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连俊霞俊霞国内考国内考试部部北京新北京新东方学校方学校考研写作攻略考研写作攻略1.书信写作满分策略格式和语域恰当：一半分数拿到；包含所有内容：再加一分；使用正确语法结构和词汇：再加二分；文字连贯、层次清晰：再加二分；附加分：书写整齐语域：正式使用礼貌表达，不用缩略语(对公)半正式可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私2008)非正式（省略号）考试不用2024/4/22 周一2.一、书信类应用文写作1.1 注意事项（英语一）Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.（英语二）Use“Zhang Wei”instead.Do not write the address.写作时允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词，但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。如影响交际，产生歧义或难以看懂，分数将降低一个档次。2024/4/22 周一3.一、书信类应用文写作1.2 书信格式 903 Elm St.Liberty,Ohio 80701 December 18,2009Dr.Walt WhitmanChairman,Department of PhysicsPennsylvania State UniversityUniversity Park,Pa.16802Dear Dr.Whitman,Sincerely yours,Li Ming.称呼（称呼（顶头写），写），正文（空正文（空Dear），落），落款（靠右写）款（靠右写）2024/4/22 周一4.1.2 书信格式1.2.1 称呼格式不知道对方姓名：To Whom It May Concern，Dear Sir or Madam，(一定男女搭配)知道对方姓名，（对公）Dear Mr.Green，Dear Mrs.Bush，Dear Miss Wang，Dear Ms.Li，（对私）Dear Bob，Dear Lucy，熟人，题目中无姓名 Dear friend，Dear Bob/Tom，启示：称呼后面用逗号，首字母大写(or 例外)2024/4/22 周一5.1.2 书信格式1.2.2 落款格式To Whom It May Concern，I am writing to Sincerely yours，Li Ming启示：Sincerely yours,万能用 Li Ming/Zhang Wei后面没有点.2024/4/22 周一6.一、书信类应用文写作1.3 书信三点式（1）写作目的段细化段重申或者期待段总：8句；长句：3句左右（2）已考信函类别：辞职信(2005)；申请信(2006)；道歉信(2008)；建议信(2007&2009)；感谢信(2010英语二)；推荐信（2011）；祝贺信（2011英语二）2024/4/22 周一7.1.3 书信三点式1.3.1 写作目的常用表达(1)直入主题 I am writing to(inform you that)(2)自我介绍 As a student of our university/a citizen,I am writing to(inform you that)1.3.2 细化段注意事项(1)包含所有内容（背景改写，题目要求）(2)层次清楚first,second,(3)两个左右复杂句2024/4/22 周一8.1.3 书信三点式1.3.3 重申或期待段(1)表示感谢：Thank you for your time and consideration.(2)重申主题：I am sorry again for all the inconvenience caused.Thank you again for your hospitality.(3)表示期待：I am looking forward to your earliest reply/hearing from you soon.I am looking forward your proper solution to this problem.2024/4/22 周一9.一、书信类应用文写作1.4 书信写作步骤审题确定称呼，信件类别，内容要求书写称呼与答题纸上开始写作内容全部覆盖（背景&要求）不忘落款Sincerely yours,检查2024/4/22 周一10.2009年Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions.“White pollution”is still going on.Write a letter to the editor(s)of your local newspaper to1)give your opinions briefly and2)make two or three suggestions背景改写：The use of plastic bags has been restricted since June 1,2008,but the result is not that good/satisfying.In other words,“White Pollution”is not stopped radically.背景背景要求要求1要求要求2被被动改写改写称呼称呼建建议信信2024/4/22 周一11.2009年书信框架Dear Editors,/To Whom It May Concern,As a citizen,I am writing to express my opinion about“White Pollution”.细化（题目背景改写，建议内容）Thank you for your time and consideration.I am looking forward to your earliest reply.Sincerely yours,Li Ming34words.2024/4/22 周一12.2009范文Dear Editor,Im a sincere reader of your newspaper and I like your discussion of the social problems.Now I want to give some opinions of myself about the White Pollution.As we know,regulation was made to solve the problem in June 1st of 2008.The use of plastic bags was restricted in the supermarket and many other shops freely.At the beginning,it was carried on well,but now I found plastic bags were used in some small shops for free or with no pay.regular/loyalonfor freefindare背景改写背景改写2024/4/22 周一13.2009年范文 I am writing to tell you that we should solve this problem soon with the help of your newspaper.You could make some investigators about it and write some reports of it,so as to appeal to all the peoples attentions of our society.Sincerely yours,Li Ming格式正确覆盖所有内容使用衔接手段词汇与语法正确investigation.两点建两点建议2024/4/22 周一14.2011年（英语一）Write a letter to a friend of yours to1)recommend one of your favorite movies and2)give reasons for your recommendation.Your should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.User“Li Ming”instead.Do not writer the address.