灾难写作辅导(基础写作).ppt

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,灾难事件写作,某地发生了某事故,sth.,happened/broke out/occurred,in,+,地点,on+,时间,1.,表示战争、火灾、水灾、旱灾、地震、意外事故（如交通事故、空难等）的发生,.,1),A big fire,broke out,/,happened,/,occurred,in,An air crash,A war/flu,A traffic accident,练：,03,年,4,月中国广东及香港地区爆发“非典”。,The SARS,broke out,in,Guangdong and Hong Kong of China,in,April,2003.,2)An earthquake,hit,/,struck,/,shook,the district.,这地区受到地震的袭击。,某地发生了某事故,Sth.,hit/struck/shook,someplace,A big flood,A drought,A 8.0 magnitude earthquake,练：,2008,年,5,月,12,日约下午,2:28,四川汶川发生了,7.8,级的大地震。,A 7.8 magnitude earthquake,hit/struck,Wenchuan,Sichuan,around,2:28 p.m.,on,May 12,2008.,2.,表示事故起因：,词汇,:,be caused by/,be due to,the cause of,was,1),这起车祸起因于,驾驶疏忽,。,The traffic accident,was caused by,careless driving.,2),起火的原因是由于,疏忽,。,The cause of the fire was,carelessness.,3),这火灾是由于,有人丢落燃着的香烟,而引起的。,The fire,was due to,the fact that,someone dropped a lighted cigarette.,3.,表示人员伤亡：,词汇,:,be killed/be injured/be dead/,lose ones life/,cause great,economic losses,cause 13 deaths/injured/missing,练,2,：,1976,年,7,月,28,日中国唐山发生了,7.8,级的大地震,造成,24.2,万人死亡、超过,80,万人受伤、,30,，,000,人失踪及巨大经济损失,.,A 7.8 magnitude earthquake,hit,Tangshan,China,on,July 28,1976,causing,242,000,deaths,over 800,000,injured,30,000,missing,and,great economic losses,.,练,1,：成千上万的人在地震中丧生,。,Tens of thousands of people,were killed,/,lost their precious life,owing to/,in,the big earthquake.,4.,表示财产损失：,房屋受损,1),Many houses,were damaged,by,the,storm,.,became in ruins,in the storm.,fell down,in,.,道路堵塞,通讯、供水、供电中断：,The main roads,were blocked,.,Telecommunication,water and electricity,supply,were cut off,.,非谓语,:with+n.+adj./doing/done,练,1,：房屋倒塌，,整个唐山市顷刻间夷为平地,，道路受阻，全市通讯、供水、供电中断,.,The whole city,become in ruins,with,houses,falling down,roads,blocked,and telecommu,nication,water and electricity supply,cut off,.,练,2,：估计,这次雪灾,超过,5,百亿元,的损失,It is estimated that,the snow storm,has caused,a loss of,more than 50 billion yuan.,估计,造成,损失,It is estimated that,has caused,a,loss of/the damage of,.,5.,救援行动,词汇：,send sb to hospital;call in the police;,call an ambulance;donate/collect money to;,call on sb to do sth,International societies,offered their helping hands,shortly after the earthquake,donating,clothes,food and medicine.,2,）地震后，国际社会纷纷伸出援助之手,-,包括捐衣,服，食品和药物。,Fortunately,the injured people,were sent to hospital,without delay,.,1,）幸运的是，受伤的群众被立刻送去医院,.,3,）救援工作正在有序进行，与此同时，大家正在积极为灾区捐钱,。,The rescue work,is under way in good order,in the meanwhile,people,are actively donating,money,to,the disaster/stricken areas.,自然灾害 五句话作文,写得好的同学：,萧晓东,13,，张淑韵,12,，张伟麟,12,，周芷兰,12,，张慧瑜,11,，何绮伦,10,，陈美玉,10,，萧沛添,10,，袁浩鹏,10,，萧俊豪,10,进步较大的同学：,周嘉宇，萧沛添，莫启江，莫韵瑶，吴铭波,书写亟需改进的同学：,林景朗，史永新，韩立康，萧俊豪，袁建朗，蔡泳威，雷楚烨，秦杰至，郭冠迪，黄志亮,逗号和句号没写清：,萧泳发，李应初,假如你是校报的学生记者，请你以下列内容写一篇关于甘肃舟曲泥石流,(Landslide),的报道,:,发生时间：,2010,年,8,月,7,日夜,22,点左右,发生地点：甘肃舟曲,县,（,county,）,受灾情况：,1.,约,1254,人遇难，,490,余人失踪；,2.,舟曲县内三分之二的地方被水淹没，一个,300,余户的村庄被泥石流掩埋；,3.,房屋倒塌，交通受阻，电力供应中断,经济损失：估计超过四百亿元,目前情况：灾区应急救援已经结束，,灾后重建,(reconstruction),工作正在有序进行。,五句话作文,A severe landslide,hit,Zhouqu county in Gansu Province,around,22:00 p.m.,on,August 7th,2010,causing,about 1,254,deaths,and over 490,missing,.,Two thirds of,the county was flooded and a village with 300 homes was buried.,Moreover,the disaster,resulted in,the destruction of hundreds of buildings,traffic problems and the shortage of electricity supply.,It is estimated that,the landslide,has caused a loss of,more than 40 billion yuan.,At present,the rescue work has been over,and,the reconstruction work after the disaster is,under way in good order,.,A severe landslide,hit,Zhouqu county in Gansu Province,around,22:00 p.m.,on,August 7th,2010,causing,about 1,254,deaths,and over 490,missing,.Two thirds of the county was flooded and a village with 300 homes was buried.,Moreover,the disaster,resulted in,the destruction of hundreds of buildings,traffic problems and the shortage of electricity supply,.,It is estimated that,the landslide,has caused a loss of,more than 40 billion yuan.At present,the rescue work has been over,and,the reconstruction work after the disaster is,under way in good order,.,