高考英语一轮复习课件专题十七概要写作.ppt

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improved.,答案,写作提醒,文章重要讲述好的写作习惯對提高写作水平的协助。文章构造比较清晰,以自然段為基础概括要點即可。其中第壹段是主旨段,而背面的三段為详细的做法。,One possible version:,Good writing habits contribute a lot to improving your writing.(要點1)First,you should read as much as possible to get the knowledge and skills for writing.(要點2)You should also make a writ-ing plan and keep up your daily writing.(要點3)Besides,youd better turn to others for help to im-prove your writing.(要點4),Writing 2(浙江金华拾校壹模),阅讀下面短文,根据其内容写壹篇60詞左右的内容概要。,The familiar yellow school bus is the largest system of mass transportation in the US and every school day transports roughly 25 million young people to school and home again after the school day ends.Meanwhile,it is the safest method for getting kids to and from school,according to the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration(NHTSA).Children are 70 times more likely to arrive at school safely on the school bus than if they had traveled to school driving themselves or riding with friends.,These school buses meet more of the nations motor vehicle safety standards than any other vehi-,cles on the road.Also,several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer,such as video cameras on the inside and outside,stop arm cameras,GPS tracking and colli-sion lessening systems.Another safety tool on school buses is high seat backs,closely-spaced seats and energy-absorbing seats.,But even the safeness of school buses would not completely sum up why children are safer when,riding the big,yellow bus.The bus is only as safe as the professional men and women who drive,them.All drivers must obtain a Class B or C Commercial Driver,s License(CDL).They are ran-,domly tested for alcohol and drugs,usually have their driving record checked,and are given the,same review of criminal history as teachers and other employees who have contact with students.,In order to serve as a school bus driver,most applicants are required to successfully complete a,training course,along with instruction in the classroom and behind the wheel.,School buses are safe for the environment,not only because each bus replaces 36 passenger cars,that would,but for the buses,be on the road taking and picking up school children.Additionally,school buses use alternative green fuels like natural gas,and electric power.,Todd Monteferrario,President of the National School Transportation Association,said parents,should remember that the safest and smartest choice is to put their children on the big yellow bus,when they can.,答案,写作提醒,本文是议论文。文章重要论述校車的好处。文章的构造為“總分總”模式。第壹段是主題段,提出了重要观點。第二至第四段分别是详细的论据。最终壹段提出結论。,One possible version:,The school bus is the safest and wisest choice to school in the US.(要點1)Firstly,school buses not only meet high vehicle safety standards but also are technologically equipped.(要點2)Secondly,the bus drivers have to pass strict qualification tests and safety driving training.(要點3)Thirdly,school buses,powered by green fuels environmentally safe by reducing the number of private cars hitting the roads.(要點4)Therefore children are encouraged to go to school by school bus.(要點5),Writing 3(浙江衢州高三壹模),阅讀下面短文,根据其内容写壹篇60詞左右的内容概要。,Among all the fast growing science and technology,the research of human genes,or biological en-gineering as people call it,is drawing more and more attention now.Discussions about it are in-creasingly heated around the world.,The greatest thing that gene technology can do is to cure serious diseases that doctors at present can almost do nothing with,such as cancer and heart disease.Every year,millions of people are murdered by these two killers.And to date,doctors have not found an effective way to cure them.But if the gene technology is applied,not only these two diseases can be cured completely,bring-ing happiness and more living days to the patients,but also the great amount of money people spend on curing their diseases can be saved,therefore it benefits the economy as well.In addition,the human lifespan(寿命)can be prolonged.,Gene technology can help people to give birth to healthier and cleverer children.Some families,have genetic diseases.This means their children will for sure have the familial disease,which is a,great trouble for these families.In the past,doctors could do nothing about genetic diseases.But,gene technology can solve this