短文改错训练.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,V.第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。,增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。,删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。,修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。,注意：,1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；,2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。,1.,My father is now in his late forty but he looks young for his age.He is very strict with me,especial in my studies.Besides,I know he loves me deeply in his heart.Once I fail to do well in my math exam,I was afraid that it would make my father angry and disappointing.On contrary,he said I had tried my best and offered him a few words of encouragement.He told me that there is no need to feel bad about one and two failures and the most important thing is to learn anything from failure and never give up.Today is Fathers Day and I want to say thank you for my father.,forties,especially,However,failed,disappointed,the,me,or,something,to,2.,On my way to home yesterday afternoon,I happened to witness a traffic accident.When an old woman was crossed the road,she was knocked down by a boy riding bike.The boy was such frightened that he stood still at the scene but didnt know what to do.I quickly went up and saw the old woman lie on the ground,making crying because of pain.I stopped a taxi and told the driver that had happened.The driver drove them to the nearest hospital at once.To our relieve,we were told that the old woman wasnt injured seriously after she was examined carefully.The boy was deep grateful for our help.,crossing,a,so,and,lying,what,us,relief,deeply,3.,This term our school offer more than 10 courses,from what we can choose.All of us take greatly interest in them.Our most favorite are English songs,speaking English,arts and so on.Some say they have learned a lot that is not teaching in textbooks and they have got lot of practice.They hope more courses will be offered so their homework should be less.Thus,they can gain all kinds of knowledge,s,and learn more about what is going ahead in the world.,offers,which,great,spoken,taught,lots,while/but,knowledge,on,4.,Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party.Id like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents.They are very older and not in a good health recently.However,my mother made a telephone call to them last week,promised to visit them with me this Saturday.My mother said we will stay at my grandparents the whole weekend.So Im real sorry I cant take part your party.Here I wish you a lot of funs on your birthday.,inviting,but,old,Therefore,promising,would,really,in,fun,5.,Dear Peter,Im writing to thank you for your timely help giving to my mother when she was in trouble.,My mother told me that when she was riding in the street on last Monday,the car cut in suddenly.That made her fall off her bike and hurt her leg serious,but the driver didnt stop.When you saw what had happened,you came to give him a hand at once.You helped my mother to get a taxi and take her to the nearest hospital.,given,a,seriously,her,took,When the doctor said my mothers leg broken,you phoned my father.Therefore,before my father got to the hospital,you had left.My mother is now on a good condition and she may come home next week.Thanks so much for your helps.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,was,However,in,help,6.,My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m.and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didnt need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.,My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.,There,dont,for,hours,looks,sit,to,helpful,much,6.,My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m.and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didnt need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.,My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.,There,dont,for,hours,looks,sit,to,helpful,much,12.,One morning,I was waiting at the bus stop,worried about,(be)late for school.There were many people waiting at the bus stop,some of them looked very anxious and,(disappoint).When the bus finally came,we all hurried on board.I got a place next,the window,so I had a good view of the sidewalk.A boy on a bike,(catch)my attention.He was riding beside the bus and waving his arms.I heard a passenger behind me shouting to the driver,but he refused,(stop)until we reached the next stop.Still,the boy kept,(ride).He was carrying something over his shoulder and shouting.,being,and,to,disappointed,caught,to stop,riding,Finally,when we came to the next stop,the boy ran up to the door of the bus.I heard an excited conversation.Then the driver stood up and asked,“,anyone lose a suitcase at the last stop?”A woman on the bus shouted,“Oh dear!It is,(I).”She pushed her way to the driver and to the little boy.Everyone on the bus began talking about what the boy had done.And the strangers,(sudden)became friendly to one another.,Did,me/mine,suddenly,