高考英语写作-PPT.ppt

2017年1月高考作文题：假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会。李宏通过邮件向你征求意见，写一封回信，内容须包括：1.你对此事的明确态度；2.你的理由。ImgladtohearthatyouhaveaccesstoparticipateinanoverseascommunicationactivityinBritainwhichwilllasttwomonths.Isuggestthatyoushouldchooseworkingasavolunteerthirtyhourseverymonthforthelocalcommunityaginghospitaltogainachancetostayinitforfree.Myreasonsareasfollows.Notonlycanyouenhanceyoursocialexperiences,butalsoyou can reduce your costs.Contrary to the accommodationarrangedbythehost,youcansavealotofmoney.Undoubtedly,thecostmusthavebeenhighifyouchooseit.Stayingintheaging hospital,the contrast couldnt be greater.On one hand,only by working as a volunteer can you gain a free stay.Itsounds great!Your arrival will add colors to the atmospherethere.On theotherhand,during our spare timewe willalsospendtimehelpingothersinoursocietyteachesustobeawarm-heartedperson.Yourarrivalwillalsoreducetheburdensthere.Asanoldsayinggoes,“wecangainboththingsatthesametime”,sowhynotchooseit?Ihopethatyouwilltakemyadvice,best wishesthatyouwillhaveagoodtimethere,it isagoldenchancethatyouwillgaininsummervacation.Inshort,enjoyyourself.What matters is not where you live but how much you can learn in this trip.Above all,you can keep company with some native senior citizens here who have a hunger for a listener and a friend.You can also be exposed to local culture with their help.Not only can you improve your language skills,which is of vital importance to your stay in Britain,but also your social ability will be enhanced so that you are capable of addressing different things.Not only will your experience the happiness when helping the aged but also you can listen to the senior citizens talking about their life from which you can get a deep understanding of the countrys culture and practice and that will benefit you a lot.*审题假如你是启明中学的王磊，你的学校最近准备引进一个机器人充当食堂服务员或者图书管理员的工作，并在学校的贴吧上向同学们征求意见。你在贴吧上回复向学校提出意见。1.明确提出你的观点；2.通过比较，说明你这样选择的理由。（可从工作效率和服务范围等作比较）（2018年1月高考）通过比较*审题（2018年1月静安一模）你是王华，临近寒假，你的好朋友刘伟写信向你咨询他的寒假计划。目前有三个备选方案，一.去美国某高中参加冬令营;二.应征某历史博物馆临时讲解员；三.提前学习下学期的高中课程。请给刘伟写回信，谈谈你的看法。信中必须包括：1.你建议的方案；2.你如此建议的理由；3.你对于执行此方案的建议。你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高一学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考发邮件向你求教，请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：1.结合你自身的学习经历就是否要请家教表达你的观点及理由；2.就复习迎考给出2条主要建议。*审题（2015年1月黄浦一模）结合你自身的学习经历AI技术迅猛发展，可见的未来就将有很多人会失业。作为高三学生你会因为AI的发展而改变你将要填写的志愿吗？请表明你的观点，并陈述理由。*审题(2018年3月育才学程考）改变你将要填写的志愿吗建议:时间允许的话，圈出题目中 的重点提示，写出outline，再动笔。一.审题到位二.语言丰富各类从句、强调句、倒装句、分词*用好插入语Therearepeople,Iamsure,whowillsaythatthewateristoocold.Hiswords,tosomeextent,areright.Thequestion,frommypointofview,deservesthinkingover.4.Whathedidyesterdaywasdissatisfactory.1.Therearepeoplewhowillsaythatthewateristoocold.2.Hiswordsareright.3.Thequestiondeservesthinkingover.Whathedidyesterday,bynomeans,wassatisfactory.Thereislittle,ifany,hopeofwinning.5.Thereislittlehopeofwinning.*用好副词Obviously,comparingallthecandidates,Idaretosayheisthebestchoice.Tourism,frankly,maypromotethemutualunderstandingamongnations.2.Comparingallthecandidates,Idaretosayheisthebestchoice.1.Tourismmaypromotethemutualunderstandingamongnations.Mostresearchersbelievethat,intheory,mobilephonesareabsolutelysafe.intheoryabsolutely3.Technologicalchangeswillleadtounemploy-ment.Technologicalchangeswillinevitablyleadtounemployment.Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionswillbeputintopractice,andamfullyconvincedthatthecourse will function effectively with our jointefforts.*用好否定1.Themayorisverysatisfiedinherwork.2.WhenIhearofthebirdssong,Ialwaysthinkofthespringtime.Themayorisneverdissatisfiedinherwork.Ineverhearofthebirdssongwithoutthinkingofthespringtime.3.Itispossibletomasteraforeignlanguagewithinashortperiodoftimeifyouuseagoodstudymethod.Itisnotimpossibletomasteraforeignlanguagewithinashortperiodoftimeifyouuseagoodstudymethod.