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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Unit21 Who gets,the money?,英文写作“四步走”,1,)动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确,立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上,,充分酝酿。,2,)考虑好想写多少句子,该用哪些动词和,词组等。,3,)边写边思考内容的连贯性,语言和句子,的准确性。,4,)写完后一定要再细看一遍。,主要体裁作文写作技巧,提示议论文应考虑的几点:,1.,文章开头,能依据提示确立主题句,(,topic),阐明观点或看法。,2.,使用连接词,分层次说明理由、缘由,(,supporting sentences)。,3.,归纳总结,首尾呼应。,主要体裁作文写作技巧,看图作文应考虑的几点:,1.,看懂图片,把图片展示的人物、地点、时间、事件等有机地串联起来,使之成为内容连贯的句子。,2.,确定短文的时态和人称。,3.,确定体裁(说明文还是记叙文),接着用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意。,4.,根据图片或图表大意进行议论。,写作要领,细审题,巧构思,列要点,防遗漏。写日记,同汉语;书信,通知格式要牢记。看清图表细梳理,写人记事按顺序;完稿后查遗漏,整洁干净莫忘记。,高考写作中常用的连接词,:,表并列补充关系的,:,what is more,besides,also,as well,moreover,furthermore,in addition,表转折对比关系的,:,but,however,yet,instead,on the other hand,on the contrary,although,different from,in contrast to,despite,in spite of,whereas,unlike,nevertheless,not onlybut also,herethere,years agotoday,thisthat,the formerthe latter,thennow,the firstwhereas the second,oncenow,on one handon the other hand,someothers,高考写作中常用的连接词,:,表因果关系的,:,since,as,because(of),for,so,thus,therefore,as a result,so that,表条件关系的,:,if,on the condition(that),as long as,unless,or else,表特定的顺序关系,:,above all,first of all,firstly,first,secondly,the,next,finally,in the end,at last,高考写作中常用的连接词,:,表时间关系的,:,when,after,before,until,as soon as,later,afterwards,soon,lately,recently,since,from then on,eventually,in the meantime,then,suddenly,at the same time,next,early this morning/year/century,after an interval,now,after,presently,later,afterward,somewhat later,finally,at last,all of a sudden,表换一种方式表达,:,in other words,that is to say,to put it another way,高考写作中常用的连接词,:,表进行举例说明,:,for instance,for example,like,such as,表陈述事实,:,in fact,actually,as a matter of fact,to tell you the truth,表总结,:,on the whole,in short,all in all,general,in a word,in conclusion,in closing,in summary.,Different ways of expressing,possibility and impossibility,1.I/She/He can/may,2.I/She/He may not,3.It is likely that,4.It is possible that,5.She/He is not likely to,6.I am not likely to,情景作文,1 A Detective Storybook,参考词汇,:,不情愿的,unwillingly,不耐烦地,impatient,沉浸于,之中,lose oneself in,内容要点,妈妈让爸爸去叫儿子吃饭;,爸爸看见儿子在看一本侦探故事书;,儿子去吃饭,爸爸转身看书;,妈妈和儿子等爸爸吃饭;,妈妈让儿子叫爸爸吃饭;,儿子发现爸爸还沉浸于那本书中。,A Detective Storybook,It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.White were waiting at the table for their son,Mike.Where was Mike?Mrs.White asked her husband to look for him.Mr.White found their son sitting on the stairs,reading a detective storybook.He ordered Mike to come for dinner at once.Then Mike left unwillingly,leaving the book on the floor.Before going back,Mr.White took a glance at that book.,Mrs.White and Mike were at the table waiting for Mr.White.They waited and waited until they became impatient.Mrs.White got angry and asked Mike to look for his father.When Mike went back to the stairs,to his surprise,he found his father losing himself in the same book.What an interesting detective storybook!,情景作文,2,根据下面的图画用英语写出它的内容和寓意。词数,100,左右。,参考词汇:,缸,vat,漏出来,leak out,漏洞,loophole,内容要点:,1.,很多人挑水往缸里倒,2.,缸的周围有很多洞,无论怎么倒水也不满,3.,感受,How to Study,From the picture,we can see many people carrying water and pouring water into a big vat with many holes on it,from which water is leaking out continuously.We can imagine that the vat will be still empty,no matter how much water has been poured into it.Obviously the vat should be repaired first.,The way that some students study is just like the situation described above.They just absorb new knowledge and never review it in time or make up the loopholes in knowledge.In order to make progress in study,students should not only learn new things as much as possible,but also go over them from time to time so that they could get as much as possible.,情景作文,3,假设你是图画中的小男孩,请根据下列四幅图的内容写一篇文章,并谈谈你的感受,。,参考词汇:,自食其果,eat ones own bitter fruit,内容要点,:,我,邀请,Kate,到我家玩;,Kate,请求我不要捉弄她;,我跑去拿梯子和一桶水;,我将水桶放到半开的门上;,Kate,没进来,并从外面把门关上了;,水桶砸到我自己身上。,Eat My Own Bitter Fruit,One day,looking out of the window,I saw Kate passing by.I asked her to drop in.She knew I often played tricks on her,so she told me not to do that again.I pretended to agree.Before she came to the door,I hurried to put a bucket of water over the half-open door with the help of a ladder.Then I waited for her beside the door.,Maybe Kate noticed what I did.When she came to the door,she refused to come in at once.Before I pulled her in,she closed the door from outside suddenly.The bucket full of water fell down and the water splashed on myself,I was wet all over.As a result,I got to know what was eating ones own bitter fruit from then on.,情景作文,4,根据下列图画用英语写一篇短文,图中男子为,Mr.Li,。,参考词汇:,足球迷,a football fan,内容要点:,Mrs.Li,让,Mr.Li,照看厨房的饭;,Mr.Li,完全沉迷于球赛;,Mrs.Li,回来闻到了糊味;,看到饭糊了,,Mr.Li,这时才意识到自己的任务。,A Real Football Fan,Mr.Li is a football fan.,One day,his wife wanted to go shopping and asked his husband to keep an eye on the meal being cooked in the kitchen.Mr.Li said,“No problem.”After his wife left,he began to watch TV,a football match.It was very exciting.Mr.Li lost himself in the match at once,forgetting the meal completely.,When his wife came home,she felt something smelt terrible.,She rushed into the kitchen and found the dish had been burnt black.Only at that moment did Mr.Li realize his task.,情景作文,5,你目睹了一个勒索事件,请把事件经过写成一段约,100,词左右的短文。