高考英语 基础写作之人物简介专题课件 新人教版 课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,基础写作：人物简介专题,人物简介,1).,属于记叙文体裁,2).,基本类型：记人，叙事，写景,3).,常见高考书面表达题：介绍同学，朋友，,老师，父母，名人等等,4).,记叙方法：顺叙，倒叙，插叙,5).,注意事项：选材代表性；精炼，感人，,不拖泥带水；注意,5W1H,；人称时态。,6).,常见段落结构：主题句发展句结论句,一、人物简介的写作步骤：,1,Birthday and birth place,2,Family background,3,Education background,4,Big events in his or her life,(in order of time),5,Evaluation,二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子：,1.Birthday and birth place:,was/were born in on,eg,.She was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867.,2.Family background,was/were born in/into a poor/rich family,his/her family was so poor that,his/her father was very strict with him,the son of a poor family,when he was a small boy/young,as a child/as a boy of 15,during his/her childhood,spend his childhood in,live a happy/hard life,eg,.Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809.,Born of a poor clerks family,Charles Dickens had little schooling.,3.Education background,be admitted to college,graduate fromdepartment of university,when at college,he majored in,receive a doctors degree,go abroad for further studies,4.Big events in ones life,be interested in/be fond of,work hard at,serve as,devote his lifetime/himself to,concentrate himself to,do research about/into,make up ones mind to do,sth,.,do,sth,with great determination and perseverance,be strict in,sth,.,have a way of doing,sth,try ones best to do,sth,.,encourage,sb,to do,fight for,give up ones life for,sb/sth,win a prize/the first prize in competition,receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for,be good at do well in,be crazy about enjoy,make rapid progress in,set a new world record of,equal the world record,win(won)a gold/silver/bronze medal,be selected to/become a member of,study hard train hard,go through hardship,overcome many difficulties,have a gift/talent for language,etc,one of the best/most important,set a good example for,a model teacher/worker,be respected by everyone,speak/think highly of,be honored as(an excellent athlete),his hard work brought him great success,he is the pride of China.,His heroic story spread all over the city,5.Evaluation,5.Evaluation,make great contributions to,Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success.,be famous/known as be regarded as,become a world champion at Championships,remember,sb,forever,a new chapter of history has been turned,Lei,Feng,has been praised for his communist spirit.,an inspiring leader,make great contributions to,Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success.,be famous/known as be regarded as,become a world champion at Championships,remember,sb,forever,a new chapter of history has been turned,Lei,Feng,has been praised for his communist spirit.,an inspiring leader,5.Evaluation,6.,描写人物外貌和性格特征,good-looking funny-looking ugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired,warm-hearted kind-hearted absent-minded bad-tempered near-sighted far-sighted,a strong will tall short pretty naughty smart wise bright diligent lazy healthy humorous charming attractive talkative confidence independent patience,Sample writings,【,基础写作实例剖析：,】,你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英,语写一篇短文（,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容,），介绍,自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。,姓名,李华,出生年月,1977,年,2,月,出生地,辽宁大连,学历,1984,1990,光明小学,1990,1996,大连市第六中学,所学主要课程,语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑,特长,英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名）,业余爱好,游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐,【,实例剖析：,】,【,写作分析,】,通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点：,文体：记叙文 人称,:,根据内容可确定本文人称为第一人称,要点：李华的出生年月,及地点；学历；所学主,要课程；特长；获奖情,况；业余爱好。,【,实例剖析：,】,短语及句型,：,be born in,after that,be good at/do well in,graduate,the main subjects,win first prize,enjoy doing,【One possible version:】,My name is Li,Hua,.,I was born in,Dalian,Liaoning,Province in February 1977.,I started school in 1984,when I was seven,and,I studied in,Guangming,Primary School from 1984 to 1990,after that,I went to No.6 Middle School of,Dalian,and graduated this summer.,The main subjects,I studied at school,included Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer,in which English and computer are my,favourite,furthermore,last year I won first prize in the school computer competition.,When I am free,I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps,and,my favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.,范例：请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章。,出 生,1923,年,5,月，香港。,个人经历,1,、,7,岁丧父，家境贫困,;,2,、,1955,年后，经营建筑、航运、石油等，成为国内外知名人士,;,3,、改革开放,(the reform and open policy),以来，先后捐资支持教育、文化、体育、和福利事业款项达,100,多亿港元。,影 响,成为“感动中国”的人物。