高中英语写作技巧及要领.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,高中英语写作要领与技巧,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一、审题,3,审,:,审文体,审要求,审人称,2007,浙江,高考,在英语课堂上，你喜欢老师授课时只用英语还是英语、汉语兼用。请你围绕,“,How do you prefer your English classes,to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?,”,这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文,授课形式一：,只用英语,授课形式二：,英语、汉语兼用,优点：有助于提高,听说能力等,缺憾：不易听懂,等,结论：,优点：易于理解等,缺憾：英语氛围不浓,等,结论：,注意：,1.,词数,100-120,短文开头已给出,(,不计词数,).,2.,参考词汇,:,atmosphere,氛围,I prefer my English classes to be taught in,审文体：,审要求：,审人称：,议论文,根据所给要点，选择一种授课形式提,论点，论据，论证过程,第一人称,某考生,I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese.,Now in our English classes,with how to be taught we have two choices:In English only,or in both English and Chinese,and its all has its advantages and disadvantages.,If in English only,can make our listening and speaking more good,and what worse,we will hard to understand our class.,But if in both English and Chinese,also understand will be more easily,the English atmosphere is less than in English only.,In my opinion,we study English to understand it is the most important.After we study and understand it good,listening or speaking will be easy.So I think my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese will be more better.,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,时下，各类电视节目广泛使用短信参与方式，对此,人们评价不一。请你对此现象向,21st Century,投稿，,谈谈个人看法：,态度一,态度二,你的观点,给观众提供了更多的参与机会,控制不当，节目品位无法保证,？,给媒体带来更多收益,短信费用过高，观众易生反感,迎合年轻人对新事物的追求,沉溺于此，浪费精力,要求,:1,词数：,120,词左右。,2,可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,.,Practice:,提供机会,带来收益,迎合追求,保证品位,产生反感,浪费精力,你的观点,offer chances,bring in profits/benefit from,appeal to the needs of,ensure the taste,feel bad/bored/annoyed,waste time and energy,take a critical attitude,列出要点,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who,did what?,1 offer chances,Audiences are offered more chances to,participate in the live programs.,2 bring in profits/benefit from,They bring in profits to the mass media.,3 appeal to the needs of,They appeal to the needs of the young people.,4 ensure the taste,We cannot ensure the taste of the,programs if short messages are out of,control.,5 feel bad/bored/annoyed,They cost a lot and make the audiences,feel bored.,6 waste time and energy,It will be a waste of time and energy if,the young are addicted to them.,7 take a critical attitude,In my opinion we should take a critical,attitude towards short messages.,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,正确使用过渡词，使行文流畅。并注意段与段的衔接。,表示列举和顺序用,firstly,secondly,last,then,finally,next,such as,，,after that,b.,表示意义增补和引申用,also,besides,above all,whats more/whats worse,c,.,表示结果用,so,therefore,as a result,sothat,d.,表示意义转折用,instead,however,but,e.,表示解释说明用,in other words,that is to say,f.,表示概括和总结用,in one/a word,in all,as we know,g.,表示时间顺序用,now,at first,when,after,h.,表示并列关系用,or,and,also,too,i.,表示条件关系用,as(so)long as,if,unless,j.,表示举例用,for example,for instance,such as,k.,表示让步关系用,though,even if,however,as,1.,过好行文逻辑关,A passage without connectors,Defenders hold the view that,short,messages offer the audiences more,chances to participate in the live,programs,The mass media benefit a,lot from them.They appeal to the need,of the young people,A passage with connectors,Defenders hold the view that,short,messages offer the audiences more,chances to participate in the live programs,In this way,the mass media benefit a lot,from them,On the other hand,they appeal,to the need of the young people,Practice:Try to improve the passage below.,Critics accuse that if the short messages,are out of control,we cannot ensure the,taste of the programs,.,The expenses may,make audiences feel bad,some teenagers,are,addicted to them and too much time,and energy are wasted,Critics accuse that,if the short messages,are out of control,we cannot ensure the,taste of the programs,.,Whats more,the,expenses may make audiences feel bad,To make matters worse,some teenagers,are,so,addicted to them,that,too much time,and energy are wasted,One possible version:,At present,short messages are widely involved in various TV programs.,People react to them in different ways,Defenders hold the view that,short messages offer the audiences more chances to participate in the live programs,In this way,the mass media benefit a lot from them,On the other hand,they appeal to the need of the young people,Critics accuse that,if the short messages are out of control,we cannot ensure the taste of the programs,.,Whats more,the expenses may make audiences feel bad,To make matters worse,some teenagers are so addicted to them that too much time and energy are wasted,As far as I am concerned,the short message is typical of information technology,but it is a powerful tool that needs to be used with care,2.,用活语言，准确生动,使用常用高级语法,:,非谓语动词，,with,复合结构，虚拟语气，强调句，倒装句，感叹句，定语从句，状语从句等,The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.,a.,The meal was very nice.We all enjoyed it very much.,(so that/sothat/suchthat),Not only is he a famous singer but also he has written some interesting books.,b.He is a famous singer.He has also written some interesting books.,(not onlybut also),c.My brother was riding a bike.I sat on the seat behind him.,(with,sb,.doing),My brother was riding a bike with me sitting on the seat behind him.,Not having received his letter he decided to write to her again.,d.He hadnt received a letter.He decided to write to her again.,(not having done),e.We are glad to see such great changes in our,school life.(how),How glad we are to see such great changes in our,school life.,一篇档次较高、得分较多的书面表达，,给阅卷老师的印象应该是：,语意要合情合理，过渡自然；,语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安；,语法要结构正确，无懈可击；,语言要地道流畅，书写规范。,目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。,请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。,有的同学认为,有的同学认为,学校限制我们的自由；学,生和社会接触少；学生的,兴趣和爱好不能得到充分,的发展。因此,学校是学习知识的地方：学,生应该安心在学校里学习；,学生缺乏自觉性，离开了老,师，可能会,你的看法：,注意：,1.,字数,120,左右,;,不要逐字翻译。,2.,短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。,Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all,day long,Practice,Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school,all day long.Students have different opinions about it.Some,of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little,chance to get in touch with society.They are not able to,fully develop their interests and hobbies.Therefore,they,have lost interest in their studies.,Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge,so they should put their heart into their lessons.Some,students lack the ability to control themselves.Once out of,school,they may lose control of themselves and do something,that will influence/affect their studies.,Personally I think,it is necessary to keep students at,school.But at the same time schools should organize various,activities so that students can enjoy their school life.,(I dont agree to keep students at school all day.Schools,should offer students more free time to develop their,personal interests.),文不对题,（文体格式不规范）,离题太远,（抓不到要点，该说的不说，不该说的说的太多）,词不达意,（有的甚至用汉语标注、留空或抄袭试卷上的材料）,病句太多,（时态、语态、人称、数等语法错误）,卷面不工整,（字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头满篇飞，这是经电脑扫描后网上阅卷的大忌,!,）,前车之鉴,!,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,注意时态、标点是否正确,词数是否符合要求,是否有破句等。,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。,卷面不工整要扣分,!,小结,审题，抓点,造句，成文,改错，誉写,Practice makes perfect.,Thank you,for your attention!,