,参考词汇,:,挣扎着逃脱,struggle for an escape,零花钱,pocket money,勒索,extortion,内容要点,(,1,)男孩放学时遇到勒索者;,(,2,)两人相撞;,(,3,)男青年称墨镜被撞坏;,(,4,)男青年要男孩赔钱;,(,5,)男孩难过地离开;,(,6,)男青年自鸣得意。,One afternoon a boy was walking back home after school.When he came to the Hollywood Road,a young man with long hair jumped out of an entrance and ran into the boy.The boy was frightened and said“Im sorry”at once.But the young man caught hold of the boys arm.,The boy struggled for an escape.The young man threatened him,“Dont move.You broke my sunglasses.They cost me 300 dollars.You must pay for them.”The boy was afraid of him and had to give all of his pocket money to him.The young man was very pleased with the money gotten from the boy,while the poor boy was very sad.,情景作文,6,根据图中内容,写一篇意思连贯,情节合理的短文。,One Possible Version,A few days ago,Miss Wang was going home by bike.While she was riding in the street,she saw a man with a knife in his hand and his face covered with a piece of cloth running towards her.The man took her handbag out of the basket of her bike and ran away before she could do anything.,There was no one she could turn to for help at that time,for it was very late at night.Luckily she had her mobile phone in hand.Immediately she took it out and phoned the police.She told them what the man was like and in which direction he had run.The police came very quickly and caught the robber.Miss Wang got her handbag back and felt very grateful for what the police had done for her.,开放作文,1,根据下面提供的情景,写一段接续文字。注意:词数不少于,50,个。,One day you arrived home late after school.When you entered the house,you found that obviously your parents had argued over something.Finally you found everything out.,Please tell us why they argued.,One possible version,Several days ago,I had my monthly test.Before the exam my Dad promised that he would buy me a MP3 if I did better this time than in the last exam.Yesterday I was told that I got the fifth place in my class.Dad thought that he should keep his promise while Mum disagreed.So they started the argument.,开放作文,2,根据下面提供的情景,写一段接续文字。注意:词数不少于,50,个。,You are on your way home.When you come to the crossroad,you see a crowd of people gathering around an elderly lady.You go nearer to see what has happened.One of the on lookers explains everything to you.,One possible version,This elderly lady was walking across the street when a car came and knocked her down.She was seriously injured.The driver had driven away before she realized it.One of the people called the police and now she is waiting to be sent to hospital.She needs immediate treatment.,开放作文,3,根据下面提供的情景,写一段接续文字。注意:词数不少于,50,个。,Yesterday evening while you were sitting at the computer,surfing Internet,you let out a cry of joy.Your roommate came over and asked:“Why,Wang Hong?What has made you so excited?”,You tell your roommate what has happened.,One possible version,Three years ago,when I was a student in Senior One,I went to England on an exchange program.I stayed with an English family for nearly a year.I have a host brother,Jack.We have been keeping in touch with each other by E mails.I have just received an E mail from him and he told me that he was coming to China with his parents soon.I am looking forward to meeting them.,开放作文,4,根据下面提供的情景,写一段接续文字。注意:词数不少于,50,个。,One day I saw a picture in the newspaper showing a woman lying on her stomach in a pool of blood,dead.You happened to be her neighbor.You tell me what happened.,One possible version,The dead woman was my next door neighbor.She had no children and her husband died last year.She discovered she had got lung cancer and didnt want to add to the trouble of the people who cared about her,so she jumped from the balcony on the tenth floor.I felt very sorry at her death.,开放作文,5,根据下面提供的情景,写一段接续文字。注意:词数不少于,50,个。,Mr.Li is the manager of a large company.He went back home late as usual one night.He found a note written by his only son,saying that he would leave home,You know the boy and tell us why:,One possible version,The boy is my classmate whose name is Li Ming.His parents got divorced and his mother remarried.His father is always busy with his work and seldom cares about his son.Though Li Ming lives a comfortable life,he feels lonely.He left home just to escape from his boring life at home.,开放作文,6,根据下面提供的情景,写一段接续文字。注意:词数不少于,50,个。,Yesterday afternoon as soon as the bell rang,Wang Gang saw you rush out of the school and hurry toward the net bar nearby.A few minutes later,you were out and on your way home,disappointed.,Please tell us what happened.,One possible version,Every Wednesday afternoon after school,I go to the net bar to surf Internet.Yesterday I did the same.But as noon as I got to the net bar,I saw a crowd of young people of my age gathering in front of the reception desk.They were talking to the owner.Later I found out that all of them including me were not allowed to enter the bar.On the door was a notice which read:No admission under the age of 18.So I was out and went home,disappointed.,
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