*用好排比1.Frommyobservation,manypeopletodayspendtheirtimereceivingmoreandmoreeducation,workingmoreandmorehours,andmakingmoreandmoremoney.2.Aleaderwhohasrespectforotherpeopleatalllevelsofanorganization,fortheworktheydo,andfortheirabilities,desiresandneeds,willfindthatrespectisreturned.3.Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen.IthinkwomenshouldespeciallyhavetherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequaltermsTheyshouldgetthesamepayasmenforthe same job.They should also have equalopportunitiesforpromotion.I am in favor of equal rights for women,especiallytherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequalterms,therighttogetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob,andtherighttohaveequalopportunitiesforpromotion.一.审题到位二.语言丰富三.示范有效目前，某某学校正在开展推选“校园形象大使”(imageambassadoroncampus)活动。假定你是该校的一名学生，请以书信的形式向校长推荐一位同学或者进行自荐，并结合具体事例阐明推荐的理由。开头段：1.Frommyperspective,themostsuitablepersonismyroommate,Sophia,whohasreallytaughtmewhattheword“excellence”means.2.Hearingtheactivityofselectinganimageambassadoroncampus,Idliketorecommendmyclassmate,Sophia,whoisourspiritualleader.3.Frommyperspective,Jackissignificantlybetterthananyothercandidateinourschool.4.MyrecommendationisatopstudentinmyclassnamedJack,whoenjoysagoodreputationamongallthestudentsofourschool.5.Itisessentialtochooseanimageambassadoroncampus,whoshouldbegoodatbothacademicanddailylifeskills.MystrongrecommendationisJack,whoisreallyaperfectfitforthistitle.Icanfindhisvariousgoodqualitiesandletmeshowyousome.6.Ifyouaskmewhohashelpedmemost,Ithinktheremaynotbeasecondalternative.NooneissuperiortoTominhelpingothers.中间段：1.Hehassomanyadmirablepersonalqualitiesthatthereisnobettersuitablepersonforthisgreathonorinmyheart.2.Asisknowntoall,theimageambassadoroncampusisthesymbolofthewholeschoolstudents.3.Therefore,itsnecessaryforhimorhertogetgoodmarksinbothstudyingandsports.4.Anotherreason,whichisalsoveryimportant,isthathehascharmingappearanceandelegantbehavior.5.Torepresentourschool,theimageambassadorshouldhavethesequalities,whichareabsolutelynecessary.具体事例：1.Moreover,itwasherwarmheartthathadleftmeadeepimpression.Therewasonceaclassmateofherswhohadtroubleingettingalongwithothers.Hewasso frustrated that nearly tried to commit suicide.Fortunately,thankstoSophiascompanyandpatience,hewasinspiredtowalkoutofthedarkness.Hetoldme that she seemed to be an angel to him whodelightedhiswholeworld.2.MyconfidenceisbasedonhispreviousexperienceofparticipatinginModelUnitedNations.Representing China,Ling once served as anambassadortodiscussinternationalaffairs.“Ifirmlybelieve”,withgesturesandcheerfulaccent,Lingsspeech was so stimulating and convincing thateveryone present was deeply shocked.With such perfectperformance,Ling canbecertainlyqualifiedfortheposition.3.Oneofhermostunforgettableexperiencesmaybealivingexampleaccountingformyrecommendation.Inspiteofherordinaryphysicalquality,shesignedupforthelongjumpinthesportsmeetingwithherearnestheart to participate in this meaningful activity.Unfortunately,atfirst,theresultwassopoorthatshecouldhardlybeontherank.Althoughthebadresultmade her in low spirits,instead of giving up,sheinsistedontrainingandsignedupforthenextmeetingagain.She held a firm belief that only by insistentpracticecouldshesucceed.Nosoonerhadshehadspare time than she took great pains to practice thelongjump.Finally,shewonthefirstprizethroughtrailanderror.杨逸雯结尾段：1.Iwasquitemovedbythis,andIthinkyoucantfindanyonewhoismorehelpfulthanhim.Ignoringhimwillbeagreatloss.2.ItneverdawnedonmethatIcouldbethesameashe.3.Inanutshell,Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldgivemetheopportunityofbecomingourschoolsimageambassador.4.Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucouldtakemyrecommendationintoaccount.5.Asitisasymbolofaschoolsoverallstrength,selectingasuitableambassadorisofgreatimportance.6.Obviously,comparingallthecandidates,Idaretosayheisthebestchoice.