(10 points)2024/4/22 周一15.2011年书信框架Dear friend/Bob，I am writing to recommend a wonderful movie to you“Forrest Gump”.I bet you will love it.I hope you like it,and look forward to your early reply.Sincerely yours,Li Ming 36words2024/4/22 周一16.2011年范文Dear friend/Bob，I am writing to recommend a wonderful movie to you“Forrest Gump”.I bet you will love it.I would like to share the amazing film with you in that:First,its plot is great and meaningful,especially the part that Forrest never stops doing what he likes and achieves the final success;目的目的亲近近原因原因1：情：情节2024/4/22 周一17.2011年范文;second,to tell the truth,I was moved by the movie to tears because of his mothers selfless sacrifice for her boy,which reminds me of practicing filial piety to repay my parents for their devotion to my birth and growth.I hope you like it,and look forward to your early reply.Sincerely yours,Li Ming114words原因原因2：感人且教育：感人且教育定从定从期待期待2024/4/22 周一18.2011年（英语二）Suppose your cousin Li Ming has just been admitted to a university.Write him/her a letter to(1)congratulate him/her;and(2)Give him some advice for the college life.Your should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.User“Zhang Wei”instead.Do not writer the address.(10 points)2024/4/22 周一19.201英语二书信框架Dear Li Ming,I am writing to congratulate you on your graduation from high school and entering Peking University,one of the top universities in China.Congratulations to you again.And I wish you good luck in the pursuit of a higher academic degree.Sincerely yours,47words Zhang Wei2024/4/22 周一20.范文Dear Li Ming,I am writing to congratulate you on your graduation from high school and entering Peking University,one of the top universities in China.Your family and I are so proud of you for what you have got,and you deserve all of this on basis of your previous hard work.Furthermore,college is a new beginning and a chance to make further improvement of yourself and your experience.2024/4/22 周一21.Hence,it is advisable to cherish the time to study and enjoy with your friends.Besides,try to participate in some college and social activities to enhance your life experience.Congratulations to you again.And I wish you good luck in the pursuit of a higher academic degree.Sincerely yours,Zhang Wei 122words2024/4/22 周一22.书信写作总结1.1 注意事项”Li Ming”“Zhang Wei”1.2 书信格式称呼，落款1.3 书信三点式写信目的段，细化段，重申或期待段，范文解析2024/4/22 周一23.二、摘要写作2.1 摘要写作格式Abstract This article focuses on main reasons that account for the rapid globalization since 1950s XXXX1.标题必必须有，有，首字母大写首字母大写2.文文章章不不分分段段3.落款落款必必须无无2024/4/22 周一24.二、摘要写作2.2 摘要写作内容（1）总This article focuses on This passage emphasizes This paper provides an overview of（2）分段意总结（注意过渡：first，second）（3）总总结全文（首尾呼应）In all,this essay makes a specific analysis of.2024/4/22 周一25.二、摘要写作2.3 摘要写作注意事项（1）短句为主（2）第三人称为主（3）现在时为主2.4 摘要写作步骤（1）写标题以免答题时忘记（2）找段意段首句或尾句（3）中翻英以句子动词为核心，主谓宾顺序翻译（4）加过渡句子之间逻辑关系2024/4/22 周一26.二、摘要写作2.5 实践写作大纲样题（1）标题Fundamental Causes of Economic Globalization（2）段意1全球化的技术基础。（3）段意2全球化的经济基础。a.市场经济体制成为各国发展经济的首选；b.力量不断壮大的跨国公司成为经济全球化的中坚力量；c.国际经济组织是经济全球化发展的组织保障。2024/4/22 周一27.范文解析Abstract/Fundamental Causes of Economic Globalization This article focuses on main reasons that account for the rapid globalization since the early 1950s.To conclude,there are two factors,and one is the technical foundation,the other the economic foundation.2024/4/22 周一28.In addition,the latter one is specified in the following three aspects.First,market economy system has been the preferred choice for countries all around the world.Second,the ever-growing multinational corporations have been the pillar of the globalization2024/4/22 周一29.Finally,international economic organizations,like WTO,IMF and WB,play an organic safeguard role in the globalization.106words2024/4/22 周一30.二、摘要写作4.1 摘要写作格式4.2 摘要写作内容4.3 摘要写作注意事项4.4 摘要写作步骤4.5 摘要写作实践2024/4/22 周一31.革命尚未成功，革命尚未成功，我我们需更需更强大，大，我我们必必须强大。大。2024/4/22 周一32.