英语 Unit 17 Laughter单元写作指导课件 北师大版选修6 课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,个人轶事,个人轶事属记叙文,它以叙事为主要内容,以叙述为主要表达方式。即对一件事发生的前因后果及其发展过程进行叙述。当然在叙事的过程中也要夹杂着介绍人物。,1,.,写作顺序,:,顺叙或倒叙。,顺叙就是按客观事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行叙述。倒叙就是打破事物发展的正常顺序,把事件的结局或事件中最突出的片段提到文章的开头来给人以悬念,然后再按事物发展的正常顺序来叙述。,2,.,时态,:,事情大都发生在过去,要以一般过去时为主体,时态,根据具体语境可穿插运用,其他,合适的时态。,3,.,人称,:,(1),第一人称,:,作者以当事人的口气,即以第一人称来叙述,把文章中的事情以,“,我,”,的所见所闻来告诉读者,用主观的表现手法,给读者一种亲切自然的感觉,如同亲身经历一样,提高了事件的可信度,直接抒发作者的思想情感,从而引起读者的共鸣,这是常采用的方式。,(2),第三人称,:,作者从旁观者的角度叙述事件,以客观的写作方法,能够充分反映事件中个人的感受及见解,以全面的视角来叙述。,4,.,叙述的线索,:,(1),以时间为线索,以时间的先后顺序为线索展开。,(2),以地点为线索,以地点的转移为线索展开。,(3),以事件发展的过程为线索,以人物出现的先后顺序为线索展开。,(4),以事物的象征意义为线索展开。,(5),以人物的思想行为及认知的过程为线索展开。,5,.,写作内容建议,:,(1),交代背景,(2),事件的开始,(3),事件的发展,(4),事件进一步发展,添加更多内容,(5),事件,的结尾及人们的感受,I had no idea how to.,There was absolutely nothing I could do about it.,I was totally out of control.,I started to get the feeling that.,It was a real shame that.,They all burst out laughing.,The funniest thing about it was that.,Everything worked out all right in the end.,请以,“,One Thing I,m Proud of”,为题,用英语写一篇,100,词左右的短文,记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下,:,1.,记述事情经过,;,2.,简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。,注意,:,文章的标题已给出,(,不计入总词数,),。,One,Thing,Im,Proud,of,参考范文,:,One,Thing,Im,Proud,of,I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.,The first day I went to high school,I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis.Amazed at how skillful they were,I was determined to be just as good.Later on,I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques.Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.,I am really proud of this experience,because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb“Practice makes perfect.”,