杨所仙公开课（writing）.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing,假定你是李华，你校每年都要举办一次读书节，你想邀请在本市工作的英国朋友大卫参加今年的读书节，请你就此写一封邀请信，主要内容包括：,1.,起始时间和地点；,2.,活动：免费赠书和讲座；,3.,目的：鼓励学生。,1.The active will be hold in our school.,2,2.The festival will taking place at 8:30am,on next Sunday.,2,3.You can by bus to our school.,1,4.Hope you can accept my invite.,1,error correction,activity,held,具体地点,take,以,this,，,that,，,next,，,last,，,one,，,each,开头的时间短语前介词常省略。,take a bus,invitation,5.The purpose is encourage students,read more books,.,2,6.We hope have more students realize,reading importance.,2,error correction,to,to,The+n.+is+to do sth.,We hope more students,could,realize the importance of reading.,中式英语（,there be,）,invite,invitation,hold,activity,present,give away,free,lecture,purpose,encourage,v.,邀请,n.,邀请,v.,举办（,held-held,）,n.,活动,activities,（,pl.,）,v.,赠送（,sb.with sth.,）,赠送,免费,ly,n.,讲座 （,give a,）,n.,目的（,with the of,）,v.,鼓励（,sb.to do sth.,）,必会单词,three paras.,para 1.background&writing purpose,para 2.body:(1)time&place,；,(2)give away books&lecture,；,(3)purpose.,para3.sincere invitation,structure,假定你是李华，你校每年都要举办一次读书节，你想邀请在本市工作的英国朋友大卫参加今年的读书节，请你就此写一封邀请信，主要内容包括：,1.,起始时间和地点；,2.,活动：免费赠书和讲座；,3.,目的：鼓励学生。,背景,写信目的,background,1.the annual Reading Festival,(1).is coming.,(2).is approaching.,(3).is around the corner.(,倒装,),Around the corner is the annual Reading Festival,_,(,一个具有教育意义的活动,).,同位语,an educational activity,倒装,writing purpose,1.Im writing to.,Para.1,As you know,around the corner,is,the,annual Reading Festival,an educational,activity,.,Im writing to,invite,you to,take,part in,it.,Im writing to invite you to take part in it.,para.2,1.,时间,&,地点,(,我校,&,下周五早,8,点到,11,点,),活动,+will be held+,地点状语,+,时间状语,The activity will be held in our school from 8:00 am to 11:00 am next Friday.,_you need to keep in mind,is,_,the activity will be held in our school from 8:00 am to 11:00 am next Friday.,What.is that.,What,that,主语从句,表语从句,para.2,2.,免费赠书,3.,目的：鼓励学生,Our school will give away books for free.,_(encourage)students to enjoy reading,our school will give away books for free.,To encourage,非谓语动词,to do,para.2,2.give a lecture,（,the lecture hall,）被动,A lecture will be given in the lecture hall.,It is in the lecture hall _ a lecture,will be given.,强调句（地点状语）,that,para.2,细节增加：这个活动是如此的有意义以至于,我们欢迎任何,喜欢阅读的,人。,The festival is so meaningful that we,welcome anyone _ is fond of reading.,So,meaningful is the festival,that,we,welcome anyone who is fond of reading.,定语从句,who,倒装,ending,para.3,诚意邀请,(1)Id appreciate it if you could come to our school on time.,(2)Im looking forward to your arrival/coming.,(3)I promise you wont regret if you come.,(4)I hope you could accept my sincere,invitation if its convenient for you.,(5)You are bound to enjoy it.,第一式：,倒装（,around the corner,so.that,）,第二式：同位语,第三式：名词性从句（,what.is that.,）,第四式：非谓语（,to do,作目的状语,）,第五式：强调句（,it isthat,）,第六式：,定语从句（由,who,引导修饰,anyone,）,第七式：状语从句（由,if,引导的条件状语从句,）,九阳真经之写作句式,Conclusion,famous,sayings,Just as a famous saying goes,.,(1)Knowledge is power.,(2)Its never too old to learn.,(3)Books are the ladder of human progress.,Thank You!,