高考必备写作人物描写课件(共28张PPT).pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2019/4/12 Friday,#,高考必备写作,人物描写,技法指导,人物描写,属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。,时态的选择要视情况而定，,若写人物的过去就用过去时态，,若写人物的现在就用现在时态。,事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。,1,生平介绍。人物的出生时间和地点是必不可少的信息；介绍生平时要尊重客观事实，材料要真实。,2,事迹叙述。选材要着眼于人物的生活背景及其成就事迹，以形成对比，起到突出人物的特点和树立榜样的作用。选材要有重点，不必面面俱到。,3,简短的评论。对所描述的人物的评论要客观公正。,英语描写人之常用词（一）相貌体型,外貌,Physical Appearance,描述身材常用的形容词有,:,tall,small,short,of medium height,描述体型的有,:,fat,thin,slim,big,small,of medium build,strong,等,.,描述相貌的有,:,beautiful,pretty,good-looking,charming,sweet,handsome,funny,ugly,peculiar,rough,ill-looking,体格（,build,）,:,fat,肥胖的,;thin,瘦的,;slim,苗条的,;overweight,超重,;slight,瘦小的,;well-built,身材魁梧,身高（,height,）,medium height,中等身材,;,average height,一般身材,;,below average,低于平均身高,;,tall,高的,;short,矮的,;tallish,有些高的,;,middle-sized,身高中等的,;,of medium height,中等身材,;,1.78 meters,身高,1.78,米。,英语描写人之常用词（二）五官,在用英语描写面部容貌的时候，可以从脸型、头发、五官入手。,脸型（,face,）,:,round,圆的,;thin,瘦的,;long,长的,;square,方的。,A.She eats too much these days,so her face is getting round.,她最近吃得太多了，所以她的脸变圆了。,头发（,hair,）,:,发型（,hair style,）,:,straight,直的,;curly,卷发的,;pigtails,辫子,;crew cut,平头,;bald,秃头的。,A.Her hair is brown and curly.,她有着一头棕色而卷曲的头发,发色,(hair color):,jet-black,乌黑的,;,fair,金色的,;,blonde,淡黄色的,;,golden,金黄色的,;,dyed,染色的,;,brunette,浅黑色的,;,chestnut,栗色的,.,五官,:(1),眼睛（,eye,）,:,deep-set,深陷的,;,sunken,凹陷的,;,bulging/protruding,凸出的,;,eyelashes,睫毛,;,eyebrows,眉毛,.,Eg:.He had the most beautiful blue eyes I had ever seen.,她有一双我从未见过的漂亮蓝眼睛。,2),鼻子,(nose):,long,长的,;straight,挺直的,;,big,大的,;small,小的,;,flat,扁平的,;hooked,钩状的,.,Eg:.His nose is very big,so he doesn;t like it.,他的鼻子很大，所以他不喜欢它。,(3),嘴部,(mouth):,tooth,牙齿,;,even,整齐的,;,uneven,不整齐的,;,chin,下巴。,A.When he laughs,we see his even teeth.,当他笑的时候，我们看见他有一口整齐的牙齿。,B.She has a double chin.,她有双下巴。,服饰（,dress,）,:,smart,潇洒的,;scruffy,邋遢的；,well-dressed,衣着华丽的,;,casual,随便的,;conservative,不显眼的,;elegant,优雅的,;fashionable,时髦的,;,suave,文雅的,;untidy,不整洁的,.,A.He looks casual just wearing a tweed suit.,他穿了一件花格子衬衫，看上去很随便。,英语描写人词句（三）服饰神情,笑容（,smile,）,:,bright,欢快的,;charming,可爱的,;,happy,高兴的,;pleasant,令人愉快的,;,sad,伤心的,;sweet,甜蜜的,;,pleased,满意的,;,smirking,傻笑的,;,friendly,友好的,;warm,温暖的，热情的,;,cold,不热情的,.,A.Because of his high scores,he smiles brightly.,因为他得了高分，所以笑得很灿烂。,B.A friendly smile will help you to win others heart.,友好的笑容能帮助你赢得别人的心。,黄金表达,1,Li Yue is always warmhearted and ready to help us whenever we are in need of help,每当我们需要帮助时，李越总是热心肠，乐于帮助我们。,2,We think that she deserves to be recognized as“Star Student of the Week”,我们认为她理应被授予,“,每周之星,”,。,3,During her career life,she obtained 132 championships,including 4 Olympic championships,4,She is an ordinarylooking girl,but her kindness and consideration impress me most,她是个相貌平平的女孩，但是她的善良和体贴给我留下了深刻的印象。,5,When he was still a boy,he showed great interest in literature,从童年时代起，他就对文学表现出了极大的兴趣。,6,His stories,most of which are short ones,give people surprising endings,他的小说大多数为短篇小说，结尾往往让人出乎意料。