Writing读报.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,To A7,书面表达,_,对比观点题型,同步导学,P55,By Yang Shu,书面表达,随着信息技术的不断发展，,传统的靠读报获取信息的方式逐渐被电视、网络所取代,。对此你们学校开展了题为,“,Views on Newspapers,”,的社会调查。请你根据下表中的提示给某中学英语报投稿，客观介绍调查情况，并,简单陈述你的看法,。,45%,的人喜欢读报,55%,的人不喜欢读报,1.,不受时间限制，方便,2.,阅读使人思考，有利于智力的提高,3.,可以随个人兴趣获取信息,1.,不够生动,2.,信息传递速度相对较慢。,注意：,1.,短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。,2,。词数：,150,左右,成绩统计,:,李慧 陈倩倩 荀洁 张春雪 刁品巧 刘晴,书写较好,夏玲艳 吕琳 于素雯 乐银王雯 刘云洁 童佳 钱婷 杨晔,亮点,的一般标准：,在,表达准确、,保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇,;,恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑,;,适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇,尽量避免重复和单调。,找亮点,;,下评语,书面表达典型错误呈现,1.,标点符号和大小写,标点位置不规范,(,右下角,),逗号句号不分（,，,.,）,随处打点,大小写不分（,c i m l o p s w,）,:,C,c,I,i,M,m,L,l,O,o,P,p,S,s,W,w,2.,审题：,随着信息技术的不断发展，传统的靠读报获取信息的方式逐渐被电视、网络所取代。,要点不全,/,要点重复,要点遗漏,要点重复,/,遗漏,45%,的人喜欢读报,55%,的人不喜欢读报,个人的观点,1.,不受时间限制，方便,2.,阅读使人思考，有利于智力的提高,3.,可以随个人兴趣获取信息,1.,不够生动,2.,信息传递速度相对较慢,周玲 徐元,除了表格内的内容外，本人的观点至少要写两点以上，,且要与所给的要点不同,。,审题时需弄清要点有哪些？,背景文字中的要点,在所给开头中是否已给出；,主体时态,:,一般过去时,一般现在时,单词,:,1.,convenent/convinent,（,奚诗婧 乐银,）,2.informations,（马扬 王丹丹）,3.benefical/benefited(,王雯,),5.active,生动的,convenient,information,adj,lively/,arrtactive,3.,词汇 和句型,的使用,beneficial,绝对不可数名词有哪些呢？,information,信息,advice,建议,progress,进步,fun,有趣的人或事、乐趣,furniture,家具,news,消息,如果你方便，请过来一下,!,（译）,2._ fun it is to play with snow in winter,！,What a B.How C.What D.How a,3.,这男孩这学期进步很大。,The boy has,made great progress,this term,。,Please come here if it is convenient for you!,C,练一练,固定短语及习惯用法,1.As far as Im considered,2.45%of people,3.On my opinion,4.In the one hand,5.Reading makes people thinking,concerned,45%of,the,people,In,On,think,make/let sb.doing,practice,1.70%,的学生,2.,依我看来,3.,阅读使人们思考。,4.,老师让我一直站着。,70%of the students,As far as Im concerned/,in my opinion,Reading makes people think.,Teacher had me standing.,主谓不一致,1.There is 45%of the students who like reading newspapers.,2.Reading also make people think.,3.Every coin have two sides.,are,makes,has,小试牛刀,All roads_(lead)to Rome.,Every road _(lead)to Rome.,Nowadays,many a student _(surf)the Internet for information.,The factory has 65 percent of the raw materials,the rest of which _ saved for other purposes.A.is B.are C.was D.were,（,2011.,安徽）,解析：句意“工厂用掉了,65%,的原材料，其余的留作他用”。,Which,引导非限制性定语从句，,which,指代,raw materials,，“,the rest+,名词”作主语,，谓语动词应与,of,后的名词保持一致,。再根据主句的时态，应该选,D,lead,leads,surfs,One-third of the country _covered with trees and the majority of the citizens_ black people.,A.is;are B.is;is C.are;are D.are;is(2011.,湖南,),解析：句意“三分之一的国土被树覆盖，大多数的市民是黑人,”,。,“,分数、百分数,+of+,名词,”,作主语，谓语动词应与,of,后的名词保持一致。答案应选,A,主语前后不一致,Reading,is beneficial,to improve peoples intelligence and,get,information by ones interests.,who?,Reading,is beneficial,to improve peoples intelligence.Moreover,people can,get,information based on their interests.,一句话包含多个动词（,杨岚,）,1.There,are,45%of the students,like,reading newspapers.,2.Reading,makes,people think,be,beneficial,improve,peoples intelligence,3.Information,delay,speed,is,comparatively slow.,who,and it is,to,The speed of information spread is comparatively slow.,句型单一,They think,It is,It can help,Reading can help,适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇,尽量避免重复和单调。