人教版book5unit2writing地点写作.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2019/12/21,#,Writing about a place,writing,描写地点,【写作任务】,假如你是导游李华,你将带领一个外国旅游团游览北京。请用英语写一个发言稿。,内容要点如下：,(1),北京是中国首都，位于中国北部,;,(2),人口达,2114,万，面积是,16410,平方千米,;,(3),拥有,3000,多年悠久历史，在不同的朝代有不同的称谓,;,(4),作为文化名城，它拥有众多名胜，如长城，故宫等，吸引八方来客,;,(5),2008,年成功举办了奥运会，给世界人民很好的机会了解北京。,注意：,1)不要逐条翻译，但可增加细节，以使文章连贯、通顺；,2)词数：120左右,3)参考词汇：,参考词汇：朝代,dynasty,故宫,the Forbidden City,颐和园,the Summer Palace,Ladies and Gentlemen，,Welcome to Beijing.Im Li Hua.And Im more than glad to be your guide.,.,Finally,I sincerely hope every one of you will enjoy yourself here.,Ladies and Gentlemen，,Welcome to Beijing.Im Li Hua.And Im more than glad to be your guide.,.,Finally,I sincerely hope every one of you will enjoy yourself here.,第一步：审题,文体：描写地点的说明文；,时态：多用一般现在时；,人称：以第三人称为主。,location,population,area,history,culture,living,conditions,education,economy,a place,Possible subjects,：,简称：,地面气著,应介绍这个地方的,地,（地理位置，历史）.,面,（面积，人口），,气,（气候状况），著（与众不同之处）,Useful Phrases:,Location:,lie in;be located in,Area:,cover an area of;with an area of,Population:,has a population of;with a population of,History:,has a history of.;with a history of,places of interest:,be famous for.,1.Location(,位置,):,1)lie in 2)be located in/on/to,温哥华位于加拿大的西海岸,.,Vancouver,is located on,the west coast of Canada.,温哥华位于加拿大的西海岸,是一个美丽的城市。,Vancouver,a,beautify city,is located on,the west coast of Canada.,温哥华位于加拿大的西海岸,是个美丽的城市,有着舒适的居住环境。,句子合并：,Vancouver,a,beautiful city,with,a comfortable living condition,is located on,the west coast of Canada.,Located on,the west coast of Canada,Vancouver,is a beautiful city,with,a comfortable living condition.,巧用同位语、分词，,with,结构等,2.Area(,面积,):,1)cover/have an area of square kilometers.,2)with an area of,3.Population(,人口,),：,1)have a population of 2)with a population of,广州，中国第三大城市，,/,面积：,7,434,平方公里，,/,人口：大约一千万。,Guangzhou,is,the third largest city in China.,It,covers an area of,7,434 square kilometers.,It,has,a population of,about 10 million.,句子合并,:,Guangzhou,the third largest city in,China,covers an area of,7,434 square kilometers,with a population of,about 10 million.,巧用同位语，,with,结构等,广州,位于,广东的中部是中国,第三大城市,；,面积,有,7,434,平方公里；,人口,是大约一千万。,Guangzhou,，,the third largest city in China,is,located in,the centre of Guangdong province.,Guangzhou,covers an area of,7,434 square kilometers,with a population of,more than 11 million.,句子合并,:,Located in,the centre of Guangdong province,Guangzhou,the third largest city in,China,covers an area of,1,783 square kilometers,with a population of,1.46million.,巧用同位语，,with,结构等,4.History(,历史,),have,a(long)history(of years).,be a place with a(long)history(of years).,3)The history can date back to,中山是一座历史很悠久的城市，能够追溯到宋代。,Zhongshan,is,a city,with,a long history.,Its history,can date back to,Song Dynasty.,句子合并：,Zhongshan,is a city,with,a long history,which,can date back to Song Dynasty.,5.Places of interest(,名胜,),be well-known/famous for,be a place with many famous places of interest such as,.,悉尼是澳大利亚最大的城市，有许多名胜，比如说悉尼歌剧院,(Sydney Opera House),。它每年吸引了成千上万的来自世界各地的游客。,Sydney,the biggest city in Australia,has many places of interest,such as,Sydney Opera House,attracting,millions of tourists from all over the world every year.,Sydney,is the biggest city,in Australia,with,many places of interest,such as,Sydney Opera House,which attracts,millions of tourists from all over the world every year.,6.,气候特征：,The climate there,is mild all the year around,with an average temperature,about 22.,The average temperature of Hong Kong is about 22 and the rainy season is between May and July.,开头段（introduction）：,自我介绍，表示欢迎,主体段（main part）：,简明介绍，即地理位置、人口、历史等关于地方的基本信息；,同时介绍某地具有地方特色的情况，如景点和北京奥运等；,结尾段（conclusion）：,希望游客玩得开心。,第二步：布局谋篇（,What,How,）,outline,第三步：行文表达,1.,语言分,：,词汇、句型和语法运用准确；,2,.,结构分,：布局合理，层次分明，行文连贯、流畅、得体,；,3.,内容分,：内容和要点完整；,4.,卷面分,：规范、清楚、美观。,语言分内容特别提示,如果同学们想进一步得高分的话，可以将句型再丰富一些，最好能用一些,非谓语动词结构、主从复合句,，适当的地方还可以用,倒装句、强调句,等，但前提是一定要有把握；在用词方面也应尽量丰富一些，不要翻来覆去总用那几个词。,Ladies and Gentlemen，,Welcome to Beijing.Im Li Hua.And Im more than glad to be your guide.,Beijing,the capital city of China,is located in,the north of China,which,covers an area of,16,410 square kilometers,with a population of,21.14 million.It was,an ancient city with a long history of,more than 3000 years and has different name,s,in different dynastie,s,.As a famous cultural city,Beijing,is famous for many places of interest,such as,the Great Wall,the Forbidden City and so on,attracting,tourists from home and abroad every year.,It is in 2008 that,Beijing,succeeded in holding,the Olympic Games,which,offers a very good chance for people around the world to know more about it.,Finally,I sincerely hope every one of you will enjoy yourself here.,