高考英语复习写作第12讲扩展句在写作中的应用牛津译林版.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,第12讲扩展句在写作中应用,第1页,一、魔法导航,在写作中我们通常把用以支持主题句句子称为支持句或扩展句。段落扩,展句写作是段落写作“关键”,其质量高低将决定整段文章成败。在,段落扩展句写作中要注意以下几个问题:,1.抓住一个中心,对扩展句精挑细选。,全部扩展句都必须与主题句保持一致,都要为主题句服务。全部与主题句,无关或关系不大句子都要从扩展句中去掉。如:,巧扩妙展,风韵无限,Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite of the large-scale con-,struction of roads and highways,there is still much room for improvement,be-,cause of the ever increasing number of cars these years.What,s worse,some,drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.(,江,苏,),第2页,【评析】本段主题句“Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.”,点明了本段中心思想是要介绍造成交通问题原因。下面扩展句紧紧围,绕中心句说明了两种详细原因,有力地支持了主题句。,2.选取合理写作次序,保持扩展句之间连贯性。,扩展句不能杂乱无章地堆砌到一块儿,而是应该恰当利用合理写作次序(如,时间、空间、逻辑等次序)把各个扩展句有机地组织起来,使其浑然一体。如:,When the craftsman came into the classroom,we gave him a warm welcome and,two boys helped him with the tool box.First,he showed us the basic steps and,skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him,watching attentively.,Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old man walked around and helped,us patiently.Finally,we took pictures with the old craftsman and the dough fig-,urines we made.Looking at the figurines,we were all very excited.(,北京,),第3页,3.恰当议论,锦上添花。,在扩展句写作中依据实际需要对一些扩展句进行恰当点评或做深入,阐释不但能够丰富段落内容,而且还能够起到深化主题、画龙点睛作用。,如:,When I am faced with difficulties,I usually choose to refer to relevant learning,materials or web pages.In this way,I can not only work them out but also improve,my ability to overcome difficulties all by myself.,4.重视结构,段落层次分明。,在段落扩展句写作中能够采取有形或无形“三节式”扩展模式,即“主,题句+扩展句+总结句”结构。如:,【评析】本段利用时间次序组织写作,向老艺人学习捏面人过程跃然纸,上,读后令人印象深刻。,第4页,In fact,traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public,order.Without them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in,chaos.But rules alone don,t secure an orderly society.It is the people who obey,the rules that matter.Therefore,it is everybody,s duty to observe them to keep,our society in order and going on the right track.(江苏),第5页,二、学以致用,1.完美文章,依据上下文在横线上填上适当扩展句或过渡语。,We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several,things.Firstly,we should develop a good attitude to life,because 扩展句(1),.过渡语,we should be brave when faced with dif-,ficulties.Secondly,we must study hard because扩展句(2),.If we,have the power,we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.过渡语,in order to study well,we need to do sports so that扩展句(3),.For example,we can go running,play ball games or simply take a walk af-,ter a day,s study.If we do those things well,扩展句(4),.,第6页,答案,(1)life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times,(2)knowledge is power,(3)we can keep fit,(4)we will be able to grow up happily and healthily,Thus/Therefore,In addition/Besides/What,s more,2.话题写作,本期话题未来生活,写作要求写出合理扩展句。,请依据下面提醒,写一篇90词左右英语短文。,第7页,1.未来生存环境愈加舒适漂亮;,2.太阳能、风能等新能源应用愈加广泛;,3.机器人等高科技产品进入普通家庭。,第8页,With the science and technology developing,I,m optimistic about life in the fu-,ture.By that time the surroundings where we live will be more comfortable and,beautiful.In addition,new forms of energy such as solar energy,wind energy will,be made full use of,which will be of great use for protecting the environment.Al-,so,robots as well as other high-tech products will go into common families.Not,only can they help people do housework,but also they can look after the babies.,Such is the life in future which is bound to be more comfortable and convenient.,答案,One possible version:,第9页,三、美文赏读,(福建),怎样了解“成功”,不一样人有不一样看法。请认真阅读下面引语(quota-,tion),按要求用英语写一篇短文。,“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusi-,asm.”,Sir Winston Churchill,内容要求:,1.你对该引语了解;,2.你相关经历;,3.恰当结尾。,第10页,注意:,1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;,2.文中不能出现考生详细信息;,3.词数120左右。,我来试写,This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that,第11页,答案,One possible version:,This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that,we shouldn,t get discouraged,right after failures.Rather,we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists,in the ability to continue efforts through failures.,At the age of twelve,I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I,couldn,t wait to try my hand at riding it.However,it was harder than expected.The,bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still,I took many falls off,the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep,going.With more practice,I did better and better.Looking back,I feel I wouldn,t be,able to ride a bike had I lost heart.,第12页,Actually,we can,t succeed in everything we try.What,s important is that we,should stick at it.,【写作点评】,本文作者充分结合本身经历阐释了自己对题目要求中引语看法。文中主题,句概括准确,扩展句充分、合理,总结句深刻、到位,句式结构丰富多彩,展示了,作者高超语言驾驭能力。,第13页,