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2016届高考英届高考英语二二轮书面表达提面表达提高、升格及分高、升格及分类训练1.一、快速升格你的作文一、快速升格你的作文2.使用高使用高级表达表达 whats more in the same way（同（同样地）地）however because of In addition,furthermore similarly,equally,in comparisonin contrast,on the other hand,on the contrarydue to,owing to,on account of,thanks to,as a result of because in that,for the reason that,the reason for which lies in the fact that3.though/although in a word/in short/all in all today/now shoulddespite in spite of the fact that,whilein brief,in summary,to sum up,to summarize,to conclude,in conclusion nowadays,currently,at presentbe supposed to，be expected to 4.sometimesvery good most of.if occasionally,from time to time,at timesfantastic,awesome,amazing,wonderful,excellentthe majority of.on condition that,as/so long as,suppose,provided that,only if(句首倒装句首倒装)5.as we knowsth.is very important I think It is universally acknowledged thatIt is generally accepted thatsth.should be put in the first place.sth.should be attached great significance to.We can not emphasize the importance of sth.too much.Personally,From my point of view,As far as I am concerned,In my opinion6.If you study hard,you can make progress.Study hard every day and you can make rapid progress.Study hard every day or you may fail to achieve your goal.The harder you work,the more progress you make.Spare no effort to study,in which case you ll make great progress.Sparing no effort to study,you ll make great progress.7.grow fasttry ones best to do.Thank you very much for you help.Plenty of hard work is helpful to English study.increase rapidly/grow amazingly fastWe appreciate your help very much.We owe many thanks to your help.A large quantity of hard work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.spare no effort to do.,do everything one can to do.，go all out to do.，make every effort to do.8.cant do sth.well 为了了 to do.The day is coming.in order to do.,for the purpose of doingThe day is drawing near.The day is around the corner.The day is on the way.have troubledifficultya hard time(in)doing sth.be poor at sth.The day is approaching.9.very nothing butThe film we saw last night was very interesting.The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.The film we saw last night was anything but boring.10.be helpful/useful be of great help/use;contribute toPlenty of memory work is helpful to English study.Plenty of memory work is of great help to English study.Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.11.have to do can not but/can not help but/have no choice but to do I had to go home for it was dark.I could not but go home for it was dark.I have no choice but to go home for it was dark.12.usually/often more often than not;as is often the caseUsually,the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.More often than not,the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.As is often the case,the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.13.be interested in be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted toHe is very interested in collecting stamps.He is caught up in collecting stamps.help do sb a/the favorWould you please help me to turn down the radio?Would you please do me the favor to turn down the radio?14.during in the course of During the mountain-climbing,please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.In the course of the mountain-climbing,please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.15.使用复使用复杂结构构 1.改改变语态 People suggest that we should protect the environment.(一般一般)2.使用不定式使用不定式 He is so kind that he can help me.(一般一般)So kind is he that he can do me a favor.(高高级)3.使用使用过去分去分词 She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(一般一般)It is suggested that the environment be protected.(高高级)He is so kind as to help me.(高高级)Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.She walked out of the lab with many students following her.(高高级)16.使用复使用复杂结构构 4.使用使用V Vinging形式形式 When you arrive,please give me an email.(一般一般)5.使用名使用名词性从句性从句 It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up.(一般一般)6.使用定使用定语从句从句 The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(一般一般)On arriving/your arrival,please give me an email.The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.(高高级)The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(高高级)17.7.使用使用强调句、倒装句、感句、倒装句、感叹句句 Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.(一般一般)Not until 1920 did regular radio broadcasts begin.(高高级)Though Im weak,I will make the effort.(一般一般)I am glad to see the smile on my teacher face.(一般一般)It was not until 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began.(高高级)Weak as/though I am,Ill make the effort.(高高级)How glad I am to see the smile on my teacher face!(高高级)18.8.Everyday,theyhavemuchhomework.Theyaretoobusytorememberthecharacters.（状语从句）（独立主格结构）Every day,they have so much homework to do that they fail to remember the characters.（状语从句）With so much homework to do every day,they have trouble in remembering the characters.（独立主格结构）Every day,so much homework do they have that they fail to remember the characters.（倒装）19.9.Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Itwillraise the awareness of ourmothertongue.（高级词汇）Itwill have a positive effect onstudentsChineselearning.（高级词汇）Itwillnot onlyraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue,but alsohaveapositiveeffectonstudentsChineselearning.（合并）20.二、二、单句句练习21.翻翻译下列句子下列句子1不用不用说早睡早起是早睡早起是值得的。得的。_2我深信我深信预防防胜于治于治疗。_3在在各种各种运运动中，我中，我尤其喜尤其喜欢慢跑。慢跑。_4时间最珍最珍贵,这是很容易是很容易证明的明的。_ 5就我所知就我所知，下列方法，下列方法对我我帮助很大帮助很大。