怎样写好论文英文摘要.ppt

单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,怎样写好论文英文摘要？,闵应骅,美国电机电子工程师协会院士,(IEEE Fellow),1,提要,为什么要写硕士学位论文？,摘要多么重要,?,摘要应包括什么内容,?,英文摘要,某些摘要实例分析,结论,2,为什么要写硕士学位论文？,一种写作的锻炼,整理思路,做学问、做工程、做开发都需要,3,计算机工程研究主要的几种类型：,新概念,模型化,新方法,理论推导,实验研究,系统设计与实现,一定要有结果,4,摘要多么重要,?,摘要最吸引眼球,检索者,审稿人,华罗庚谈学习方法：,“由薄到厚”,“由厚到薄”,5,拷贝“项目背景”作为摘要？,6,摘要应包括什么内容,?,研究动机,本文的,贡献,工作量,实验结果,主要结论,几句话概括全文！,7,PRESENTATION,An IEEE paper presentation requirements include the following.,a).Is the abstract an appropriate and adequate digest of the work presented?,b).How readable is the paper for a computer scientist or engineer who is not a specialist in this particular field?,8,Readability,_,Readable with ordinary effort,_ Paper is self-contained,but considerable effort is needed,_ If the definitions of certain concepts,terms and symbols were included,readability would be improved,9,Motivation?,10,题目的翻译,城域宽带网资源管理系统的设计和实现,Design and realizing,of the land broadband network resource,administrative,system,of city,Design and realizing?,Administrative?,Of city?,Design and Implementation of a resource administration system for Broadband Metropolitan Area networks,11,一些例子（1）,This thesis based on Client/Server model,the cable broadband network resource management system is based on large network and database development category of new production systems that address network load as a result of a sharp increase in network resource management problems.,Not understandable!,12,一些例子（,2,）,a,After carefully studying the inner structure and real applications of COMDCOM and ActiveX,this paper:Brings out an new Query interface function based on Hash algorithm,which can effectively improve the efficient of current algorithm;Brings out intelligent interface class,which can mask the problems that brought out by forgetting using the Release functions;Compares.Then brings out an which can make full use;Finally,realized an.,bring someone out,13,评论,尽量用简单句,名词还是形容词,名词尽量用复数,an new?,14,一些例子（,3,）,and,Digital watermarking is all kinds of information which can be embedded into multimedia data,just as digits,serial numbers,text,image symbols,so it can be used in copyright protection,marker production,covert communication,data ownership confirmation,data authentication.As digital texts are used on a wide scale,it is of theoretical and practical meanings to research text watermarking as one of applied spheres of digital watermarking.,15,评论,用,a,还是,the?,两句之间的,and,16,一些例子（,4,）,The rapid development of WWW and internet brings out new requirement to the software engineering,distributed object computing model and its application technology research become the important research projects.,A or s,?,A or s,Whose?,S?,?,17,评论,用,a,还是,the?,两句之间的,and,18,With the popularization and development of computer network,it has become absolutely necessarily to our daily life.We need not only,sharing,information ,but also,operating,secure,business-critical affairs over the public networks,using,it to transfer confidential information(such as bank account,credit card number,customers personal info etc.).,一些例子（,5,）,What?,?,and,X,19,评论,And,前后要并列,逗号后一个空格，句号后二个空格。,20,Due to the coming of information times,computer systems act more importantly in human lives.Its important to research its reliability and security.System-level Fault Diagnosis(SLFD)diagnoses computer systems to make them fault-tolerant.,一些例子（,6,）,age,用词,用词,含义,21,评论,用词欠妥，多参考英、美人的文章,22,Group Algorithm(GA)is a major SLFD algorithm.We,analyze GAs characterization,modify it by using parallel method(instead of serial method),to searching groups,.Improve its performance;then,we research major probabilistic diagnosis algorithms,analyze and compare their characterizations,especially,Soman,&,Agrawal,algorithm.,一些例子（,7,）,与,Genetics Algorithm,混同,X,characterize the GA,?,X,?,23,评论,动词和动名词,to do something,approach to doing something,looking forward to meeting you,24,On the conclusions of the above discussing,we,detailedly,anatomize and compare the multithreading architecture of the CORBA,ORBs,after deeply,discuss and,analyse,the WAI frame,based Java and CORBA,and we propose an improved multithreading architecture whose performance is simulated and evaluated.,一些例子（,8,）,WAI,（Web-based application integrating)?,X,无,主语,?,?,在计算机文章中很少用,(,解剖,),25,评论,不要自造词,“,detailedly,”XXX,“repeatedly”OK,缩写（,abbreviation),少自造,第一次出现时说明,26,The work of Researching and Designing Proxy software has very important value.,Various access restriction techniques in Internet,is,discussed.,一些例子（,9,）,Chinglish,?,X,27,评论,动词的使用，多参考别人的文章,The paper presents something.,The paper proposes some approach to something.,The paper introduces some new concepts.,The paper gives some solution to some problem.,28,With the appearance of IDB(Image,DataBase,),the problem how to manage efficiently and retrieve quickly the image information,has,beening,the research hot pot,at home and oversea,.This paper,analyse,the development of the CBIE(content-based image retrieval)technology,at present,.After having,studyed,and mastered the research achievement,we launch our research on.,一些例子（,10,）,Studied(reviewed),加,s,X,?,Adj.,29,评论,尽量少用第一人称,一般都用现在时,用过去时或现在完成时就要有时间副词,30,Fasle sharing is one of the most important factors impacting the performance of DSM(distributed shared memory)system,single-writer approach is simple,but it cannot avaid the ping-pong effect of the data page thrashing,while multiple-writer appraoch is effective for false sharing but the cost is high.,一些例子（,11,）,the,.,But,s,.W,.,The,on.,False?,31,Evaluation results show that for some applications such as,SOR,LU,FFT,and IS,LMW,provides a significant reduction in execution time(11%,16%,33%,and 46%)compared with the traditional multiple-writer appr,o,a,ch on the platform.,一些例子（1,2,）,主语？,respectively?,缩写？,32,评论,缩写决不能乱用。,33,结论,多看多学别抄,尽量用简单句,每一个简单句必须有一个，而且只有一个谓语动词。,论文要有新东西。,论文要有实验结果。,可读性,34,