TOEFL 写作 L1.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,TOEFL,写作,Debut,长沙新东方骨干教师,FC,www.taisha.org,一,.The importance of writing,Reading,maketh,a full man,conference a ready man,and writing an exact man.,-FrancisBacon,PS,RL,WS,Their importance outweighs that of GRE and TOEFL.,二,.General Introduction to IBT Writing,Part One:Integrated Writing,Time Limit:20 min,Reading:3min/230-300words,Listening:2min/230-300words,Word Range:150-225,Recommended:250-300,Possible Logic Relation:Support or Reject,Test-takers Opinions:,1.,逻辑异常清楚,extraordinarily,2.,实际上就是一个听力问题,:,得听力者得天下,Complexities in Logic,R:WL,是个好人,TS1:,长得帅,+SD1:Ladies are fascinated by his muscle.,TS2:,词汇量大,+SD2:,看电影不用查字典,TS3:,对老婆好,+SD3:,从不理睬其他,ladies,Sample Question:School Uniform,Is your listening ready for IBT?,Part Two:Independent Writing,Time Limit:30 min,Word Range:300+,Recommended:Minimum350,Preferably 400+,三,.Scoring Criteria:,1.,保底模式,:3+3=20,2.,希望模式,:3+4=22,3.,冲奖模式,:4+4=25,4.,大牛模式,:4+5=28,四,.Strategy:,备考战略,1.,打字训练,You ask me,I ask who?,Green plum and bamboo horse,毅力,:,Persistence+fortitude,势力,:Influential force,2.Expand your horizon and enrich your knowledge,TV DAILY,Vertical Reading,Horizontal Reading,Merits:,“Much of the Gulf Coast Is Crippled After Storm”,1.Expand your horizon,2.Equip yourself with new words,The environment and biodiversity have been severely destroyed/demolished/devastated.,3.Enrich your“Celebrity Name”List,3.185pool:Think Tank,P.S,张红岩,:10,天搞定,TOEFL,作文,(,买,!),李笑来,:TOEFL IBT,高分作文,(,下,!),(,官方啼哭范文大全,),胡敏,:,任何一本,TOEFL,写作,(,买或下,!),其他手头任何综合训练的独立写作部分,新东方,IBT,网络课堂,词汇：任治远 托福授课经验：,6,年阅读：张洪伟 托福授课经验：,7,年听力：金鑫 托福授课经验：,5,年口语：翟少成 托福授课经验：,7,年写作：戴云 托福授课经验：,7,年,is traditional Chinese virtue to,shoulder the responsibility,of taking care of our aged parents.,Respecting,the aged is an,unshirkable,obligation for we Chinese people.,4).,取其菁华,去其糟粕,取,?,去,?,Absorb/take/learn from,Abandon/discard/ignore/consciously resist,5).08,年大作文,Crutch?,Golden Rules:,第一秒写不出,第二秒换说法,写作是用英语表达你的想法,绝对不是对中文的,逐字,翻译,!,练习,:,1).,乱收费,不合理收费,unreasonable charge/cost,还不会的,=,没有经过学生同意来收钱,:the universities ask students to pay without their agreement.,2).,大学扩招,增加上学机会,increase/expand the chances of education,3).,你对我很重要,You are to me what water is to fish.,Cherry bloom in the March,Plato beyond my touch,What a melancholy flower,What a sentimental power,Remember that for years,Remember that with tears,春花乱心窗,古圣空行囊,少年辗转事,每忆总神伤,-FC,5.,语言多样化,VarietyMonotony,Seven Cardinal Sins:,1).more and more,(1)adv:Chinese people are increasingly affluent.,(2)adj:A growing number/amount of people,2).in my opinion,As far as I am concerned,From where I stand,From my perspective,Based on what I know,To my knowledge,3).,好,Good-beneficial-positive-salubrious,促进,/,对,.,有益,/,积极正面影响,/,4).,坏,Bad-harmful-negative-adverse-detrimental-deleterious-pernicious,削弱,/,对,.,有害,/,破坏,/,消极负面影响,5).,重要,(1)A is important to B.,Essential/significant/crucial/critical/vital/indispensable,Fundamental/decisive,(2)A plays an XXX role/part in B.,变体,:The role that computers play in our daily life is indispensable.,(3).A is of great/primary/amazing importance/significance to B.,(4).B can not live/develop/grow/survive/without A.,6).very,Extremely,Extraordinarily,Exceptionally,Exceedingly,Pretty?,7).,带来,造成,Bring about,Give rise to,Lead to,Contribute to,五,.Accumulate,FC:the exemplification,Nothing,has,ever,equaled,the,magnitudeandspeedwithwhichthe,humanspeciesisalteringthephysicalandchemicalworldanddemolishing,theenvironment.,浅背诵,深默写,1.,看懂结构,找出主谓宾,2.,熟读,X,遍,3.,自己写,4.,对比分析找差距,有时间且认定英语终身的人,:,背文章,没时间且急切提高写作水平的人,:,默句子,默什么句子,?,1.,大神,:GRE,阅读,2.,大牛,:TOEFL,阅读,3.,小牛,:4,6,级阅读,4.,小小牛,:TOEFL,写作范文,Oath,从今天起,我要改变我的命运,从今天起,我要做牛人,从今天起,我要每天背单词,X,小时,从今天起,我要每天积累好的表达和句子,从今天起,我要生活在积极和希望之中,从今天起,我要彻底摆脱我的拖延和迟疑,老子就是金山词霸,痛苦只是一次,幸福却是永恒,