,7,He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers,他,/,她擅长英语口语，计算机娴熟。,8,Her story tells us that we should value what we have,and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life,她的故事告诉我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的东西，努力克服生活中的任何困难。,牛刀小试,范文演练,姓名,简,古道尔博士,研究,领域,著名的野生动物研究专家，尤其在研究黑猩猩方面,性格,谦虚、坦诚、考虑周到,主要,事迹,1,童年时代，碰巧看到一本名叫泰山和杜拉德博士的书。受到极大鼓舞，打算研究动物,2,那个时代，妇女受到歧视，但妈妈支持她,3,20,世纪,60,年代，简动身去非洲研究黑猩猩，用了,25,年多的时间观察和记录黑猩猩的日常活动，完全弄懂了它们的行为,成就,1,成立了几个组织，发起一项保护动物的运动,2,在世界各地演讲，呼吁年轻一代参加,“,根与芽,”,活动,3,被授予了多个奖项,题目要求,参考词汇：,泰山和杜拉德博士,TarzanandDrDoolittle;,“,根与芽,”“Shoot and Root”,三步作文法,第一步：搜索单元词汇,1,谦虚的,modest,2,坦诚,outspoken,3,考虑周到,considerate,4,看不起,look,_,down,_,on,5,支持,support,6,行为,behaviour,7,发表演讲,deliver,_,speeches,8,项目,project,第二步：巧用单元语法和句型,(,一,),完成句子,1,简,古道尔博士是著名的野生动物研究专家，尤其在研究黑猩猩方面。,Dr Jane Goodall,is,_,a,_,famous,_,specialist,in studying wild animals,especially in chimps,2,童年时代，她碰巧看到一本名叫,泰山和杜拉德博士,的书。,In her childhood,she,came,_,across,_,a,_,book,_,called,TarzanandDrDoolittle,by,_,chance,3,她受到了极大鼓舞，打算将来研究动物。,She was greatly inspired by it and,intended,_,to,_,study,animals one day,4,20,世纪,60,年代，简动身去非洲研究黑猩猩，在那里她用了,25,年多的时间观察和记录黑猩猩的日常活动，完全弄懂了它们的行为。,In the 1960s,Jane,moved,_,off,to Africa to study chimps,where,she spent over 25 years,observing,and recording their daily activities,5,成立了几个组织并发起了一项保护动物的运动让她世界闻名。,Setting up several organizations and launching a campaign to protect animals,have,_,made,_,her,_,famous,all over the world,6,这就是简,古道尔，由于突出成绩她获得了许多奖项。,Such,is Jane Goodall,who,is awarded many prizes for her great achievements,(,二,),根据所给要求，用以上句子完成句式升级,升级一：用,a famous specialist,作同位语改写句,1,Dr,_,Jane,_,Goodall,_,a,_,famous,_,specialist,_,studies,_,wild,_,animals,_,especially,_,in,_,chimps,升级二：用,which,引导的定语从句替换句,2,中的,called,TarzanandDrDoolittle,In,_,her,_,childhood,_,she,_,came,_,across,_,a,_,book,_,which,_,is,_,called,_,Tarzan,_,and,_,Dr,_,Doolittle,_,by,_,chance,升级三：用含有,inspired,的过去分词短语改写句,3,Greatly,_,inspired,_,by,_,it,_,Jane,_,intended,_,to,_,study,_,animals,_,one,_,day,升级四：用,award,的过去分词短语作定语改写句,6,Such,_,is,_,Jane,_,Goodall,_,awarded,_,many,_,prizes,_,for,_,her,_,great,_,achievements,第三步：连接过渡成篇,Dr Jane Goodall,a famous specialist,studies wild animals,especially in,chimps,She is a,modest,outspoken,and,considerate,woman,In her childhood,she,came across,a book,which is called,TarzanandDrDoolittle,by chance,Greatly,inspired,by it,Jane,intended to study,animals one day,At that time,women were often,looked down on,and only her mother,supported,her decision,In the 1960s,Jane,moved off,to Africa to study chimps,where she spent over 25 years,observing,and recording their daily activities and fully understood chimp,behaviour,Setting up several organizations and launching a,campaign,to protect animals have made her famous all over the world.,In recent years,Jane has,delivered speeches,all over the world to call on younger,generations,to take part in her,project,“Shoot and Root”,Such is Jane Good,awarded,many prizes for her great,achievements,