高中英语作文活动安排类省名师优质课赛课获奖课件市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢,活动计划安排,第1页,（,天津卷）书面表示（满分,25,分）,假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于,6,月,26,日接待来自于美国某中学学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津一日活动。请依据以下提醒，用英语给该团领队,Smith,先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简明说明理由，最终征求对方意见。,早晨与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；,中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包含饺子、面条等）；,下午与我校学生游览海河。,注意：,1.,次数不少于,100,；,2.,可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；,3.,信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。,参考词汇：,海河,the Haihe River,第2页,Dear Mr.Smith,I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union,from Chenguang High School.,I am more,than glad to know that you,will pay a visit to our school on June 26 and I,am writing to tell,you what we have arranged for you.,In,t,he morning,we will,have,a discussion,which may cover such topics as school life,cultural differences and so on.At noon,youll be invited to,our schools dining hall,where you can,know more about our traditional customs and culture,as well as taste various Chinese,food,such as,dumplings,and,noodles.In the afternoon,we will show you around,the Haihe River,where you can,enjoy,yourselves,.After that,you will end your visit to our school.,What do you think of,my,plan?,Do you have any better,advice on how to make your visit more interesting and impressive?I look forward to your,early,reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua,第3页,1.I was appointed to take charge of arranging all the activities on that day.My plan about these activities is as follows.,2.In the morning,we will show you around our school and introduce our most advanced science lab to you.,3.Well organize various activities which you will take part in and Im sure you can have a wonderful time there.,4.I ll show you around the places of great interest in our city where you can not only enjoy beautiful scenery but also know more about our culture there.,5.A discussion will be held in the teaching hall at 10:30 am.this Monday,aiming to know more about each others cultures.,句子必背,第4页,相关短语,1.sign up,报名,2.save our energy,节约能源,3.increase our knowledge about,增加对,了解,4.improve our spoken English,提升我们口语,5.will be held,将被举行,第5页,6.participate in the contest,参加比赛,7.are supposed to,应该,;,理应,8.you are warmly welcome to,热烈欢迎你,9.thanks for your participation,谢谢你参加,10.organize an English-speaking contest,组织一次英语演讲比赛,第6页,11.promote the campus culture,弘扬校园文化,12.hold an English writing activity called.,举行叫作,英语写作活动,13.aim to,目标是；意在,14.arouse our interest,激发兴趣,15.develop our ability in,培养,能力,16.You are advised to do sth.,提议你们,You will be encouraged to do sth.,你们将受到勉励做某事,第7页,17.enter for,报名参加,18.know more details,了解更多细节,19.dont miss the deadline,别错过截止日期,20.witness the development of,见证,发展,21.show you around some places of great interest,带你参观名胜,22.organize various activities,组织各种活动,第8页,相关句式,1.Its a pity that you have to go back soon,so a farewell party for you,will be held,in Room 302 in the Sun Club,at 6:00 pm this Saturday evening,.,你很快就要回去,所以我们将于本周六晚上六点在阳光俱乐部,302,房举行欢送会。,2.,Im writing to,(do sth),我写信目标是,第9页,3.,If you are interested in,.,please take part in,.contest.,假如你对,感兴趣,请参加,比赛,4.,In the morning,you can first visit.After that,you can go to.,In the afternoon,I suggest you visit.where not only you can enjoy.but also you can.,早晨,你能够先参观,然后,你能够去,下午,我提议你参观,在那里你不但能够观赏,而且你还能够,第10页,5.Our outdoor activity,will last,3 hours,and,well be back,at about 11,：,00.,我们户外活动将连续,3,个小时,大约,11,点返回。