私家车 广东英语基础写作讲评.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,作文评讲,基础写作：,目前城市交通日益拥堵。请就这一话题写一篇短文，分析原因并提出建议。,写作内容：,1,背景：,20,世纪末,21,世纪初，越来越多的中国家庭开始购买私家车；,2009,年一年内中国机动车的数量增加了,1300,万辆。,2,原因：私家车为出行带来了便利，很多人有能力购买：,3,现状：不断恶化的城市交通和频繁的堵车。,4.,建议：政府提供更便宜、更方便的公共交通系统，鼓励人们乘坐公交车。,要求：用,5,个句子表达所给内容；,将,5,个句子组成连贯的短文,1.20,世纪末,21,世纪初,at the end of the 20th century and the beginning of 21st century,in the late 1900s and early 2000s,2.,越来越多的中国家庭开始购买私家车,More and more families in China buy/purchase private cars.,3.2009,年一年内中国机动车的数量增加了,1300,万辆,the total number of vehicles,increase by,4.,私家车为出行带来了便利，很多人有能力购买：,make it more convenient to move around,can afford to buy private cars,5.,不断恶化的城市交通和频繁的堵车,worsen the traffic problem,traffic jams/traffic congestion,6.,政府提供更便宜、更方便的公共交通系统，鼓励人们乘坐公交车,provide a cheaper and more convenient public transport system,encourage people to take buses/ride buses,With more and more Chinese families in China purchasing private cars in the late 1900s and early 2000s,traffic problems have arisen in big cities.,或者,More and more Chinese families in China purchasing private cars in the late 1900s and early 2000s,because they can afford them and it is convenient for them to drive cars.,In 2009,the total number of vehicles increased by more than 13,000,000 in China,which worsened the traffic problems/which gave rise to a series of problems/which brought about a series of problems.,There is no doubt that/It goes without saying that private cars bring people convenience when they go out.,But with too many cars,the streets seem too narrow and there are always traffic jams during rush hours.,或者,However,the ever-increasing number of cars has also given rise to a series of problems.For example,too many cars have caused traffic jams.,5.I think/From my point of view/In my opinion the government should provide a cheaper and more convenient public transportation system to encourage people to take buses/ride buses.,范文：,With more and more Chinese families in China purchasing private cars in the late 1900s and early 2000s,traffic problems have arisen in big cities.In 2009,the total number of vehicles increased by more than 13,000,000 in China,which worsened the traffic problems/which gave rise to a series of problems/which brought about a series of problems.People buy private cars in the late 1900s and early 2000s,because they can afford them and it is convenient for them to drive cars.,But with too many cars,the streets seem too narrow and there are always traffic jams during rush hours.5.I think/From my point of view/In my opinion the government should provide a cheaper and more convenient public transportation system to encourage people to take buses/ride buses.,