应用文体之二日记市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,应用文体之(二)日记,一、文体解读,日记是把自己在当天生活中经历故意义事以及见闻感受统计下来书面形式。写英文日记时应注意下列三点：,1注意格式,(1)日期、星期普通顶格写在正文之前。能够先写星期几，后写年月日，也能够先写年月日，后写星期几。,第1页,第1页,(2)天气情况应写在日期和星期同一行稍靠右之处。表示天气情况惯用fine,cloudy,rainy,snowy,windy,stormy等形容词来表示。,(3)正文。正文内容应当思想健康，积极向上。文章可长可短，开头语应简练，结尾可适当发表感想。,2注意人称选择,由于日记内容多是记叙自己亲身经历或抒发自己感想，因此多用第一人称I或we。,第2页,第2页,3拟定正确时态,日记普通写当天发生事情，因此通常使用普通过去时。当然，即使发生在过去事情，为了描写生动，也能够使用现在时，以表现当初情况。发表感想或议论时则可用现在时或未来时。,第3页,第3页,二、写作范句必备,1开头惯用语：,Today is a weekend and it is the traditional Chinese festival the Midautumn Festival.,今天是周末，也是中国老式节日中秋节。,Today I showed some foreign friends around our city.,今天我带领外国朋友参观了我们都市。,This morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class.,今天早晨，老师在课堂上向我们讲了一些关于希望工程事。,第4页,第4页,2结尾惯用语：,We did have a wonderful time today.,我们今天真度过了美好一天。,I felt very happy today because Ive done a good deed.,我今天感到非常高兴，由于我做了一件好事。,We felt tired but happy.,我们感到很累，但是很幸福。,第5页,第5页,You cant imagine how disappointed I was today.,你想象不到我今天是多么失望。,What a good trip we had today!Ill never forget it.,我们今天旅途非常愉快，我将永远不会忘掉。,第6页,第6页,(北京高考),假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华，校报英文版正在开展,“,续写雷锋日记,”,活动。请依据下列四幅图先后顺序，将你所做一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。,注意：1.日记开头已为你写好。,2词数不少于60。,第7页,第7页,第8页,第8页,Saturday,June 2 Fine,This morning,_,_,_,第9页,第9页,第一步：列好提纲，不漏要点,1,_,2 _,3 _,事件及发生时间；,事件通过及详细细节描写；,自己感受及感想。,第10页,第10页,第二步：翻译句子，营造亮点,1今天早上，我在街上走着时候，看到两位游客在看地图，显得不知所措。,_,_,(并列句),_,_(现在分词作状语),This morning,I was walking on the street when I saw two travelers reading a map,and they looked puzzled.,This morning,when I was walking on the street,I saw that two travelers were reading a map,looking puzzled.,第11页,第11页,2我把他们领到附近车站，并提议他们乘坐20路公交车，它能带他们直接去那儿。,_,_,(并列句),_,_,(定语从句),I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20 and it could take them there directly.,I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20,which could take them there directly.,第12页,第12页,3看到他们在公共汽车上，我有一个满足感。,_,_(状语从句),_,(现在分词作状语),When I saw them on the bus,I felt satisfied with what I had done.,Seeing them on the bus,I felt a kind of satisfaction.,第13页,第13页,第三步：做好衔接，连句成文,Saturday,June 2 Fine,This morning,_,_,When I was walking on the street,I saw that two travelers were reading a map,looking puzzled.It seemed they were lost.I went up to them and asked how I could help.They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven.I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20,which could take them there directly.They appreciated my help greatly.Before long,the bus came.We waved goodbye to each other.Seeing them on the bus,I felt a kind of satisfaction.,第14页,第14页,(合肥一模),假设你是某所中学学生，3月22日(世界水日)你参与了你班开展一系列节水宣传活动。请依据下列四幅图先后顺序，以日记形式统计当天活动内容。,注意：词数120左右。,提醒词：宣传材料leaflets；,危机crisis,第15页,第15页,March 22,Friday Sunny,Today is World Water Day._,_,_,_,_,_,第16页,第16页,参考范文：,March 22,Friday Sunny,Today is World Water Day.In the morning,we had a class meeting talking about what to do on this special day.Finally,we reached an agreement and immediately began to make preparations for the afternoons activities.,第17页,第17页,At 2：00 pm,we went to the neighboring community to hand out leaflets,calling on people to save water.Around 3 oclock,the expert we invited made an excellent speech on the current water crisis in China.He talked about the drought in the Southeast and the severe shortage of water in our city.The speech had a strong appeal to all the people present,including me.,第18页,第18页,After the speech,we had a discussion with our neighbors about various ways of saving water in our daily life.I suggested turning off the tap water immediately after use,and a granny came up with the ideas of reusing the water from kitchen,for example,the water after washing fruits and vegetables can be used to water flowers and so on.,Today,I have had a better understanding of the importance of saving water and really learned a lot about saving water.,第19页,第19页,