,6.,If you are interested,please sign up at,the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.,假如你有兴趣,请在下周四下午五点前到办公室报名,方便我们作必要安排。,7.All,are welcome,.,欢迎大家参加。,8.Wish you a happy tour!/holiday/weekend!,祝你们旅行,/,假期,/,周末愉快！,第11页,技巧点拨,1.,活动安排写作普通使用未来时,文章结构以总分为主,第一句往往要清楚说明活动举行感受、意义和内容。,2.,活动安排写作基本都包括到地点和时间安排,考生应该注意表示时间和地点介词使用。,3.活动安排应用文多属于通知类,其给出汉字提醒往往隐藏主语,考生能够考虑使用祈使句或者被动语态。,第12页,经典例题,(,年深圳二模,),为迎接,6,月,5,日“世界环境日”，学校学生会准备举行一次以环境保护为主题英语演讲比赛。请你依据以下内容写一个书面通知,欢迎大家主动参加。,写作内容,目标,增加环境保护知识；提升英语口语,内容,“,保护环境，节约能源”,地点,教学楼五楼演讲大厅,报名时间,5,月,25,日前,报名方式,studentcenter163com,比赛时间,6,月,5,日星期五下午,4,：,00-5,：,30,评奖,一等奖,3,名，二等奖,6,名，三等奖,12,名,第13页,例题导写,认真审题。,活动安排属于应用文范围,写作时候普通使用未来时或者祈使句。这一类应用文最主要是把活动目标、时间、地点、报名方式等信息清楚地传达给大家,而且最终呼吁大家参加活动。,第14页,信息重组。,第一个句子表述活动背景、目标和内容。第二句是交待清楚活动举行时间和地点。第三句是出发时间,出发地点和旅程。第四句是报名方式和报名截止日期。最终一句则是号召大家参加活动。,1.,学生会将要举行一次演讲比赛,主题为,“,保护环境,节约能源,”,目标是增加环境保护知识和提升英语口语。,第15页,2.,演讲比赛将在,6,月,5,日星期五下午,4:00-5,：,30,教学楼五楼演讲大厅举行。,3.,参赛者需要在,5,月,25,日前在,studentcenter,上报名。,4.,比赛将评选出一等奖,3,名,二等奖,6,名,三等奖,12,名。,5.,希望大家主动参加比赛。,第16页,翻译句子。将分好五组信息翻译成英语,并各自用一句话来表示。,词语翻译 翻译或完成下例短语。,句,1,：,(1),增加环境保护知识：,gain/enrich/increase our knowledge about,the environment,第17页,(2),保护环境：,_,(3),节约能源：,_,(4),表示目标短语：,_,_,protect our environment,save energy,the purpose of./with the aim of.,in order to./with,第18页,句,2,：,(5),在,6,月,5,日星期五下午,4:00-5:30,：,_ 4:00 p.m._5:30 p.m.,_ Friday June 5th,(6),教学楼：,_,on,from,teaching/classroom building,to,第19页,(7),在五楼：,_ the 5th floor,(8),演讲大厅：,_,句,3,：,(9),参加比赛人：,_,_,on,the lecture hall,those who want to,participate in the contest,第20页,(10),在,5,月,25,日前：,_ May 25,th,(11),在,studentcenter,上：,_ studentcenter,(12),报名：,_,sign up for/enter for,before,at,第21页,句,4,：,(13),三个一等奖：,_,句,5,：,(14),欢迎参加：,_,_,three first prizes,You are welcome to be there.,/Welcome to join us./Welcome to attend.,第22页,难句翻译 翻译以下每组句子并合并成一句。,句,1,：,(1),为了增加我们环境保护知识,提升英语口语,学生会将要举行一个演讲比赛；,(1)The Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English.,(2),演讲主题是“保护环境,节约能源”。,(2)The theme of the contest is:“Protect,our environment and save our energy”.,第23页,合并：,The Students Union is going to,organize an English-speaking contest,the theme of which/whose theme,is:“Protect our environment and save,our energy”to increase our knowledge,about the environment and improve,our spoken English.(,定语从句,),第24页,句,4,：,(1),大赛将评出多个奖项。,(1)Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest.,2),将会有,3,个一等奖,6,个二等奖和,12,个三等奖。,(2)There are three first prizes,six second and twelve third ones.,合并：,Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest,including,three first prizes,six second and twelve third ones.(,介词,),第25页,Notice,World Environment Day is approaching,so the Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest,the theme of which/whose theme is,:“,Protect our environment,and,save our energy,”to,increase our knowledge about,the environment and,improve our spoken English,.The contest,will be held,in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m.to,5:30 p.m.,on Friday June 5th.,第26页,Those who want to participate in the contest,are supposed to sign up at,studentcenter before May 25th.Lots of prizes will,be delivered for,the contest,including,three first prizes,six second and twelve third ones.Dear fellow schoolmates,you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation,.,The students Union,第27页,能力提升,高级句子提炼：,1.,为了提升我们环境保护意识,我们将会邀请中山大学李教授给我们开展一个关于环境问题讲座,他将会给我们讲述近年来广州环境污染问题。