托福写作开头及例题（老师总结）.doc

评论类开头：
常规写法：
1. 背景句
2. 转化的观点内容
3. 对应的回答
1. 科技对某个行业形成冲击
Schools are no l　onger necessary, because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well as home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The Internet is advancing at a staggering rate and is transforming the whole way of our life especially recreational activities. For example, it is claimed that people can just stay at home, making full use of abundant information on the Internet，instead of going to museums and art galleries as they did before. I find myself in disagreement with the statement expressed in the question.

转换方法：
1. 利弊
More a curse than a blessing
The detriments overshadow the benefits
2. sb can do sth = sb can shoulder the responsibility to do sth.
Sb can not do sth= the responsibility to do sth is too heavy for sb to shoulder.
3.因地制宜
Different approaches should be applied according to the different situations of……
4. 做某事需要多方努力
It is a comprehensive and wholesome task to do sth, which needs the cooperation and coordination of A ,B and C.
5. 不同意某观点：
I find myself in disagreement with the statement expressed in the question.

I find it really difficult to justify the argument from any perspective.

I think= I am convinced

练习：
The speeding up of life in many areas such as travel and communication has negative effects on society at all levels—individual, national and global. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The science and technology are advancing at a staggering rate and transforming our whole way of our life, especially travel and communication. However, it is claimed that the acceleration in travel and communication is more a curse than a blessing for our society. I find myself in disagreement with the statement expressed in the question.
2． 科技本身带来问题
There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? 

The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.

二： 万能写法：
Some people believe that individuals can not improve environment, but only governments and big companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years ，the issue about sth/ to do/宾语从句 has become a relatively new one in newspapers and on TV, to which different opinions are deeply divided. 对应的回答

In recent years, the issue of…./ to…/ 同位语从句 has become a relatively new one in newspapers and on TV, with many people taking the attitude that…………., while others believe that…………. I find myself in agreement with the former/ latter view.

Sending criminals to the prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years，the issue how to cope with the criminals has become a relatively new one in newspapers and on TV , to which different opinions are deeply divided. I am convinced that different approaches should be applied according to different situations of criminals.
结尾：
1. 过渡词语 in sum, to sum up,
2. 总结上文
3. 题目没有问怎么办的情况下，提出一些象征性的解决方法
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. Some people think that preventing these wild animals from dying out is a waste of resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
① To sum up, we can not live without wild animals due to their profound effects on us. ②For this reason, we should try our best to protect them. one thing should be remembered ---- protecting wild animals is equivalent to protecting ourselves.

经典结尾方法：

The advantages brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
涉及到利弊的话题
一般：
practical solutions should be worked out by experts or government to maximize the benefits of 。。。。 and to minimize its downside effects on 。。。。
利大于弊：
I think …… is generally positive and we cannot, and should not, bring everything to a halt to hope that no negative effects would result. How unpractical and ridiculous that would be! Of course, practical solutions should be worked out by experts or government to maximize the benefits of 。。。。 and to minimize its downside effects on 。。。。

两种方法都对：
Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do you think about it?
We should find the right balance between A and B and I believe the government has a very important role to play here. In my own country, for example, many ….. have made effective development plans to successfully …. while still preserving …….
两种做法都不太合适：
In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should wok in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your own opinion.

The best solution, therefore, is not to order, but to encourage. We should instill a sense of responsibility in young people and give more incentives to those who are willing to work in difficult areas, so that we can address the problem of urban-rural disparity while respecting whatever decisions new teachers or doctors have made.