高中英语作文---道歉信名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,道歉信,第1页,A Letter of Apology,第2页,道歉信文体概述（,Letter of apology),道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，给他人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅信件。通常包含以下三部分内容：,1.,开门见山，表明写信目标，表示歉意。,2.,说明出现差错原因，提出填补办法。,3.,再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到了解,(,语言要真挚，解释理由要真实,),。,第3页,惯用语块,因某事向某人道歉,_,2.,向,说对不起,_,3.,接收我道歉,_,4.,为某事原谅某人,_,5.,并非有意做某事,_,have no intention to do sth.,apologize to sb.for sth./make an apology to sb.for sth.,say sorry to,accept my apology,forgive sb.for sth.,第4页,6.,填补；赔偿,_,7.,赔偿；偿还,_,8.,给你带来不便,_,9.,给你带来许多麻烦,_,10.,愈加小心,_,be more careful,make up for,pay for/compensate for,cause you inconvenience,cause you much trouble,第5页,11.,犯这么愚蠢错误,_,12.,应该受到责备,_,13.,负担责任,_,14.,难以接收后果,_,15.,下不为例,_,never let it happen again,make such a stupid mistake,be to blame,be responsible for/shoulder/undertake the responsibility,an unacceptable result/consequence,第6页,写作三步曲,第7页,Step 1,：审题,养成重视审题习惯。,思索问题,样题分析,第几人称？（,person,）,文章题材是什么？,怎样安排信息点次序？,(order),动作是什么时候发生？,(when),第一人称,一封道歉信,说理逻辑性,普通现在时,第8页,3.,提出补救方法,2.,说明详细原因,道歉信写作,4,步走,写信普通要求,1.,内容要简单,对于题中所给内容：全方面,对于自己发挥内容：简单,写熟悉，会写！,2.,结构要清楚,开头段：,中间段：,结尾段,:,3.,语言要精彩,4.,注意内容之间连接,1.,表示歉意,总结提升,4.,再次致歉望了解,造句能力,+,高分套话,第9页,9,Basic structure and expressions,第一段,:,简明说明写信目标，为自己过失表示歉意，希望得到对方谅解。,道歉表示：,I feel sorry for my failure to,I am awfully sorry that I cannot,I am very sorry for,I am writing to express my sincere apology for my,5.I regret to inform you that I am unable to,6.I feel guilty for what I have done to you.,pick you up at the airport,attend your party.,my rudeness/thoughtlessness/bad manners.,第10页,10,第二段：详细说明当初情况，解释原因，语气,要诚恳。,1.Now let me explain what happened to me that day.,2.I had intended to,3.I am afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you.,4.I am to blame for this silly mistake.,5.Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.,6.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.,第11页,11,第三段：提出补救方法，详细提出自己想法，,希望能填补过失，消除误会。,1.In order to remove our misunderstanding,I would like to invite.,2.To make up for my fault,I will,3.To compensate for your loss,I decide to.,4.I wish you could give me a chance to make up for my fault.,5.I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes.,第12页,12,第四段：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望,以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。,1.Please accept my most sincere apology again.,2.I promise that I will never make such a stupid mistake again.,3.I assure you that it will never happen again.,4.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.,5.Once again,Im sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.,第13页,13,Step 3,：写作,第14页,道歉信模板一,Dear Bob,I am truly sorry that _,（道歉原因）,.,The reason is that_,（介绍原因）,.Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,第15页,15,习作观赏,Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week.,The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.,I read them every evening and intend to finish it,the next week,but unfortunately yesterday until I,came back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.,I promise to pay for the lost of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame.I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(,赔偿,)for the missed book.,I apologize again for any inconveniences or,trouble caused by my careless.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.,第16页,习作观赏,Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week.,The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.,I read them every evening and intend to finish it,the next week,but unfortunately yesterday until I,came back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.,I promise to pay for the lost of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame.I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(,赔偿,)for the missed book.,I apologize again for any inconveniences or,trouble caused by my careless.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.,第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误过程,第二段：承诺填补或赔偿及办法,第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误,第17页,习作修改,(,做短文改错,),Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week.,The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.,I read them every evening and intend to finish it,the next week,but unfortunately yesterday until I,came back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.I promise to pay for the lost of the book.,borrowed,it,when,loss,第18页,I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame.I will go to your place in Thursday,afternoon to talk over the compensation(,赔偿,)for the missed book.,I