高考英语概要写作.ppt

提供一篇提供一篇350350词以内的短文，要求考生基以内的短文，要求考生基于于该短文写出一篇短文写出一篇6060字左右的内容概要。字左右的内容概要。阅卷卷时主要考主要考虑以下内容：以下内容：(1)(1)对原文要点的理解和呈原文要点的理解和呈现情况情况(2)(2)应用用语法法结构和构和词汇的准确性的准确性(3)(3)上下文的上下文的连贯性性(4)(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况各要点表达的独立性情况概要写作概要写作2023/5/241WhilereadingWhilewriting Tips on summary writing Tips on summary writing 2023/5/242 Whilereading 1.Isthepassageanarration,exposition,argumentationoradescription?2.Isthereanytopicsentenceorkeywords?Ifso,underlinethem.3.Gothroughthesupportingdetailsorevidencetocheckwhetherthetopicsentenceorkeywordsyoufindisappropriate.Tips on summary writing Tips on summary writing outline topic sentence supporting details(conclusion)(以以议论文文为例例)2023/5/243Whilewriting 1.Structure1)Topicsentence*2)Mainsupportingpoints/evidence3)About60words2.Language1)Touseyourownwords*2)Tobeconcise(leaveoutthedetails;reducetheexamples;simplifythedescriptions;eliminateallrepetitions.3)Topresenttheinformationfairly,donotgiveyourowncomments4)Tousethethirdpersontoretell5)Tense2023/5/244Para1：Childraisingfindouttopsentencesorwordswhichcanbestservethemainidea.Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world.Since babies do not come with child raising manuals(指南),couples,especially future mothers,have to learn from their mothers,aunts,mothers-in-law,or any other relative who is close to them.difficultTopic：Characteristics：Reasonsu找找对主旨句主旨句Step1reading2023/5/245Para2：As children grow up,parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children,advise them,punish them,lead them to achievements,and teach them.Sometimes children under ten may behave inappropriately.For example,they learn to say offensive words and they show no respect for their relatives.I think parents in these cases should punish their children in a reasonable way.Children must know those kinds of attitudes are not good at all.Adetailedexampleu忽略具体事例，或者一笔忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过2023/5/246Para3：There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job,for example,the culture in which they live,the economic situation in their society,and the religious environment.Para4One group consists of people who dont have economical resources or education.Para 5Other groups of people are hard workers or well-educated.u例子若篇幅例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括要概括Evidence2023/5/247Step2writingHowtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Para1Childraisingisprobablyoneofthemostdifficultjobsforpeopletodoallovertheworld.Tip1：分析句子：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息构，抓住重点信息Childraisingisadifficultjob.2023/5/249Step2writingHowtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Bringing up a childChildraisingisadifficultjob.Tip2：转换同同义词或者或者词性性 is hard work/Tip3：转换句型句型It is rather tough to raise a child for people.difficult/tough.2023/5/2410Step2writingHowtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Para2Aschildrengrowup,parentshavetofindreasonablewaysinordertohelptheirchildren,advisethem,punishthem,leadthemtoachievements,andteachthem.Tip4：用一个可以涵盖的：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列概括几个列举的的并列并列词汇 educate their children Parents should _ to educate their children.adopt reasonable methods 2023/5/2411Step2writingHowtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Therearemanyaspectswhichinfluenceparentsinthishardjob.Tip5：代：代词转换成具体信息成具体信息There are many factors that influence the parents in _.bringing up their childrentwo examples are given in order to make it clear2023/5/2412Step2writingHowtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Onegroupconsistsofpeoplewhodonthaveeconomicalresourcesoreducation.Othergroupsofpeoplearehardworkersorwell-educated.Tip6：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性In order to make it clear,two examples are given,which show that _children raised in families with different economical and educational background may have different futures2023/5/2413