托福写作审题结构和提纲(课堂PPT).ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,审题，结构和提纲,1,一、价值判断类型（should,important,necessary,prefer,better）,People should insist on a challenging plan rather than a practical plan.,Universities students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study.,A low-paid but secure job is better than a job with a high salary but easy to lose.,2,结构 回答why？,1.背景,+,引出话题,+,我的观点,2.中心句,（原因一）,+,举例分析,+,总结,3.中心句,（原因二）,+,举例分析,+,总结,4.中心句,（原因三）,+,举例分析,+,总结,5.让步段(Admittedly中心句+分析+However中心句+分析),6.总结,若题目中仅有一个事物，让步段可写可不写。若写，则比较这个事物的优缺点。,若题目中有两个比较对象，最好有一个让步段比较这两个对象。,3,People should insist on a challenging plan rather than a practical plan.,1.challenging plans,2.propel society to move forward(the invention of planes,computers,internet),3.forster the value of perseverance(Edison,Nobel),4.bring happy accidents(the creation of gunpowder),5.Admittedly,practical plans are likely to succeed,but are seldom motivating.However,challening plans can motivate people,arouse enthusiam and promote creativity.,6.summary,4,People should insist on a challenging plan rather than a practical plan.,1.practical plans,2.accomplish the plan with high quality on time(homework),3.build up confidence to undertake tasks(marathon),4.ensure the steady progress of a business,an organization or even a society(a chain store expands too quickly to go bankrupt;great leap of economy),5.Admittedly,challenging plans are more exciting.However,challening plans can make people stressed,anxious and likely to make mistakes.,6.summary,5,Universities students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study.,1.should not,2.cause more academic pressure(a medical student),3.unnecessary cost for students(hire more history teachers;the increased cost will be reflected in the tuition fee),4.Admittedly,taking history course can emulate succeful models,cultivate patriotism and a sense of reponsibility for the society.However,this knowledge can be acquired through many other means such as books,magazines,TV documentaries,the Internet,etc.,5.summary,6,Universities students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study.,1.should,2.study history systematically(teacher,references which are reliable,but info from other means such as the Internet is not credible),3.get inspired by elites in history(A.Lincoln,Franklin),4.cultivate a patriotism and a sense of responsibilty for society(war,the progress of a society,the establishment of a country),5.Admittedly,taking history course takes time and energy.However,compared to the benefits,the efforts and costs are worthwhile.,6.summary,7,A low-paid but secure job is better than a job with a high salary but easy to lose.,1.a job with a high salary,2.guarantees better material life(food,medicine,health;spiritual enjoyment),3.means better social status,i.e.respect and recognition from the society(doctors,business learders,high salary is equal to capability),4.Admittedly,secure jobs can make people feel less pressure,but without a high income,a person has to make to with the second best.,5.summary,8,A low-paid but secure job is better than a job with a high salary but easy to lose.,1.a secure job,2.less pressure(physical and mental health,teacher),3.more time and energy to pursue personal hobbies and interest(my aunt,not much money,but enjoy brush painting,growing flowers,enjoy life),4.more time to pend with family members to create a harmonious family(Liyang,the founder of Crazy English,high salary but on business,less time with family,less communication,break up),5.Admittedly,high salary can guarantee material life,but without enjoyment of life,its meaningless.,6.summary,9,二、现象证明类,Advertisements make the products seem better than they really are.,Technology makes peoples lives simpler or more complicated.,Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on young people.,10,结构 回答How？,1.背景,+,引出话题,+,我的观点,2.中心句,（分析一或拆分举例类别一）,+,举例分析,+,总结,3.中心句,（,分析,二,或拆分举例类别二,）,+,举例分析,+,总结,4.中心句,（分析三或拆分举例类别三）,+,举例分析,+,总结,（让步段可要可不要，想不够观点就要),5.总结,11,Advertisements make the products seem better than they really are.,1.agree,2.exagerated functions and effects(diet pills but not effective at all),3.celebrities(Jay chou,milk tea but not healty,nor that tasty;sports star,calcium pills but no help,sports wear but not extraordinary),4.misleading pictures(mouth-watering fried chips but of high calories,magical power which has nothing to do with the toy),5.summary,12,Technology makes peoples lives simpler or more complicated.,1.more complicated,puters(supermarket,out of power,cashiers desk is computer-based thus out of service.),3.the Internet(on-line shopping,some products can only be bought from on-line,xiaomi cellphone;giving away ones personal information;fraud,junkmail),4.nuclear energy(leakage,radiation,Japan nuclear power plant),5.summary,13,Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on young people.,1.more positive effects,2.widen horizon(expand outlook,know the world.Three Idiots,Around the word),3.educational(The World of Animals,learn zoology;The Leture Room,learn Chinese culture and history;Ted,motivating and inspiring),4.entertainment(relax,cartoons,talk shows,comedies,happiness,espace from heavy work,more energetic and efficient),5.Admittedly,negative effects,addiction,violence,unnecussary nuidity.However,with guidance,more advantages.,6.summary,14,3.