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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,welcome,Basic Writing,A Natural Disaster,Natural Disasters,typhoon,flood,drought,earthquake,What is a natural disaster?,mudslide/landslide,on Oct.18,2010,Thailand,5 deaths,the latest report,On Oct.19,2010,Vietnam,48 deaths,23 people lost,What should the people do after the disaster happened?,donate money to,the disaster-hit area,to be a volunteer,One in trouble,all to help!,1),_ hit,_,South,Chinas Hainan,province on Oct.4,2010.,The heavy rains,Qionghai,甘肃南部的舟曲县在,2010,年,8,月,7,日发生了泥石流(,mudslide),。,On August 7,2010,_ hit_,south of Gansu.,the mudslide,Zhouqu,这洪灾是在过去的,10,年里最严重的一次。,2),The flood_,(be)_(bad)in the past ten yeas.,has been,the worst,The,earthquake_(be,),_,(,最严重),_(,在过去的,20,年里),has been,the worst,in the past 20 years,3),这次水灾造成一人死亡,三人失踪以及,166,个镇被淹没了,。,The heavy rains caused one dead,with 3 people losing and 166 towns,traped,.,The heavy rains caused one death,with 3 people lost and 166 towns trapped.,T,泥石流造成,约,1360,人死亡,,401,人失踪,,2000,人,受伤。,The mudslide caused,about,_,with _ and _,1,360 death,s,401 people lost,2,000 people injured,death,lost,trapped,经济损失:,an_ loss of,economic,4)As is estimated,the flood has caused an_ loss of,about,1.5 _,yuan,.,economy;billion B.economic;billions,C.economic;billion D.economy;billions,据估计,泥石流灾害造成经济损失估计,超过,300,万元,.,As is estimated,the mudslide has caused an,economic loss of,more than,3 _,yuan,.,million;millions,million,5),数千名解放军战士正全力投入援救工作中。,Thousands of soldiers are,sparing,no efforts in the rescue work.,sp_ _ _ no efforts,a,r,e,1)On August 7,2010,the mudslide hit,Zhouqu,south of Gansu.,2)The flood has been the worst in the past 10,years.,3)The heavy rains caused one death,with 3,people lost and 166 towns trapped.,4)As is estimated,the mudslide has caused an,economic loss of more than 3 million,yuan,.,5)Thousands of soldiers are sparing no efforts in the rescue work.,假如你是校报的记者,请根据以下内容,写一篇关于丹东特大洪水的报道。,时间,2010,年,8,月,19,日,地点,辽宁东部地区,灾难程度,过去,20,年的特大洪水,后果,8,人死亡,,1,人失踪,,136,人受伤;经济损失超过,67.5,亿元。,救灾人员,数千名解放军战士和当地群众,写作要求,1,、必须使用,5,个句子表达全部所给内容;,2,、将,5,个句子组成连贯的短文,。,写作特点,:,2.,文章的时态多用过去时态,4.,表述要客观,不宜过多修饰,1.,类型:新闻报道类,具有真实性。,3.,写作要点:新闻事件的时间,地点,结果,影响,救援情况等,Discussion:,What should we write in each sentence?,Sentence1:,Sentence2:,Sentence3:,Sentence4:,Sentence5:,时间,+,地点,灾难程度,后果一:伤员情况,后果二:经济损失,救灾人员,Please write down your passage,假如你是校报的记者,请根据以下内容,写一篇关于丹东特大洪水的报道。,时间,2010,年,8,月,19,日,地点,辽宁东部地区,灾难程度,过去,20,年的特大洪水,后果,8,人死亡,,1,人失踪,,136,人受伤;经济损失超过,67.5,亿元。,救灾人员,数千名解放军战士和当地群众,写作要求,1,、必须使用,5,个句子表达全部所给内容;,2,、将,5,个句子组成连贯的短文,。,语言,8,分,语言运用,能力;语法句子,结构;词汇,很好;,准确性高,较好,一些,错误,一般;较,多错误不,影响理解,较差,较多错,影响理解,很差,无法理,解,7-8,5-6,3-4,1-2,0,内容,5,分,信息点,完整,所有,大部分,基本,小部分,少许,没有,5,4,3,2,1,0,连贯,2,分,连贯,很好,较好,较差,缺乏,2,1.5,1,0,评分标准,To give marks to your partner,On August 19,2010,a severe flood hit in,Dandong,east of Liaoning.,It is said that,the,flood has been the worst in the past twenty,years.The evil flood caused eight deaths,with one people lost and 136 people injured.,As is estimated,the flood has caused an,economic loss of more than 6.75 billion,yuan,.,Fortunately,thousands of soldiers and local,people should spare no efforts in the rescue,work.,假如你是,21st Century,的学生记者。请你以,A Severe Mudslide,为题,根据以下内容写一篇关于泥石流灾害的报道。,时间,2010,年,8,月,7,日,地点,甘肃南部的舟曲县,灾难程度,为,100,年来最严重的一次灾难,后果,约,1360,人死亡,,401,人失踪,导致交通问题和电力供应短缺;,。,灾后救援情况,救援工作正在进行,与此同时,大家正积极为灾区捐钱,写作要求,1,、必须使用,5,个句子表达全部所给内容;,2,、将,5,个句子组成连贯的短文,。,Homework:,Thank you for your listening!,
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