,In order to arouse our awareness of,environmental protection/,With the purpose of,arousing our awareness of environmental protection,we will invite Dr.Li from Sun Yat-sen University to give,us a wonderful lecture about the environment problem,and/where,he will also tell us about,the pollution of environment in recent years,in Guangzhou.,第28页,2.,我们很荣幸请来了何教授在本周五下午,4:00-5:00,给我们讲述关于中西方文化差异讲座,讲座将会在学校体育馆开展。,2.We,have the great honor to,have invited Professor He to give us a wonderful lecture,about the differences between,eastern,and,western cultures this Friday afternoon,which,will be held in the school stadium between 4:00 p.m.and 5:00 p.m.,第29页,3.,请大家做好笔记,这次讲座将会帮助我们为下周演讲比赛做好充分准备。,Everyone should,make full notes,because,this lecture can help us,make good preparations for,the coming speech competition next week./Everyone should,make full notes,in this lecture,which,can,fully prepare us for,the coming speech competition next week./Everyone should,make full notes,in this lecture,so that,he can,be fully prepared for,the coming speech competition next week.,第30页,4.,全部学生将要在本周六早上,8,：,30,在学校门口集合。,4.All the students should,gather at the gate of,our school at 8:30 a.m.,第31页,课堂练习,你们学校正在开展读书月活动,英语科组举行了一个名为“青春校园”英语写作大赛。假设你是这个活动组织者,请你依据以下内容写一个书面通知,欢迎大家主动参加。,第32页,参考范文,In order to,promote the campus culture,our school is going to hold an English writing activity called“Youth Campus”,which also,aims to arouse our interest in,learning English and,develop our ability in,English writing.Anyone,who is interested in,it can attend the lecture,given by,Mr.He at 3:00 p.m.on Nov.2,nd,in the school auditorium hall,where students can learn a lot of writing skills and ask Mr.he questions about writing.,第33页,Students,are encouraged to enter for,the writing competition.The participants should send their own compositions to 1431 before Nov.20th and they can also,know more details at, student are welcome to join us,and,dont miss the deadline,.,第34页,精华点评,这篇通知内容比较多,考生在写作过程中要先思索信息点划分和句子连接。如活动目标有三点,假如考生用,in order to,把三点都囊括了,这个句子就会头重脚轻,显得累赘,所以范文用了一个定语从句,which aims to do.,来处理这个问题,使句子显得更灵活。,第35页,为了防止句型结构重复,考生能够考虑句子不一样表示法。在勉励学生参加活动三个句子中,本范文用句型都是不一样,如第二句“,Anyone who is interested in it can.”(,定语从句,),和第三句“,Students are encouraged to.”(,被动语态,),。,第36页,课外作业,你们学校将要组织全部高三学生在本周末参加一次郊游活动。假设你是这个活动组织者,请你依据以下内容写一个书面通知。,活动地址,黄埔古港,活动目标,(1)放松心情 (2)了解广州历史和文化,活动计划,(1)本周六4月2日早晨8点在学校正门集中,乘车前往黄埔古港,(2)抵达后,游览古港,参观博物馆,感受广州变迁,(4)午餐后，参观黄埔军校,(5)下午5点返程回校,温馨提醒,天气预测下雨,带雨伞以防万一,第37页,参考词汇：黄埔古港,Ancient port Whampoa,黄埔军校,Whampoa Military Academy,参考范文,To help us,get relaxed as well as,knowing more about the history and culture of Guangzhou,our school is going to organize a trip for all the,senior three students,.We should gather at the school gate at 8:00 a.m.this Saturday,April 2,nd,and then take a bus to Ancient port Whampoa.,第38页,We will,have a visit to,the ancient port and the museum,which have,witnessed the development of Guangzhou.Later,we will,pay a visit to,Whampoa Military Academy after lunch and then go back to school at 5:00 p.m.,It is forecasted,in the weather report that it is going to rain that day,so please,take umbrellas,with you in case.,第39页,精华点评,这篇通知重点在于把活动流程讲述清楚,所以考生在写作过程中注意时间使用方法,以及时间过渡一些连词,如,and then.,later.,after lunch.,等。,考生在翻译过程中,要防止完全按照字面翻译,如表示“放松心情”时,考生若按照字面翻译为,relax our mood,就是中式英语,所以能够用,get relaxed,来表示。,第40页,另外“感受广州变迁”也比较难翻译,考生能够采取迂回方法，把这个意思改为“黄埔古港和博物馆见证了广州发展”,那就能够用,witness the development of Guangzhou,这个短语清楚地把意思表示出来。,名师提醒：考生要意识到一个事实,并不是每个汉字或短语都能直接翻译成英文,也不是每个英文或短语都能直接翻译成汉字。所以,在翻译过程中,一定要注意灵活性。,第41页,Thank you!,第42页,