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,评分标准,:,句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。,答案,总结,HOMEWORK,试题,2,请根据以下提示，用英语给“中国日报”写一篇简讯介绍我国著名的跨栏运动员,-,刘翔，内容要点如下,：,刘翔中国第一个男子奥运田径冠军,(track champion),籍贯：生日上海；,1983,最值得骄傲的事,1,）雅典奥运会平世界纪录,2,）,2006,年瑞士洛桑田径超级大奖赛冠军,（,a super grand prix in Lausanne,Switzerland,），,打破沉睡,13,年之久英国运动员保持的世界纪录下一个目标,2008,北京奥运会夺冠，为国争光,注意,：,1,）要有标题。,2,）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。,写作要求,:,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,评分标准,:,句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。,答案,总结,试题,3,写信向友人介绍作家鲁迅。你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容提要如下,（,1,）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人，为了国家，弃医从文。,（,2,）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。,（,3,）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如,阿,Q,正传,、,祝福,这两部影片。,（,4,）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。,参考词汇：,阿,Q,正传,：,The True Story of AH Q,祝福,：,The New Years Sacrifice,注意：,介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。,写作要求,:,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,评分标准,:,句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。,Dear Bruce,I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about,Luxun,._,Since you are learning Chinese literatures,I think reading Lu,Xuns,novels will help you to know more about it.,Yours,Li Ming,答案,总结,试题,4,刘平从广告上得知上海某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。,(1),姓名：刘平，年龄,27,岁。,(2)2001,年毕业于中山大学，后来留学日本东京大学。,(3)2005,年科研成果显著，获博士学位。,(4),日本一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但他拒绝了。,(5),为了报效祖国,，于,2006,年毅然回国。,注意：介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。,写作要求：只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,评分标准,：,句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。,Dear Sir,How do you do?Through the ad.I know your company needs an engineer.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.,_.,I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.,I am looking forward to your early reply.,Sincerely yours,Liu Ping,答案,试题,1,答案,Liuxiang,-Our Pride,Born in 1983,Shanghai,Liuxiang,is Chinas first male Olympic track champion.To our pride,Liuxiang,set the world record of Olympics Games in Athens.Whats more,in 2006,he broke the world record and got the championship at a super grand prix in Lausanne,Switzerland.It has caused public concern of the entire world that he smashed the 13-year-old world record in mens 110-meter hurdle kept by British hurdler.Though,Liuxiang,is a proud world record holder now,his main goal hasnt changed that he will win another gold medal at the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games for our homeland.,返回,试题,2,答案,Yuan,Longping,Born on September 7,1937 in Chongqing,Yuan,Longping,was from a poor farmers family.,Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953,he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan.,He began his research in rice in 1964 and got the First National Special Prize for Invention in 1981.,He is honored as“Father of Hybrid Rice”by the international friends.,Famous as he is,he cares little for money and fame.,返回,试题,3,答案,Dear Bruce,I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about,Luxun,.,Born in,Shaoxing,Zhejiang Province,Lu,Xun,with the real name,Zhou,Shuren,abandoned the study of medicine,and began to write.,Not only was,Lu,Xun,a well-Known Chinese writer,a thinker,but also,the father of modern Chinese literature,.His novels have,been translated into,many languages and some of novels have,been made into,films,such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice.Some of his novels have,been collected,in high school and college textbooks.,Since you are learning Chinese literatures,I think reading Lu,Xuns,novels will benefit a lot.,Yours,返回,试题,4,答案,Dear Sir,How do you do?Through the ad.I know your company needs an engineer.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.,My name is Liu Ping,aged 27,.,Having graduated,from,Zhongshan,University in 2001,I was sent to Tokyo University.Through hard work for 4 years,I,achieved extraordinary result in scientific research,and,received a doctors degree,.A Japanese company tried hard to invite me,with a good offer of salary,but I refused it.To,devote myself to,our China,I came back this year,without any hesitation,.,I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.,I am looking forward to your early reply.,Sincerely yours,Liu Ping,返回,Goodbye,