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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,写作集锦,1/61,写作,：,高级句型：,1.,我突然想出一个好主意。,“我”做主语,I came up with a good idea.,I happened to think of a good idea.,“,主意”做主语,A good idea flashed into my mind.,A good idea came to my mind.,2/61,尽最大可能做某事,make a strong effort to do sth,try/do ones best to do,3/61,“使某人”句型,to ones surprise(,一定是名词,)(使某人感到诧异是）,to ones excitement(使某人感到兴奋）,to ones amazement(使某人感到惊奇）,to ones disappointment(使某人感到失望）,to ones satisfaction(使某人感到满意）,To ones relief(使某人感到宽慰）,4/61,毫不犹豫，头也不回,without thinking twice,he,without hesitation,he,5/61,一就,on/upon doing sth,正要做突然,be doingwhen,刚要做突然,be about to dowhen,刚做完某事突然,had just donewhen,6/61,万能句,开头句：,As far asbe concerned,(就某人而言）,It can be said with certainty that(能够确切说）,There is no doubt that(毫无疑问）,7/61,衔接句,However,the problem is not so simple.Therefore,然而事情不简单，所以,However,we have to look at the other side of the coin,that is必须事情另一面,8/61,结尾句,I will conclude by saying that,It can be concluded from the discussion that,From my point of view,it would be better,if,9/61,看图作文,校外体验；自我价值提升,城市体验；展现北京风貌,校园体验；丰富多彩校园生活,家庭体验；我爱父亲妈妈,10/61,一：校外体验,审题注意事项：心情十分愉悦,事件十分有意义,立意原由：参加活动,参观地方,11/61,开篇,参加活动和活动影响,参加某次活动,take part in/participate in/attend(a ceremony,meeting),join(a club,an organization),时间状语，主语+参加某次活动,12/61,衔接,这是我们做过最有意义一件事,It is the most meaningful thing that we have ever done.,单词扩展：meaningful,unforgettable,impressive,句型总结：主语+be+adj(最高级）+n,+that+I/we have ever seen/heard,had/done/read 等,13/61,注意：,开篇长句更精彩,Yesterday Li Ming and I took part in a wild,survival program,which was one of the most meaningful,impressive and unforgettable experiences that we have ever had.,14/61,事件开端（第一幅图）,事前准备；,在出发之前，我们讨论该做什么,Before leaving,we had a class meeting to,discuss where to go/what to do,15/61,有许多想法；,have some ideas,单词扩展：,come up with some ideas/choices such as doing A,doing B,and doing C,16/61,出发了！以某种方式抵达,set off(for sp.)/to leave(for sp),arrive there by bike/bicycle to sp.,句子：早晨，我们骑车到哪里,In the morning,we bicycled there.,In the morning,we arrived there by bike.,17/61,加入心情：,talking and laughing all the way,长句：Early in the morning,we bicycled there to plant trees,talking and laughing all,the way.,句型：时间状语，主语+谓语+宾语（目标状语）,18/61,第卷（共35分）,第四部分：书面表示（共两节，35分）,第一节 情景作文（20分）,假设你是红星中学高三一班学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为Our Spring Outing英文稿件。请依据以下四幅图先后次序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束完整过程。,注意：词数不少于60。,提醒词：游乐园 amusement park,垃圾箱 bin,19/61,20/61,事件发展,One possible version:,Last Thursday,we had a class meeting to discuss,where to go for our spring outing.We,came up with several choices,such as going boating,climbing mountain,and going to an amusement park.,21/61,Finally,we decided to go mountain climbing.The next day,we,set off,early in the morning.,While,climbing the mountain,we,enjoyed,the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.,22/61,However,when reached the top,we,were shocked to,see litter here and there,such as bottles and banana peels.,Then,we started to pick up the litter.Afterwards,we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.,We were tired but happy.,23/61,事件结束，结尾升华,环境保护,（结尾句）,1)I firmly believe that nothing is more important than to protect and,beautify,our environment.,24/61,2)We feel it our duty to protect and beautify our environment.,25/61,收尾句大全,生活态度：,I believe that an active attitude towards life is important and we should fill our life with happiness and sunshine.,Since“life is a stage”,we are actually all actors.On this stage,everyone should try to play his role well.,26/61,合作：,Personally,I prefer to work in a team,which,offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experience with them.,I believe that by doing all these small things we,can improve改进 our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.,27/61,帮助他人,We should offer our help to the person in need.I believe that if everyone can give love to others,the relationship between people will be harmonious.,In my opinion,if everyone does a little bit for others,our world will be a better one.,28/61,面对困境，实现梦想,In my opinion,whatever difficulties we may face,we should,hold on to坚持,our own dream.,It is we who determine the success of our own.,29/61,总结：,1.事件完整：时间、地点、外出方式,2.外出心情：enjoy,excited,pleased,3.时间高潮：第2.3幅图,4.