,写作步骤：,1.,审题目,;,列要点,2.,组成句,;,套模板,连成篇,3.,纠错误,书写工整,卷面整洁,一,.,审题目,;,列要点,体裁,人称,时态,要点,段落,议论文,一般现在时,第三人称,明：,暗：,四段式,5,点,2,点,二、扩展成句连成篇,扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who did what?,一句多译,:,Traditional way to get information by reading newspapers is gradually replaced by TV and the Internet .,1.,传统的靠读报获取信息的方式逐渐被电视、网络所取代,Nowadays,people prefer to surf the Internet and watch TV for information rather than read newspapers for information.,Reading newspapers is convenient and it is not limited by time.,2.,不受时间限制，方便,Reading newspapers without time limit is considered convenient.,（,顾青云,）,As a convenient source of information,reading newspapers is not limited by time.,3.,可以随个人兴趣获取信息,People can get information by their interests.,Readers can choose information that they are interested in.,People can select and read whatever section they are interested in.,The speed of information spread is comparatively slow.,4.,传递信息速度相对较慢。,Readers receive information from newspapers later than from the Internet and TV,连句成文,使用,过渡词、套模板,时间 空间 细节,连贯 呼应,5.,引述段落提出问题时常用的句式、词语：,序数词、第一层次（首先）,第二层次（其次）,第三层次（第三点）,。的原因有许多。,There are many reasons why,。,。的原因如下；,The reasons why,。,are as follows,First,，,Firstly,，,In the first place,，,First of all,，,To begin with,，,For one thing,。,Second,，,Secondly,，,In the,second place,，,Next,，,Then,，,For another,，,Third,，,Thirdly,，,Besides,，,In addition,，,Furthermore,，,What is more important,On top of that,Moreover,whats more,Consequence,结果类,让步类,Concession,Cause,原因类,Conclusion,结论类,therefore,so,otherwise,as a result,thus,as a consequence,after all,but,even if,although,but even so,in spite of,，,however,while,because,for this reason,because of,due to,on account of,thanks of,as,in a word,，,in summary,，,to sum up,in short,，,in brief,in conclusion,，,on the whole,，,altogether,，,in general,generally speaking,最后一点,at,last,，,lastly,，,finally,，,in the last place,，,last of all,last but not,least,个人观点类,As far as Im concerned,In my opinion,in my view,on a personal note,on my part,from my point of view,There is a heated debate over _,（主题）,.There are two sides of opinions of it.,Some people say_A_.They hold their view that_,（支持,A,的理由一）,What is more,_(,理由二,).Moreover,_(,理由三,).,While others think that _B_,Firstly,_(,支持,B,的理由一,).Secondly(besides),_,（理由二）,.Thirdly(finally),_(,理由三,).,From my point of view,I think _,（我的观点）,.The reason is that _(,原因,).As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me,the former is surely a wise choice.,三 查错改错,誊写,要尽量剔除错误,卷面不工整扣,5,分,One possible Version:,Dear editor,Recently students in our school have made a survey of“Views on Newspapers”.,The people whom we interviewed have two different opinions,.,45%of the people,enjoy reading newspapers.,First of all,as a,convenient,source of,information,reading newspapers,is not limited,by time,.,Secondly,reading also,makes people think,which helps develop peoples intelligence,.,Moreover,people can,select and read whatever section,they are interested in.,However,/,While,55%of the people,interviewed,dont,turn to,newspapers to get information.,They hold the idea that,newspapers are not very,attractive,.,Whats more,readers receive information from newspapers later than from the Internet and TV.,In my opinion,people can,make use of whatever means to gather information,so long as,its convenient for them and helpful.,要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。,para1,提出话题,Para 2,有一些人认为,para3,一些人认为,para4,我的看法,Consolidation,对比观点题型,好作文的一般标准：,书写优美,书写工整、字迹清秀,内容完整,认真审题、明确要求,语言正确,遣词用字、英文句型,语言生动,高级词汇、富于变化,语言流畅,过度自然、段落统一,Consolidation,Writing skills,提高作文具体措施：,1.,背诵优美句型,2.,背优秀作文,3.,剪贴报纸上的作文进行背诵,4.,背谚语（,As a saying goes,every coin has two sides.,）,Homework,实战演习,:,Nature and Development-,What should we choose?,