2025年英语英语分类汇编中考英语书面表达.doc

【英语】英语分类汇编中考英语书面体现经典

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．书面体现
我英语学习
初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多经验与措施，请你向你表弟简介你做法，根据下面表格中内容，按规定用英语写一篇短文，
多听
听收音机，听音乐等，可以放松......
多说
运用英语，增强能力与信心......
多读书
开阔视野，理解英语文化......
语法规则
更好地理解与运用......
写作
写写平常生活......
其他
......

规定：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法对，书写规范；
2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作合适发挥
3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4．词数80－100。
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【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.
In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。而感慨句How time flies!，倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句构造Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2．书面体现

假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy来信。她在信中诉说了她烦恼，请你根据Lucy来信，用英语写一封90词左右回信。规定内容合理,信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
_______________________________________
All the best!
Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.
All the best!
Betty
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同步For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文论述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．书面体现
初三学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提醒，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”短文，简介九年级学校生活，并提出但愿和提议。
在校
老师
工作认真负责，充斥爱心
学生
…… （至少发挥两点）
周末
作业
作业多．舍弃爱好
其他活动
锻炼，电视
愿望
…… （发挥一到两点）

规定：
1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供所有信息，并合适发挥：
2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.
As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.
At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.
No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式构造运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4． 诚信是中华民族老式美德，也是社会主义关键价值观内容之一。而你朋友Daming近来却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，不过他却由于在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming道歉。
请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：
1、简述事件；2、谈谈自已见解，并给Daming某些提议。
注意：
1、词数80—100；
2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；
3、文中不能出现真实校名和人名；
4、文章开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony
【答案】The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.
Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony
【解析】
【分析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺事情，谈自已见解。信守承诺是中华民族老式美德，在写作过程中，注意文章构造，先写出大明和玲玲之间事情，然后再说自已对此见解。
【详解】
首先，第一句话直接点明作者观点，大明是出错了。然后仔细论述了事情发生通过。接下来说出自已对此事件见解，不信守承诺会导致失去他人信任，对大明提议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。
【点睛】
文章构造清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自已观点，然后论述事情，提出自已观点和提议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了某些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章愈加通顺。

5．书面体现
假如你是华,你英国笔友对中国文化很感爱好,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你家乡一安徴一游,请你根据如下提醒用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1位置:中国东部,安做省南部:
2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽
3.景点:山和古村落:
4.文化:茶、黄梅戏
5.提议
提醒词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera
注意:1.词数80-100
2.可合适增长细节,使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现自已真实校名和人名
4.开头和结展已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?
【答案】Dear Dave，
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!
Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以李华身份给自已笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章提纲，审题可知，短文应从如下几种内容论述：首先简介家乡位置；然后简介来这里最佳时候；接下来是简介家乡景点和文化，并给出提议。短文应使用一般目前时，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时应合理安排几种内容，分清主次，并注意上下文连贯。此外，英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子整体构造出发，写完整句子。如可以使用简单句构造，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提高文章档次，也应穿插某些并列句构造或复合句，以及使用某些复杂构造，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定邀请Dave来自已家乡旅游，并简介了家乡景点和文化。短文有如下几种特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容愈加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后详细简介了家乡位置、景点、文化等，并提出了提议。全文论述清晰，层次清晰，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，用词精确，句式构造完整，符合英语体现习惯。短文以一般目前时来论述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式变化。句式构造以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，尚有某些好句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。

6．环境保护话题是人们最关怀话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自已家乡变化写一篇英语短文。
注意事项：
1.短文应包括表格中所有提醒内容，条理清晰，作合适发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实人名和地名,词数不少于80。
状况
水污染，大气污染......
应对措施
立即制止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）......
感想提议
环境可以变得更好......

Change for a better China
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.
I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.
【解析】
【详解】
环境保护话题是人们最关怀话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自已家乡变化写一篇英语短文。规定中已经给出了部分提醒，动笔先应先认真阅读提醒，确定写作内容。写作中注意体现观点时常用句式，注意在体现不一样观点时，连词使用。内容上应注意描述全面性；语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯。
【点睛】
本文紧紧围绕规定对家乡做了简单简介，内容完整，用了表格中信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了某些好句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。

7．写作
81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参与多种户外活动。为了倡导中学生靠近大自然，某中学生英文报举行了一次征文活动，请你根据如下问题，用英语写一篇短文参与征文。
提醒：1）What’s the benefit （好处） of outdoor activities? （1-2 opinions）
2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （1-2 examples）
3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）
规定：1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提醒中所有信息，并按规定合适发挥；
3）词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.

【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.
When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.
There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.
Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面体现以“outdoor activities”为话题，结合所给写作材料，写一篇报刊征文稿。根据内容提醒可知本文会使用到一般目前时态，注意某些常见句式应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富语句，注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系，最终最佳要体现出人物感想和见解。
写作亮点：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁、要点齐全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富句型，例如：It is +形容词+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；时间状语从句等复合句，大大增长了信息容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错范文。

8．上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。目前，请你根据下表用英语写一篇简介讨论状况短文。注意：
1.短文须包括写作提醒和表格中所列所有内容；
2.时态运用对，书写工整、规范；3.80-100词。生词提醒：electric adj.电
讨论成果
25人表达同意
35人不一样意
理由
1.这样很以便；2.能节省上学途中时间。
1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；2.早上交通拥挤，骑电动车也快不起来。

【答案】Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to
school.25 students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could take
them less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe for
the junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morning
the traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.
【解析】
试题分析：本题规定以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。根据所给要点写一篇80-100词左右英语短文，并且要做到体现清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文重要以一般过去时态书写。要注意把每一种要点都体现出来，不要遗漏任何一种，书写时一定注意时态对使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照规定至少要各写两点。并注意上下文要语句贯穿。并且要围绕主题合适发挥。
写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目规定，给我们简介了持不一样观点学生各自理由，构造清晰，要点全面。时态运用对，书写工整规范。该文中如下几种句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bi