今昔对比类,People are now easier to become educated than in the past.,People in the past were eaiser to be happy and satisfied than they are today.,In twenty years,there will be fewer cars in use than in today.,15,结构,1.背景+引出话题+我的观点,2.中心句,（变化因素一）,+现在情况+对比过去情况,3.中心句,（变化因素二）,+现在情况+对比过去情况,4.中心句,（变化因素三）,+现在情况+对比过去情况,5.总结,16,People are now easier to become educated than in the past.,1.agree,2.more shcools and better facilities.Now,private school,public schools,vocational schools,training center,summer school.Lab,library,etc.In the past,.,3.diverse means of getting educated.On-line courses,open classes,various resources for self-study.Enlgish,video,audio,etc.In the past,.,4.women have equal rights to have education.In the past,.,5.better-off life,money to get education.In the past,.,6.Summary,17,People in the past were eaiser to be happy and satisfied than they are today.,1.disagree,2.better living standards free people of starvation,cold,etc.In the past,.grandma,1942 starvation,3.advanced medical conditions guarantee a longer life span.In the past,.supersition,witch doctors.,4.high-tech brings much convenience.In the past,.travel,get in touch,away from home,homesick,5.Summary,18,In twenty years,there will be fewer cars in use than in today.,1.agree,2.less petroleum,higher oil prices.statistics.in 20 years,the general public may not be able to afford it.,3.the trend of low-carbon products,car emission,global warming,environment protection,in 20 years,environment problems are severe enough for citizens to take action immediately.,4.the rapid development of public transportation systems,in 20ys,convenient and sophisticated system.,5.summary,19,4.政府投资,Governments should focus its budget more on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playground.,Governments should focus its budget more on young children education than on universities.,Governments should spend more money on environment protection than on economic development.,20,结构,1.背景+引出话题+我的观点投资A,2.中心句（投资A的好处一/必要性一）+举例分析+总结,3.中心句（投资A的好处二/必要性二）+举例分析+总结,4.让步段，B也需要钱，但是钱有其它来源或其它方式解决，而A主要依赖政府给钱。,5.总结,21,Governments should focus its budget more on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playground.,1.art museums and concert halls,2.help preserve and spread culture.(zhangdaqian art museum,Chinese brush painting;concert halls introduce famous plays such as Romeo and Juliet),3.boost tourism and improve the image of a city(Dongfanghong concert hall,Zhengzhou Art Musuem attracts audience from surrounding cities),4.Although recreational facilities are needed,they are just entertainment.Besides,many businesses are running these things.So not necessary for the government to invest money.,5.summary,22,Governments should focus its budget more on young children education than on universities.,1.young children edu,2.improve teaching quality.status quo:lack qualified teachers.importance of teachers correct guidance for young children.,3.improve teaching facilities.status quo:out-of-date equipment,poor studying conditions.need updated facilities.,4.Admittedly,universities are costly.But they have alumni donation,can bring in investment by cooperating with businesses.While young children education does not have these advantages.,5.summary,23,Governments should spend more money on environment protection than on economic development.,1.environment protection,2.promote the health of general public.water pollution;cancer village.,3.ensure the long-term development of various industries.agriculture,tourism.,4.watse treatment costs much.cannot rely only on factories.,5.Admittedly,economic development can.,but once done,environment damage is usually irreversible or hard to recover.,6.summary,24,5.幸福类,Poeple who do not work because they have enough money are rarely happy.,Peole will feel happier when they finish a difficult and challenging work than they finish an easy work.,People today will be happier if they have fewer possesions.,25,结构,1.背景,+,引出话题,+,我的观点,2.中心句,（原因一）,+,举例分析,+,总结,3.中心句,（原因二）,+,举例分析,+,总结,4.中心句,（原因三）,+,举例分析,+,总结,(5.让步段，有两者比较时),6.