problem perfectly.Scientists just need to find the wrong gene and,correct it,and a healthy child will be born.,Some people are worrying that the gene research can be used to create human beings in large quan-,tities.In the past few years,scientists have succeeded in cloning animals such as mice,sheep,and,dogs;therefore,these people predict that human babies would soon be cloned and that it would be,beyond control,leading to some disastrous consequences.But many believe that cloned babies will,not come out in large quantities,for most couples in the world can have babies in a very normal,way and they also believe measures will be taken to control gene technology.,答案,写作提醒,文章首先简介了基因工程的好处。最终壹段阐明了某些不壹样的观點。在概要写作時,以自然段為概括的基础。,One possible version:,Gene technology is now a hot topic worldwide.(要點1)It can help people cure deadly diseases and allow them to live a happier and longer life with better economic conditions.(要點2)Gene tech-nology also makes it possible for people with genetic diseases to give birth to healthy babies.(要點3)However,some people are concerned that gene technology will be largely used in human cloning while others dont see it as a problem.(要點4),高级語块give birth to 生出小孩;导致(某事的产生),be concerned that.紧张,Writing 4(浙江“七彩阳光”联盟3月),阅讀下面短文,根据其内容写壹篇60詞左右的内容概要。,I cant decide what I want to eat for dinner tonight.Do I feel like Italian food or Thai food?Indian or Chinese?American or Turkish?I dont need to travel around the world;all these choices are available in a typical inner city in Australia.,Australian food has many different cultural influences.Over the past century,people from many countries have come to Australia.These migrants(移民)have contributed to the melting pot,that is,Australian food.,“Whether youre after modern,traditional or exotic flavors,Australias eclectic dining scene of-fers a wide range of the worlds great cuisines(菜肴),”the Visit Victoria website noted.,Some Australian families may restrict their diet to the basic“meat and three veg”meal:one sort of meat(chicken,beef,lamb,and so on),along with three different types of vegetables(usually potatoes,peas and carrots).But most people enjoy the variety.,If I were to pick four meals that every Australian eats,they would be Italian spaghetti bolognaise,(意式肉酱面),Chinese fried rice,British fish and chips and Thai green chicken curry.,Chinese students in Australia find it easy to get a Chinese meal.Cities like Sydney have large Chi-natowns,but many towns in the country also have a Chinese takeaway restaurant.,Popular Australian-Chinese dishes may not always seem authenticHoney Chicken,for examplebut you can still find dumplings and noodles.,Even so,Australia has its own,very Australian savory(可口的)dish:meat pie.Its a real classic!The dish is on the menu at every house party and sporting venue(場所),and is eaten every morn-ing after a big night.,And who could forget desserts?We Australians often fight with New Zealanders over who has the rightful claim to the pavlova(奶油水果蛋白饼)and lamington(拉明顿巧克力椰丝方形蛋糕)desserts,both equally delicious and sweet.,答案,写作提醒,文章重要是有关澳大利亚饮食的多元化現象。本文段落比较分散,不過其中心主旨還是很明确的。阅讀時注意几种有关中心的把握。,One possible version:,Various choices of food from around the world are available in a typical inner city in Australia.(要點1)Different cultural influences contribute to Australian foods.(要點2)But some Australian fami-lies may restrict their diet to meat and three veg while most enjoy its variety.(要點3)Though Chi-nese dishes are easy to get in Australia,Australians have their own special dishes:meat pie and desserts.(要點4),深度解析诸多概写的文章的自然段构造就反应了文章的要點线索,不過也有的文章,其自然段比较零碎,因此不能依托自然段的构造来概要写作。這時就要考虑各個自然段在中心方面的相似度,壹次来進行概括。,高级語块contribute to 對做出奉献,佳句背诵Various choices of food from around the world are available in a typical inner city in Australia.,Different cultural influences contribute to Australian foods.,Writing 1(浙江學軍中學领航卷),阅讀下面短文,根据其内容写壹篇60詞左右的内容概要。