apologize again for any inconveniences or,trouble caused by my careless.I promise that such,a thing will never happen again.,Yours sincerely,Li Ming,to,on,missing,inconvenience,carelessness,第19页,诵读经典范文,Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I,borrowed,from your library last week.,The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.,I read,it,every evening and intend to finish it,next week,but unfortunately yesterday,when,I,came back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.,I promise to pay for the,loss,of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and I am,to blame,.I will go to your place,on,Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(,赔偿,)for the,missing,book.,I apologize again for,any inconvenience,or,trouble caused by my,carelessness.,I promise that such a thing will never happen again.,第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误过程,第二段：承诺填补或赔偿及办法,第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误,第20页,诵读经典范文,Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I,borrowed,from your library last week.,The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.,I read,it,every evening and intend to finish it,next week,but unfortunately yesterday,when,I,came back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.,I promise to pay for the,loss,of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and I am,to blame,.I will go to your place,on,Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(,赔偿,)for the,missing,book.,I apologize again for,any inconvenience,or,trouble caused by my,carelessness.,I promise that such a thing will never happen again第21页,Lets take actions!,Write an a letter,of apology in 15 minutes.,第22页,课堂练习,假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训，回国时因为慌忙，把房东,Bob,音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给,Bob,写一封道歉信，关键点以下：,1.,对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。,2.,提出处理方法。,3.,再次请求原谅。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右。,2.,能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,3.,开头语和结束语已为你写好。,第23页,A good essay should be,plete,2.,coherent,3.accurate,4.various,5.neat,第24页,Dear Bob,I am writing to,make an apology to you for,the fact that I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week.Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage.I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it,at present,.,The CD which I,borrowed from,you is made in England,so I believe you can find another one in your local store.,How about your buying,another CD by yourself and I will,pay for,it?If you cannot find a similar one,I would,send it back to you,through a post office.And if there are any other solutions you like,please let me know.,I am terribly sorry again for,my carelessness.Please forgive me for any inconvenience,caused,.,I am looking forward to your reply,.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,第25页,Homework：,课外作业,假定你是李华，你美国老师,Mr.Evans,要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向,Mr.Evans,道歉并说明情况。关键点以下：,1.,表示歉意。,2.,理由：父亲去北京出差，母亲生病住院需要人照料。,3.,问询：是否有录音，方便补听讲座。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右。,2.,能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,3.,开头语和结束语已为你写好。,第26页,Dear Mr.Evans,I am indeed sorry to tell you that,I wont be able to,attend the lecture on,English history tomorrow afternoon.My mother suddenly,fell ill,and was taken to hospital last night and my father is,on a business trip to,Beijing now.I am afraid that I will have to,take care of,her these days.,How about your buying,another CD by yourself and I will,pay for,it?If you cannot find a similar one,I would,send it back to you,through a post office.And if there are any other solutions you like,please let me know.,第27页,However,I,am actually very interested in,English society and history.I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded,and if so,could I borrow the tape?It would,mean a great deal to me,to listen to the tape and learn,what is covered,in the talk.,Please allow me to say sorry again.I sincerely hope that you will be able to,understand my situation,and,accept my apology,.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,第28页,套用句式,我写这封信是因,向你致歉。,2.,请接收我真诚道歉。,1.I am writing to apologize to you for /I am writing to say sorry to you for,2.Please accept my sincere apology.,第29页,3.,对于我说话,/,做事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非有意要,4.,我真心希望你能了解我处境,/,设身处地地为我考虑，并接收我道歉。,5.,对于造成不便我再次表示歉意。,3.I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did,but please believe I had no intention to,5.Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.,4.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.,第30页,