英语三段式作文指导.pptx

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2018-5-16,#,Writing Skills,第1页,What kind of composition can get high marks?,第2页,A good composition,Organization,Content,Language,语言,+,内容,+,结构,第3页,15,分作文,中规中矩,，内,容要,点基本完,整，语法,与单词基本正,确，,但基本是简,单句子,堆,砌，没,有什么亮,点。,小 结,15,分和,20,多分作文到底差在哪里？,20,分以上,作,文,在句型和词汇方面做了包,装，它句子如人穿衣服，它已经不是普通校服，而是李宁、耐克等名牌，所以让人以为很“拽”，,而英,语写作要就是这种很“拽”感,觉,。,第4页,只写关键点,没有拓展,内容不充实。,(only key point,no details),广东卷书面表示,要,点,:,描,述清洁工工作艰,辛,。,There,is no doubt that cleaners are doing one of the hardest,job,s.,What do you think,of the sentence?,第5页,例,如,:,描,述清洁工工作艰,辛,。,关键点：,There,is no doubt that cleaners are doing one of,t,he hardest iobs,.,“,1,个关键点,+1,个细节”拓展法,补充细节：,They,get up early in the mornings every day to,clean the streets while we are still,in a,s,weet dream,.,第6页,Learning Goals,1.,The three-paragraph style composition,三段式结构作文,2.,How to add the details to the key point?,有效补充关键点细节（关键点,+,细节）,第7页,What is the three-paragraph style composition?,Para.1,背,景介绍,+,写作目标,Para.2,核,心关键点,+,补充细节,Para.3,恰,当结束,语,第8页,怎样处理背景介绍,+,写作目标呢,?,Think it over:,2.,怎样补充细节？,3.,交际性句子怎么确定？,第9页,假定你是中学生李华，澳大利亚人库克（,Cook,）未来你校任教，其航班今天抵达，你因故不能接机，请给他发一封电子邮件，告诉他下飞机后怎样自行到校，关键点以下：,1.,出机场，在公交站乘一路车；,2.,半小时后邮局站下车；,3.,前行,50,米即到。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Writing task 1,第10页,Para.1,1,),写作背景：,2),写信目标：,Para.2,写作关键点：,怎样从机场到学校。,Para.3,简短恰当结尾。,三段式作文结构分析及关键点处理,因故不能接,Cook,今天抵达航班。,写信通知他,下飞机后自行到校。,出机场,在公交站乘一路车；,半小时后邮局站下车；,前行,50,米即到。,第11页,How is everything going?I am terribly sorry that I cant meet you at the airport because I caught a bad cold yesterday.So Id like to send you a letter to tell you how to get to our school.,Para.1,怎样处理背景介绍,+,写作目标呢,?,第12页,Para.2,怎样补充细节？,以简单且易于表示为标准,;,是否要补充细节及补充几个细节 由关键点特征决定；,补充关键点惯用方法有：,解释说明、举例等。,第13页,要,点,：,因,故,不能接机,I am,terribly sorry,that I cant meet you at the airport,because I caught a bad cold yesterday/I have something urgent to deal with,.,2,.,关键点：,坐,1,路车，,半小时后邮局站下,车。,Take,Bus,1,and stay on the bus for about,half an,hour until you reach a stop called post,office.,You,can enjoy the beauty of our city while,on,the bus,.,3.,关键点：坐,1,路车，,半小时后邮局站下车，前行,50,米即到。,Take Bus 1 and it will take you about half an hour to reach the post office,in front of which is a parking lot.,Then you get off the bus and after walking along the road ahead for about 50 meters,you will certainly see the school gate.You wont,miss it.,第14页,Para.3,补充交际性语言,I,apologize again for not being able to pick you,up and,we are looking forward to your coming.,第15页,A good composition should like this:,Para.1,背,景介绍,+,写作目标,Para.2,核,心关键点,+,细节补充,Para.3,恰,当结束,语,A Brief Summary,第16页,假,设你是中学生李华，上周你在国外某网络书店买了一本英文词典，收到后发觉一些质量问题，请给书店经理用英语写一封电子邮件，说明情况和自己要求。关键点以下：,1.购置时间；,2.发觉问题（印刷错误、缺页等）；,3.要求退款或换货。,注意：,1.词数100左右；,2,.信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,3,.参考词汇：印刷错误misprint(n.),Writing task 2,第17页,三段式作文结构分析及,关键点处理,Para.1,1,),写作背景：,2),写信目标：,Para.2,写作关键点：,Para.3,简短恰当结尾。,李华上周在书店买了英文字典。,写信向经理反应字典有质量问题。,购置时间,发觉问题（印刷错误、缺页等）,要求退款或换货。,第18页,关键点,1,：上,周，我在网上买了一,本英文字,典,。,细节：,关键点,2,：,质,量问题（印刷错误、缺页等）。,细节：,关键点,3,：退,款或者换,货。,细节：,关键点,4,：功,能性结束语,符合要,求店家换货（字典）或退,款交际目标,How to add the details?,上周几？为何要买字典？,印刷错误、缺页情况。,用这本字典会怎样？,怎么退或换货？,第19页,Para.1,背景介绍,+,写作目标,_,Para.2,关键点,+,细节,_,Para.3,交际性结尾,_,第20页,整理,Writing task 2,，,写成完整作文。,Homework,第21页,