,Calling Latin a dead language is a matter of semantics(語义學).There are those who would sug-gest Latin is not dead,and that it lives on in everyday language used by billions of people world-wide.Others argue that because therere routine updates on Latin published by the Roman Catholic Church,it is still alive and developing.,However,Latin is no longer used,on a daily basis,by the vast majority of people outside of specific religious settings,where tradition influences its use.It is no longer anyones native language.While its use is still taught,Latin is no longer considered to be a developing language to the degree of most modern languages.,The reasons for Latin dying out are numerous.Perhaps the most significant one has to do with the decline of the Roman Empire.During the Roman period,language was standardized to a greater degree.Because Rome was the most powerful political country in the Western world at the time,B组 高考模拟综合題组,most of those who had any ambition to succeed had a desire to learn Latin.As a result,the language spread rapidly.However,that rapid expansion would eventually begin to plateau(处在停滞状态)and finally decline.,Latin continued to be used during the medieval period.Throughout Europe,it remained the lan-guage of choice.However,with nothing to unite the continent,there was no need for a uniform language.So slowly,over a period of hundreds of years,Latin began to change as different regions developed their own dialects(方言),known as the Romance languages today,among which the most commonly spoken and recognizable are Spanish,Portuguese,Italian and French.,Though not directly related to the Romance languages,Latin still has an effect on many other lan-guages.English,for example,which is not one of the Romance languages but a Germanic one,can trace nearly two-thirds of its words back to Latin roots.,答案,写作提醒,本文重要简介了拉丁語的兴衰。文章有五段,每段自成壹种信息群,概括要點時以段落為基础進行即可。,One possible version:,Some people assume Latin is a living and developing language rather than a dead one.(要點1)But most people dont use it in daily life anymore except on specific religious occasions.(要點2)Its gradual disappearance resulted from many factors especially the fall of the Roman Empire.(要點3)With the Roman Empire rising and falling,Latin experienced its expansion,stability and then decline.(要點4)Although Latin changed as the Romance languages came into being,it still influ-ences many other languages,like English,today.(要點5),高级語块result from由于with the Roman Empire rising and falling 伴随罗馬帝国的兴衰expansion n.扩张stability n.稳定decline n.衰落,Writing 2(浙江温州二模),阅讀下面短文,根据其内容写壹篇60詞左右的内容概要。,Look inside any family home in the evening,and you might see a typical enough scene:Mom and Dad,each on their own laptop or tablet,streaming movies,catching up on work or maybe answer-ing emails on their smartphones.Meanwhile,one child is chatting online with one school friend while texting another.The other is playing a video game with a friend on the other side of the city at the same time.Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of tech-nologies.,According to some experts,the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as tech-nology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.It appears to be the case that many people would much rather spend time with their electronic gadgets(電子产品)than with one another.Young people say it is difficult to get their parents attention and they have to compete with smartphones,tablets and other technologies.,However,a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and en-couraging view,suggesting that far from replacing human contact,technology can actually better,family relationships.Just over half of the 2,253 people surveyed agreed that technology had en-,abled them to increase their contact with distant family members and 47 percent said it had im-,proved the communication with the people they lived with.Moreover,even the closest members of,families need time away from each other at some point to seek their own interests.Family mem-,bers who might otherwise have sat in separate rooms can now be in the same one while still occu-,pying a different mental space.,Look back at our typical family scene above.Is it any different from four people reading their own,books?Or is it driving family apart?Where technology will lead us remains to be seen.Yet there is,no need to worry.As a matter of fact,how it affects our family relationships depends on our atti-,tude toward technology.,答案,写作提醒,本文构造清晰,不過概括要點時要注意文章的观點在前後有很大的转折和對比,并且其观點和我們平時的對電子产品的社會主流观點并不壹致,因此在写概要前壹定要讀懂原文,不要受固有观點的影响。,One possible version:,Nowadays family members are often found lost in their own electronic products.(要點1)Some ex-perts fear that technology can affect family relationships for lack of face-to-face communication.(要點2)However,a report has found technology benefits family bonds in