总结,26,Maslows hierarchy of needs,basic needs/material life,medical care,love from family,friends,social status,respect,confidence,sense of achievement/satisfaction,self-actualization,the realization of ones potential,27,Poeple who do not work because they have enough money are rarely happy.,1.disagree,2.they are happy because they do not need to worry about basic needs for living.,while working class work arduously to earn money to cover their daily expenditures,car loan,house loan,water bill,etc.,3.they are happy because they can enrich their life by pursuing many interests which can not be realized without enough money or contribution of time and energy.painting,traveling around the world,etc.,4.they are happy because they can use money to repay the society and acquire social recognition.charity,donation.help schools in remote rural ereas.,5.summary,28,Peole will feel happier when they finish a difficult and challenging work than they finish an easy job.,1.agree,2.get much more reward other than the accomplishment of the work,such as money,experience,skills,proof of ones capability,promotion.my cousin,a journalist.,3.gain confidence in overcoming difficulties.participate in a speech contest and win rewards,4.admittedly,an easy job,not stressful,easy to fullfil and get a good result,but it cannot help one make quick progress,nor can it distinguish one out of a group.,5.summary,29,6.成功类,Successful people take new things and take,risks rather than the things that theyve done well.,Future career success relies more on other people than studying hard at school.,People who keep their room clean and tidy are more likely to be successful in the future.,30,结构 拆分举例/分析,1.背景+引出话题+我的观点,2.中心句,（举例类别一/分析一）,+举例分析+总结,3.中心句,（举例类别二/分析二）,+举例分析+总结,4.中心句,（举例类别三/分析三）,+举例分析+总结,5.summary,31,Successful people take new things and take,risks rather than the things that theyve done well.,1.agree,2.take business world for instance.Alibaba,Ma Yun;Yu Minhong,New Oriental School.,3.Scientific field.the invention of.,4.sports area.gymnastics.Lining,a difficult action,1984 LA Olympic Game,3 gold medals.,5.artistic area.Zhang Daqian,employs expressionism in his traditional Chinese brush painting.,6.Summary,32,Future career success relies more on other people than studying hard at school.,1.disagree,2.politician.social network.support from citizens.former chairman of China,his succes has little to do with his major in university,3.businessmen.connection to people in various related industries.the success of XX training school.classrooms and offices,advertisements,trainers,etc.,4.actors/actresses Liu Yifei,Zeng Yike,5.summary,33,People who keep their room clean and tidy are more likely to be successful in the future.,1.agree,2.help foster patience and carefulness,3.become well-organized,4.be more independent,5.summary,34,7.包含绝对词,Only movies that can teach people something about real life are worth watching.,The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teachers salary.,Advertising is the only cause of unhealthy eating habits.,35,结构 不同意,举反例,1.背景+话题+观点,2.让步段=题目说的有道理+分析+但是还有其它很多方式,3.中心句（其它方式一）+举例分析+总结,4.中心句（其它方式二）+举例分析+总结,5.中心句（其它方式三）+举例分析+总结,6.summary,36,Only movies that can teach people something about real life are worth watching.,1.disagree,2.Admittedly,movies that can teach people sth about real life can help people learn from other peoples experience,prepare for the real life.American Dreams in China.,However,other kinds of movies can be worth watching too.,edies entertainment,Chaplin,The Smurfs,4.cartoons fantasy,imagination,Kungfu Panda,Beauty and Beast,Cinderella,Rio,Ice Age,5.science fiction movies,Matrix,Iron Man,Inception,Upside Down,6.summary,37,The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teachers salary.,1.disagree,2.Admittedly,increasing teachers salary can motivate teachers to work harder and attract more talents to join in the education career.However,improving the quality of education should not rely only on the increase of teachers salary.,3.give teachers proper training,4.update school facilities,5.summary,38,Advertising is the only cause of unhealthy eating habits.,1.disagree,2.Admittedly,advertising makes things seem better.instant noodles,chocolates and candies,milk tea,fast food.However,people eat unhealthy food for various reasons.,3.eating fast food saves time,4.instant food,or semi-manufactured food products,convenient to cook.many people cannot cook,5.taste better,6.summary,39,8.包含因果或条件关系,Now we have too many sources of news and information that we cannot tell who is telling the truth.,If parents want their children to perform well at school,they should limit their childrens time on watching television.,People today can solve many important problems so they do not need help from the government.,40,结构 因造不成果，果有其它因,1.背景+话题+观点,2.中心句,（造成果的其它因素一/这个因造不成果的分析一）,+举例分析+总结,3.中心句,（造成果的其它因素二/这个因造不成果的分析二）,+举例分析+总结,4.中心句,（这个因造不成果的分析/造成果的其它因素）,+举例分析+总结,5.summary,注：4 亦可与2调换位置。,41,Now we have too many sources of news and information that we cannot tell who is telling the truth.,1.disagree,2.people can tell the truth through their common knowledge by analyzing info from various sources.a fire in XX store kills customers.,3.people can tell the truth by finding out info from reliable sources.LY domestic violence,through the video of the interview with LY.,4.if people cannot tell the truth,it is because the sources are telling lies intent