_It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.Among various kinds of sports,I am fond of jogging in particular.It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time.As far as my knowledge is concerned,the following ways are of great help to me.22.6毫无疑毫无疑问，近，近视在我国的年在我国的年轻人中是一个人中是一个严重的重的问题。_7根据我个人根据我个人经验，微笑已，微笑已带给我我许多好多好处。_8在我的求学在我的求学过程中程中,我忘不了学我忘不了学习英文所遇到的大困英文所遇到的大困难。_9随着随着经济的快速的快速发展，展，许多社会多社会问题产生了。生了。_There is no doubt that nearsightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country.According to my personal experience,smile has done me a lot of good.In the course of my schooling.I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English.With the rapid development of economy,large quantities of social problems have come out.23.10在在这信息的年代，信息的年代，计算机扮演非常重要的角色。算机扮演非常重要的角色。_11世上没有什么比到快餐店吃世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高堡更令我高兴的。的。_ 12我我们保持公共保持公共场所清所清洁是是应当的。当的。_13每当我想到那个每当我想到那个时刻，我就忍不住感到激刻，我就忍不住感到激动。_In the age of information and communication,computer plays an extremely important role.Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fastfood restaurants.It is proper that we are supposed to keep the public places clean.Whenever I think of the very moment,I cannot but feel excited.24.14人人们相信相信阅读增加我增加我们的知的知识、扩大我大我们的心胸。的心胸。_ 15青少年犯罪的主要理由是社会青少年犯罪的主要理由是社会环境日益境日益败坏。坏。_16俗俗话说得好：得好：诚实为上策。上策。_17人人们学外学外语有三个理由。有三个理由。_18为了了维护健康，我健康，我们每天至少可做三件事。每天至少可做三件事。_ It is generally convinced(that)reading increases our knowledge as well as broadens our mind.The main reason why the teenagers commit crimes is that social environment is becoming worse.As an old saying goes,“Honesty is the best policy.”People learn a foreign language for three major reasons.In order to keep healthy,there are at least three things we can do every day.25.19相反，多数学生似乎相反，多数学生似乎还是是对课外活外活动感感兴趣的趣的。_20政府政府应严格格执法，另一方面，大众也法，另一方面，大众也应该培养减培养减少少污染的好染的好习惯。_ 21换言之，我会尽最大的努力完成我的目言之，我会尽最大的努力完成我的目标。_ 22从此之后，我已从此之后，我已发现微笑是日常生活中避免冲突微笑是日常生活中避免冲突的最好的最好办法。法。_On the contrary,a majority of students,it seems,are still keen on afterclass activities.The government is expected to enforce the law strictly.On the other hand,the public also should develop the good habit of reducing pollution.To put it differently,I will spare no effort to attain(achieve,live up to,accoplish)my goal.Ever since then,I have found smile is the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives.26.23更更严重的是，我重的是，我们不珍惜野生不珍惜野生动物。物。_24做做这些些简单之事，我之事，我们一定可以快一定可以快乐出出门平安回家。平安回家。_25唯有通力合作，我唯有通力合作，我们才能期望情况不久有新的改才能期望情况不久有新的改观。_ What is more serious is that we do not cherish wildlife.By doing these simple things,we surely/definitely can go out of the door happy and come back home safe every day.Only with combined efforts can we expect the situation to take on a new look in the near future.27.26最后但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助最后但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助长青青少年犯罪的原因。少年犯罪的原因。_27总而言之，好公民而言之，好公民应该遵守交通遵守交通规则。_28因此我因此我们可以得出可以得出结论，那就是世上自由最珍，那就是世上自由最珍贵。_ In conclusion,a good citizen is supposed to observeobeyfollow traffic regulations.We can,therefore,come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world.Last but no least,the deficiency in education is the cause contributing to the crime of the young.28.29如果我如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑能做到如上所述，毫无疑问，我，我们就就能精通英能精通英语。_30目前根据一目前根据一项调查，中国学生半数以上患有近，中国学生半数以上患有近视，位居世界第一。，位居世界第一。_31中国在世界上人口最多，占到了中国在世界上人口最多，占到了20%，其次是，其次是印度，占到印度，占到17%。_ China has the largest population of the world,which accounts for about 20%,followed by India,making up about 17%.Currently,according to a survey,more than half of Chinese school children are shortsighted,ranking first in the world.On condition that we can do as mentioned above,there can be no doubt that we can acquire a good knowledge of English.29.写作写作练习一一假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。注意：1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.词数120左右；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。参考词汇：文科：arts；理科：scienceGoodafternoon,everyone.Welcometoourschool!_Thanks!30.短文改错Goodafternoon,everyone,Welcometoourschool!Ifeelextremehonoredhere,onbehalfofallthestudentsinourschool,toaddressyourguestsfromAmerica,sharewithyoumyexperienceofchoosingthemainsubjectbetweenscienceandarts.Atpresent,highschoolstudentsfacedwithachoicebetweenartsandscience.Intermsofme,itwasnotaeasychoicetomake.Aftercarefulconsideration,though,Idecidedonscienceasmymainsubjectofstudy.Myreasonsareasfollow.31.Tostart,sciencegraduatesareingreatdemandthanartsonesinChina.Additionally,thesciencemajorcanhelpmeachievemychildhooddreamofbecomingascientist.Furthermore,myparentswishmetostudyscienceatcollegebecausetheybelieveIwillhaveabrighterfutureasasciencestudent.Lastbutnotleast,myphysicsteacherismyrolemodel,hisinfluenceonmehadalotoftodowithmydecision.ItisforthereasonsmentioningabovethatIfinallymademychoice.Thanks!32.Goodafternoon,everyone,Welcometoourschool!Ifeelextremelyhonoredhere,onbehalfofallthestudentsinourschool,toaddressyouguestsfromAmerica,sharingwithyoumyexperienceofchoosingthemainsubjectbetweenscienceandarts.Atpresent,highschoolstudentsarefacedwithachoicebetweenartsandscience.Intermsofme,itwasnotaneasychoicetomake.Aftercarefulconsideration,though,Idecidedonscienceasmymainsubjectofstudy.Myreasonsareasfollows.33.Tostart,sciencegraduatesareingreaterdemandthanartsonesinChina.Additionally,thesciencemajorcanhelpmeachievemychildhooddreamofbecomingascientist.Furthermore,myparentswishmetostudyscienceatcollegebecausetheybelieveIwillhaveabrighterfutureasasciencestudent.Lastbutnotleast,myphysicsteacherismyrolemodel,whoseinfluenceonmehadalottodowithmydecision.ItisforthereasonsmentionedabovethatIfinallymademychoice.Thanks!34.35.