高考书面表达指导(二).ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,高三书面表达技能指导（二）,writing,月考作文,：,请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，写一篇英语短文。,“,Goodhealthisthefoundationofahappylife,“Healthiswealth,（财富）,!”,无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；词数为,120,左右。,观点、立足点,要求,审题：,1.,本文不同于前面写到的议论文，没有规定具体要写的要点，也就是说，这篇文章给了更多空间让大家发挥。但若审题不当，必然出现较大偏差。,2.,但其实可以看出要写好这类文章，关键是对那两句名言的理解和加工。,3.,本文并未给出文章的开头，需要自己来写，那么首段的写法，要尤其注意：点题、切题。,4.,内容上来看，要求必须结合生活中的一个事例，来说明。,Goodhealthisthefoundationofa happylife.,Healthiswealth!,Health is very important,In order to get wealth,some people sacrifice his health.,health,wealth,more important,Para 1:your point of view,Para 2:an example/an affair,Pare 3:a conclusion,Which is more important,health or wealth?Not until I witnessed my uncles real life did I realize that health is of more importance.,Devoted to his business,my uncle,a successful businessman,worked from morning till night every day with no spare time to relax himself.He often said:“I must earn much money so that I can get whatever I want.”As a consequence,he was seriously ill.Rich as he was,he could do nothing but lie in the hospital bed.,So I think health is more important than wealth.People can do nothing if they are always in poor health,let alone live happily.Whether we are rich or not,we can not ignore the importance of health.,高考作文：,你校正在进行”英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（,quote,）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：”,Your future depends on many things but mostly on you”,：请按下列要求用英语写一篇,100-120,个词的短文：,1.,针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；,2.,举例说明理由,注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）,In the English Reading Week,one of my classmates recommended a quote to us,which goes like this:“Your future depends on many things,but mostly on you.,In the English Reading Week,one of m classmates recommended a quote to us which goes like this:“Your future depends on many things but mostly on you.“I cant agree more with this view.Its true that our future is determined by many things,such as opportunities and help from others,but our own attitude,determination,and hard work play a more important role.In other words,we are the master of our own future.,Take Abraham Lincoln,for example.He was born in a poor family,and only received a limited education in his childhood.Yet through his painstaking efforts,he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America.Even to this day,Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world.Therefore,I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.,