结尾总结：事件意义（自我价值提升）,30/61,二、城市体验,审题注意事项：北京十分漂亮,游客十分满意,立意原由：带某人参观/游览北京,31/61,事件开始：带某人去某地,1）时间状语+I took sb.to spwho came to China for the first time.,2)时间状语+I acted as a guide,showing sb.around the most famous,scenic spots景点,in Beijing,such as the Great Wall and the Birds Nest.,32/61,3)在某地集合：,We will meet/gather+地点状语+时间状语and set off by bus.,33/61,开始游览：,1）第一个景点：,a:Having been told about the history of the Great Wall,sb was amazed at this,world wonder世界奇观,.,34/61,b.The first place we will visit is the world famous spot.,2)第二个景点：,a:After two hours there,we will leave for,b:The afternoon tour will begin from the Summer Palace at about 2:00 pm.,c:In the evening，we will watch a wonderful Beijing opera.,35/61,3)心情体会：,a:He was,struck给以(深刻)印象,by the beauty of the Great Wall.So I took photos for him,which would be a good memory for him.,b:wherever he went,he had some photos taken to help him,memorize,this unforgettable trip to China.,36/61,c:At the top,sb.was interested in the activity of doing sth.,d:When you are standing on the wall,you will feel amazed at this man-made wonder on earth.,e:Tom can take a boat to enjoy the beautiful scenery in the garden and feel,free to look around.,37/61,f:You will experience a real Chinese culture.,注意：拍照是为了纪念。,take photos to memorize/be a memory.,38/61,游览结束：,a:Both the Great Wall and the Chinese people impressed him deeply.,b.When the time came for us to say goodbye,I gave sb.sth as a souvenir/gift.,c.After the show/visiting,sb.expressed ones thanks to sb.,39/61,40/61,41/61,Possible version,Good evening,ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Hua.I have the honour of being your guide tomorrow.Now Id like to give you a brief introduction to our tour.,Well meet at the school gate at 8:00am and set off by bus.As the old Chinese saying,goes所言,“He,who does not reach the Great Wall 定从,is not a true man.”,42/61,The first place we will visit is the World famous spot.When you are standing on the wall,you will feel amazed at this man-made wonder on earth.After two hours there,well leave for a snack street where varieties of foods will be waiting for you,to try.,43/61,The afternoon tour will begin from the Summer Palace at about 2:00pm.You can take a boat to enjoy the beautiful scenery in the garden and feel free to look around there until 4:00pm.In the evening,we will,watch a wonderful Beijing opera which,will let you,experince a real Chinese culture,.After the show,well return to the,44/61,school at 9:00 pm.,Thanks for your listening and I hope you can enjoy your tour tomorrow.,45/61,总结：,1.事件完整：时间、地点,2.景点特征：吸引人原因,3.人物心情：诧异、兴奋、被吸引,4.结尾：“影响”impress sb,表示谢意：express ones thanks to sb,46/61,三.校园体验,审题注意事项：老师十分主要,同学十分友好,立意原由：学校那些事,47/61,事件开始：安排活动，介绍情况。,1）安排活动：时间状语+our class held/organized an activity to+目标状语,2）有准备：时间状语/Before the activity,we had a class meeting to discuss what to do.,3)介绍情况：While you are here,we will,48/61,事件进展,时间状语+,we carried out our plan,Classes,used to,beginBut now we,时间链接NowAfter that,Apart from that除了,Furthermore,49/61,个人感受：,We all felt happy about what we had done for our teachers.,Well do our,utmost最大,to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experince.（do ones utmost=do ones best),I think all the schools should have these kinds of,drills操演,so that,50/61,写作准备,与学校生活相关一些词汇,课程开始：classes begin,体育运动：take exercise/sports/have time for sports,吃饭：eat at the school dining hall,课外活动：a variety of out-of-class activities,艺术节：an art festival,上网:surf the Internet for useful information,51/61,玩电脑游戏：play the computer games for,relaxation,做家庭作业：have homework to do/do homework,减负增效：,reduce unnecessary burden for more,effective learner,打球：play ball games,游泳馆：swimming pool,班长竞选：monitor election,52/61,校园体验仿写,(1),Classes used to begin,very early in the morning,so,we had to go to school without breakfast,which,more or less,affected our health,and studies in class.,(2),Now,we have an hour for sports each day.,(3)We can take whatever exercise or sport we like.,(4),Apart from that,we also have a variety of,out-of-class activities,such as,going mountain,climbing,or holding an art festival.,53/61,另外：in addition(to);Besides;Whats more;,moreover;Furthermore,所以：Therefore/Thus/As a result,(5)Furthermore,as unnecessary burden is,reduced,we have less homework to do,in the evening.,54/61,总结：,1.多方面细致描写,2.学习和生活娱乐同等主要,55/61,四.家庭体验,1.审题注意事项：,我爱父亲妈妈,2.立意原由：,在某一个节日向父母表示爱意和敬意,56/61,开篇：,If you ask me who I love most,I will definitely provide you with the answer“my mum did”.I still remember what I did last(sth),结尾：It was an unforgettable day,because I did something for her/him.,57/61,固定句型：,1.时间状语+I decided to do something special for my mum/dad to express my,gratitude感激,to her/him.,58/61,写作准备,与家务相关词汇,买菜：buy some vegetables,擦地：sweep the floor,做饭：cook the dishes,59/61,正反对比议论文,第一段：总述；Recently,our class have had a,heated激烈,discussion about sth.,第二段：赞成；Sb,be in favor of sth,.They say that(理由1）,Besides,they,believe that,(理由2）,60/61,第三段：反对；However,other students are against the idea,saying,（理由一）Whats more,doing sth(理由二）,第四段：自己看法：,As far as Im concerned,61/61,
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