How_to_get_happiness写作课件(定稿).ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,what is,Happiness,Happiness is_,With joy,sweetness,and excitement as,its fruits.Happiness is_,With gentleness,comfort and love as,its furniture(,家具,).Happiness is _,Who teaches us to love,to sacrifice and,own,On happiness,a tree,a house,a teacher,Enjoy a poem,Brainstorming:,Look at the pictures and figure out what happiness means to them?,Happiness means,being creative.,Happiness means,doing exciting things.,roller coaster,Bungee jumping,Happiness means,reading,Happiness means,playing sport,spending time with family.,Happiness means,Happiness means,learning new things,To conclude:,People will be happy when they-,When we are unhappy,my suggestion is that:,do some creative things,do some exciting things,play sport,Learn new things,Forget the worries and be happy every day.,read a good book,Spend time with family,Discussion:,What is happiness to you?,-I will feel happy when,-Happiness means,-Happiness lies in(,在于,),对于一些人而言，他们认为幸福的秘诀在于事业的成功。当他们变得富有成功时，幸福便会随之而来,。,To some,people,they,think that,the secret to happiness lies in,their,successful,work,.,when,they become rich and,successful,happiness will naturally follow.,Wealth brings happiness,lie in,follow,As the saying goes:”Money is not everything,but without money,everything is nothing.”,钱不是万能的，但是没有钱是万万不能的,.,the secret to,sth,Sang,Lan,Tai,Lihua,Do you know these disabled people?,What is happiness to them?,健康是幸福的关键。健康对于人而言就像是鸟的翅膀。如果那些残疾人和正常人一样拥有健康的身体，他们的生活将会更幸福,.,Health is the key to happiness.,Health is certainly more valuable than money because it is by health that money is procured.,-,Samuel Johnson.British writer,英国作家约翰,.S.,health,If,引导的虚拟条件句，与现在事实相反，条件句用一般过去时，主句用情态动词加动词原形,健康比金钱更重要，因为只有健康我们才能获得金钱。,The disabled,the key to,sth,Health to a person is just wings to a bird!,If the disabled people had healthy bodies,they would live a happier life.,Friendship,playsanimportantpartinourlife.,Friendshipnotonlybringsusalotof,happiness,but,also,help,us,when we are in trouble.,Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.,友谊在我们的生活中起着重要的作用。它不仅给我们带来幸福，而且在我们有麻烦时帮助我们。,Play an important part in,Not onlybut also,人生没有朋友犹如人生没有太阳,Without a home,man,alone in the world,tremble with the cold.,Being together with our family makes us happy,.,一个人没有了家庭，独自一人在世界上会冷的发抖。,和家人在一起让我们开心。只有和家人待在一起的时候，我们才能感到更幸福，对生活更满意。,Be satisfied with,Only+when,引导状语从句放句首，主句用部分倒装,Only when the family stay together,，,can we feel happier and more satisfied with our lives,。,快乐,/,幸福是所有人都渴望的。有的人认为拥有很多钱就是快乐，有的人认为拥有健康，朋友就是幸福，还有的人认为拥有幸福的家庭就是快乐。其实快乐,/,幸福就在我们的身边。请以,what is happiness?,为主题，,根据下表内容,来谈一谈幸福是什么？,what is happiness?,金钱论,有钱就可以拥有一切,健康论,健康是快乐的关键（,key,）,友谊论,朋友多了就是快乐,家庭论,一家人其乐融融,你的观点,As we all know,all people are eager(,渴望,)for happiness.,But different people have different understanding of happiness.,Your opinions:,in my opinion/in my viewfrom my point of viewas far as I am concerned personally(speaking)If you ask me,.I believe/feel.,How to express ones opinion?,如何,使文章 起来,“靓”,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,A good composition,As we all know,all people are eager for,happiness.But different people have different,understanding of happiness,Money/wealth,Health,Friends/friendship,family,Your,opinions,2-3points,技 巧,1.,覆盖所有要点,3.,使用恰当的连接词,2.,使用较丰富的句式和语法结构,使文章“靓”起来的技巧,Conjunctions,transitional words,phrases and sentences,连接（过渡）词、短语和句子,（,1,）表示递进的过渡词：,FirstSecondThirdFinally/,Firstly.SecondlyThirdlylastly/Finally,Firstthen next,等。（,2,）表示“此外，还有”的过渡词：,in addition,，,furthermore,，,moreover,，,whats more,besides,（,3,）表示前后呼应,对比的过渡词,On the one hand,on the other hand/,for one thing for another/whats worse/To make matters worse/,等。（,4,）表示结 果 和 原 因 的 过 渡 词：,because,，,since,，,so,，,as a result,，,therefore,等。（,5,）表示目的的过渡词：,for this reason,，,so that,in order to.,（,6,）表示个人观点的过渡词：,in my opinion/from the point of my view/,as far as I am concerned,等。（,7,）表示总结的过渡词：,generally speaking,，,in a word(,总之,),，,in brief,，,in short,，,in general,等。,请注意标点和书写,show time,1.To some,people,they,think that,the secret to happiness lies in,their,successful,work,.,when,they become rich and,successful,happiness will naturally follow.,2.Health is the key to happiness.,Health to a person is just wings to a bird!If the disabled people had healthy bodies,they would live a happier life.,3.Friendship,playsanimportantpartinourlife.,It,notonlybringsusalotofhappiness,butalso,reduces,thesenseofloneliness,.,4.Being together with our family makes us happy.,only when the family stay together,，,can we feel happier and more satisfied with our lives,。,5.Your opinions,FirstSecondThirdFinally/Firstly.SecondlyThirdlylastly/Finally/Firstthen next /in addition,，,furthermore,，,moreover,whats more,besides,On the one hand,on the other hand/for one thing for another/whats worse/To make matters worse/because,，,since,，,so,，,as a result,，,therefore/for this reason,，,so that,in order to./in my opinion/from the point of my view/as far as I am concerned,generally speaking,，,in a word(,总之,),，,in brief,，,in short,，,in general,Conclusion,Happiness is easy to get.,A,fter finding a pair of happy eyes,you,will realize,that,everywhere is the,happiness of life.,Using your eyes to look for happiness.,You will find that life is beautiful.,Thanks for your attention!,