,写作要求,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,要点分析：,名人介绍，,采用第,三,人称将提供的信息整合,以,一般过去时态,为主。,One possible version:,In May 1923,Dr,Huo,Yingdong,was born from a poor family in Hong Kong.,At the age of ten,his father died.,After 1955,he was engaged in architecture,shipping,petroleum,and,became a famous person at home and abroad.,Since the beginning of the reform and open policy,he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education,culture,sports,and public welfare in Mainland.,He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country,which makes him a Moving China hero.,2006,年高考英语书面表达试题北京卷,国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简历。假设你是王姗，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。,One possible version:,Im Wang Shan,a girl of sixteen,presently attending Beijing,Yangguang,Middle.I like music,especially classical music,and,Im also interested in photography,because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life,and,thanks to my hobbies,Ive made many friends.In fact,I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them,because I believe we all need help from each other,I appreciate friends”help,and,I am wiling to help anyone in need.I love life;I love Mother Nature,also,I love peace,on the contrary,I hate any form of violence.I would like to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp,since there would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about their cultures.,假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信,.,内容应包括,:1.,个人情况：年龄、性别、学历,2.,个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况,3.,承诺：提供最佳服务,2006,年全国各地高考英语书面表达试题全国卷（,III,）,Dear Sir/Madam.My name is Li,Hua,I would like to work as a volunteer,for,the Winter Asian Games.I am a boy/girl of,17,and,I am studying at high school now I am good at English,and,I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely.I believe,I can do a good job for the Games,:first,I like sports and I know the place very well,second,I get along with others easily,which is especially useful for a volunteer,third,Im ready to give help,whenever it is needed,.My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.Please consider my request,and,Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li,Hua,2006,年全国各地高考英语书面表达试题湖南卷,请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。,标题为：,My Teacher,Mr,Moore,Theres a teacher Mr.Moore.,Who is lovely and thirty-four.,Always encouraging us to try.,He leads us to a world of“why”.,We all admire him more and more.,注意：,1.,不得照抄短诗原文。,2.,必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。,3.,必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。,4.,短文不能写成诗歌形式。,5.,只能使用5个句子表达全部的,内,容。,One possible version,：,Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the one,who impresses me most,though he is 34,he looks very young for his age,and,hes one of the most popular teachers in our school.Compared with other teachers,Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching,he tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.In his opinion,we should,not only,know“what”,but also,understand“why”,so,instead of giving us answers immediately,he encourages us to think by ourselves,whenever he puts forward questions,.,Besides,with his help,weve learned how to analyze and settle problem,what a wonderful world of“why”he leads us to!He is,such,a learned person,that,we all admire hem very much.,爱因斯坦于,1879,年三月十四日生于德国。他小时候喜欢问很多问题。他喜欢数学和科学，但是他比较害羞，不太喜欢学校。,17,岁到瑞士学习。为了赚足够的钱，他当过教师，后来在政府部门工作。,1905,年他获得博士学位。,1905,1915,年，他开始研究工作，这些研究导致了他在物理方面的许多新发现。,1918,年，他已经世界闻名。,1921,年，他获得诺贝尔物理奖，并被邀请到许多国家作演讲。爱因斯坦是,20,世纪最伟大的科学家。他于,1955,年四月十八日逝世，终年,76,岁。,Sample writing:,Einstein was born in Germany on March 14th,1879.,When he was a young boy,he used to ask a lot of questions.His,favourite,subjects were,maths,and science,but,he was a shy person and did not enjoy school very much,when he was 17,he went to Switzerland to study,in order to earn enough money to continue his studies,Einstein worked first as a teacher,and then,worked in a government office,in 1905 he received a doctors degree.,From 1905-1915,he began his research and studies,which led to his discoveries in physics,and,by the time of 1981,Einstein had been known across the world.,He was given the Nobel Prize for physics in 1921 and was invited to many countries to give lectures.,Einstein was the 20th centurys greatest scientist,he died on April 18th,1955,at the age of 76.,【,人物介绍,】,：刘翔,2004,年,8,月,28,日是所有中国人难忘的日子，这天刘翔获得第,28,届奥运会,110,米栏冠军。请你给,英语周报,写一篇介绍刘翔的短文。内容要点如下：,时间：,2004,年,8,月,28,日第,28,届奥运会,成绩：,110,米栏冠军，击败欧、美、非名将；第一个冲过终点线，,12,秒,91,，平奥运会纪录,背景：,1983,年,7,月,13,日出生于上海一个工人家庭,成长历程：儿时被父母送入少体校，被孙海平教练发现,品质：孝敬父母，每次回家带礼物；对邻居友善,意义及未来打算：被称为民族英雄，为中国人和亚洲人争了光；今后更加努力，取得更大成就,