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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,关于地方、景点介绍,荷塘月色,.mp3,一、地方特点,位置,:,be located in,,,be situated in,,,lie in/to/on the east of,There stands/lies,lies on the(eastern)coast of,lies off,Hubei province lies in the middle of China.,Hunan lies on the south of Hubei.,Zhongxiang,lies about 220 kilometers(to the)northwest of Wuhan.,Shanghai lies on the eastern coast of China.,Taiwan Island lies off the eastern coast of China.,历史,:,have/with a(long)history of.,date back to,date from,have witnessed too much in history,Although a small country,it has amazing history of over 5,000 years.,Few places on the planet are packed with history as Ireland,The Great Wall of China dates back to more than 2,500 years ago.,人口,:,have/with a population of.,the population of is,percent of the population are,New Zealand has a population of about 3.8 million people,of which about fourteen percent are Maori,Ireland has a young population,with forty four percent of the total population under the age of 25.,面积,:,cover/have/with an area of.,take up,the area/size of is,环境,:,with green hills and beautiful rivers,be surrounded by green trees and beautiful flowers,气候:,neither too cold nor too hot,,,the climate varies from place to place,The climate of the British Isles is mild with a lot of rain.,The coldest month is February,when the temperature can be as low/high as,特色,:,be famous/well known/distinguished for.,have the distinction of,the special character of the place is,is home to,名胜景观,:,a place with many tourist attractions/places of interest/scenic spots,have/get a good/fantastic view of,二、地位和评价,1.The cathedral is famous for the height of its tower,which is without doubt the highest and handsome in England.,2.You will never regret if you pay a visit to it.,3.It is really,a great feast for your eyes,.,4.A trip to China will make you know more about it,besides/as well as/in addition to/apart from,its culture and history.,5.Youll,be rewarded not only by/with,the view of,but also by,Practice,苏州位于上海西面,50,英里处,人口五百多万,占地,8488,平方公里。,Suzhou is located/is situated/lies 50 miles(to the)west of Shanghai,covering an area of 8488 square kilometers,with a population of over 5 million.,钟祥一中坐落在南湖湖畔,全校拥有师生近四千余人,一年四季被绿树红花环绕着,是一个风景如画的地方。,Located on the bank of the South Lake,No.1 middle school of,Zhongxiang,has a population of nearly 4,000,including teachers and students.Surrounded by green trees and beautiful flowers all the year round,it is really picturesque(,风景如画的,)all the time.,整体结构分布,Para 1,总体介绍,/,位置,面积、人口,Para 2,周边环境,交通状况,历史,名胜古迹,本地特色,风土人情,Para 3,针对描述,结合写作要求进行结尾。,语言,1,涵盖所有的要点,2,运用灵活的表达方式,长短句结合;运用较多的语法结构和词汇,尽力使用复杂结构或较高级词汇,3,有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,4,书写工整,卷面整洁,澳大利亚位于最小的大洲,大洋洲,是世界第六大国家。它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家,只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。它由六个州组成,其中墨尔本,(Melbourne),、悉尼,(Sydney),是最大的两个城市。它以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名,世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美丽。,总面积:,7,686,850 square kilometers,人口:约,2,000,万,注意:要有标题,介绍必须包括所有的内容要点,但不要逐条翻译成英语。,_,Located in the smallest continent,Oceania,,,Australia is the sixth largest country in the world,。,It covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of about 20 million.It is a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have adequate rainfall.It is made up of six states,,,of which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities.Because it is famous for its bright sunshine,,,countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife,,,tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its beautiful scenery.,佳句赏析,澳大利亚位于最小的大洲,大洋洲,是世界第六大国家总面积:,7,686,850 square kilometers,人口:约,2,000,万,1,、,Covering an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers,Australia,whose population is 20 million,is the sixth largest country in the world,situated on the smallest continent,Oceania.,(李翔),2,、,Australia,the sixth largest country in the world,lies on the smallest continent,Oceania.It covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers,with only a population of 20 million.,(韩雨璁),3 Covering an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers makes it the sixth biggest country in the world.(,彭珊,),4 Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of 20 million,which makes it the sixth biggest country in the world.(,王丽娟,),3,、,Australia is typical of a country with dry climate,and only a few parts which are close to the ocean have adequate rainfalls.,(邵敏),4,、,The dry climate covers the whole country except for a few offshore districts which have abundant rainfalls.,(杨昕琰),5,、,Rain seldom falls on the land except for some areas along the seaside,,,so most parts of the country are very dry and hot all the year around.,(杨扬),,它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家,只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。,Most parts of the country is dry all over the year with few places(having)abundant rain.(,曾诚,),It has so hot and dry a climate that only in some parts along the coast is there enough/adequate rain.(,王丽娟,),What is known to us all is that Australia is a place where the climate is dry and only a minority of areas by the sea have enough rain.(,夏洁莲,),它由六个州组成,其中墨尔本,(Melbourne),、悉尼,(Sydney),是最大的两个城市,It consists of/is made up of six states,of which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest.,它以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名,世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美丽。,6,、,There are warm sunshine,a good many cattle and countless sheep as well as special wild animals and plants,which have appealed to the tourists all over the world to enjoy/experience its unique view.,(李丝丝),7,、,Its universally acknowledged that Australia is not only famous for its warm sunshine and a good many cattle and sheep,but also is home to a rich diversity of fantastic wild animals and plants.,(熊曼婷),8,、,The warm sunshine,countless cattle and sheep as well as many other strange wild animals and plants make it one of the most famous country,attracting a great many people from all over the world to experience its charm of nature.,(孙安安),9,、,When you come there,you are served/rewarded not only with its lovely sunshine but also by the numerous sheep and cattle as well as unusual wild animals and plants.,(洪胜男),10.Having so beautiful scenery,it attracts hundreds of thousands of tourists throughout the world to come here,where they can have a feast for their minds as well as their eyes.,(李翔),11.It is also said to be one of the most suitable place to live in.(,崔雅倩,),12.It is a fascinating place marked out for tourists.(,谢千驰,),补充语句,Having been separated from other continents for millions of years,Australia has many plants and animals that cant be found anywhere else in the world.,How to polish your composition?,应用定语从句,Australia is made up of six states,of which Melbourne and Sydney are the two biggest cities.,With,结构作定语,It covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers,with only a population of 20 million.,分词作状语,Situated on the smallest,continent,Oceania,Australia is the six largest country in the world.,Having been separated from other continents for millions of years,Australia has many plants and animals that cant be found anywhere else in the world.,名词性从句,What is known to us all is that,Australia is a place where the climate is dry and only a minority of areas by the sea have enough rain,修饰词汇的使用,a good many/a rich diversity of/tens of thousands of,unusual/unique/countless/fantastic/special,adequate/abundant,积累与仿写(积累词汇,仿写书中的长句),but also is home to,a rich diversity of,fantastic wild animals and plants.,you are served/rewarded not only with its lovely sunshine but also by the numerous sheep and cattle as well as unusual wild animals and plants.,(仿选修六第五单元,The lake of heaven,),Homework,周练十一,The more you,practise,the better your writing will be.,Thank you!,Bye-bye,
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