热点16-与父母相处-2020中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.docx

热点16 与父母相处

与父母相处无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它给我们的生活带来很大的影响。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：与父母相处。

【预测题目】
（一）
根据要求完成作文，词数：80—100词。
假如你的邻居李涛即将升入初中，他很想了解一下初中的学习和生活，请你给他写封信谈一谈，包括以下内容并适当发挥。不得出现真实姓名。
（1）学习方法上建议。
（2）与老师同学融洽相处。
（3）与父母之间的沟通。
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【参考范文】
Dear Li Tao,
I’m glad to share something with you. I think it’s the most important to listen to the teachers carefully in class. It’s not necessary to do too many exercises. We should try to find the right method to solve them. We can collect the problems we haven’t worked out correctly. Go over them at times. The harder you work，the better grades you will get. We should get on well with our teachers and class to keep us happy. Try to be more active and help each other. We’d better not argue with our parents when we’re in disagreement. Have a talk with them. We should help them do housework after school. Don’t spend too much time on the Internet. It’s not good for our health. Good luck!
【解析】
试题分析：这是个给材料作文。提示中已经给出了作文的写作要点。在写作时，注意将要点理清，不要遗漏。在整理文章的结构后，用正确的语言把意思表述清楚。文章可使用一般现在时，并且注意主谓一致。句子之间可适当的使用连词，使文章逻辑更紧密。
写作亮点：短文叙述清楚，层次分明：第一点是关于学习方法上建议；第二点介绍如何与老师同学相处，最后介绍如何处理与父母之间的关系。The harder you work，the better grades you will get. We’d better not argue with our parents when we’re in disagreement.都是比较经典的句子。

（二）
你的好朋友Linda， 现在面临很多压力，爸爸妈妈总是把她与其他同学相比较，因此她最近心情很不好。请你给她写一封信，建议她1.与父母好好沟通，2.通过做运动，听音乐等方式学会放松。
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，2. 70词左右。
Notes：
compare with 与...相比较； learn to relax 学会放松；
get on well with 与...相处融洽；in a bad mood 心情不好；
pressure；stress压力。
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【参考范文】
Hi! Linda, I am sorry to hear that you are stressed out these days and your parents often compare you with your classmate. I have the same problems as yours. I am very sad,too! But I know my parents want me to study harder and get better grades so they are strict with me. So I communicate with them. And now I understand them and they understand me. So you can try to communicate with your parents. Or you can listen to some quiet music and watch some games to relax yourself. And I hope you will become happy later!
【解析】
试题分析：根据题目要求可知，本文主要以第一人称书写，主要使用一般现在时态，在写作时可适当使用一些连接词，使文章前后连贯，符合逻辑。要注意把每个要点都表达出来，不可遗漏任何一个。
写作亮点：本文首先对朋友的烦恼表示同情，同时说出自己也有类似的烦恼，并讲述自己解决的一些方法。符合本题要求及要点提示。同时，本文中多次使用连词如and、or、so为文章增色不少。

（一）
在微信上，Jack 跟Bruce谈到他跟父母关系不好，并向Bruce寻求帮助。假设你是Bruce，请根据下面的提示，给Jack回复信息。
要求：
1) 必须包括所有相关信息，可作适当发挥(至少两点)；
2) 词数：100左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
内容提示：
现象
我过去经常跟父母吵架，有时几天不说话。
原因
父母过分担心我的成绩，给我太大的压力。我不帮父母做家务，也没有意识到帮父母的重要性。相反地，我每天花至少两个小时玩电脑游戏。
措施
现在我能和父母相处得好。我认为我们该和父母沟通。……

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【参考范文】
Jack, don't worry! I didn't get on well with my parents, either. I used to argue with my parents, sometimes we didn’t say a word for a few days. Because my parents really worried about my grades, it gave me too much pressure. I didn’t help them do any housework, because I didn’t think it was important to do housework. On the other hand, I spent at least two hours playing computer games every day. But now I can get on well with my parents. I think we should often communicate with my parents. In our free time, we can do some housework with parents. We can also spend weekend with our parents. We can share our happiness and sadness with our parents. In this way, we can get on well with our parents.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以Bruce的身份给Jack写一封信，背景是Jack与他的父母关系不好，想寻求你的帮助。题目中用表格的形式呈现了具体的写作内容，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过审题可知：1.这篇短文应用第一人称来叙述，根据表达的需要用I或者we；2.短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，具体来看，第一个内容和第二个内容应用一般过去时态，谓语动词用过去式形式；第三个内容应用一般现在时态。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，我们不能逐词去翻译表格里的内容，而应用英语中的句式结构来表达，如常见的主谓宾和主系表结构，构成简单句；在文章中穿插使用并列句或者复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等，提升文章的档次，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏感。同时语句之间应注意使用恰当的连接成分，如副词、连词或者短语等，使文章整体意思连贯。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。短文内容主要包括三个方面：首先作者介绍了过去他和父母相处的情况；接下来分析了自己与父母相处不好的原因然后介绍了他与父母现在关系好了，并结合自己的具体做法给Jack提了一些建议。整篇文章层次清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称为主，使用了一般现在时态和一般过去时态，符合语言的表达需要，谓语动词形式准确，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，语法规范。第三，文章句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯，短文中既有简单句，也有复合句或并列句，如Because my parents really worried about my grades, it gave me too much pressure. I didn’t help them do any housework, because I didn’t think it was important to do housework.中两个原因状语从句。其他的较好的句型和短语有On the other hand, I spent at least two hours playing computer games every day.、I think we should often communicate with my parents.、In this way, we can get on well with our parents.等。

（二）
假如你是班长，学期结束时你要给同学作简短的评价。你班的李华这个学期变化很大，请你根据提示写一篇简评。
过去

功课不好，常与同学争吵，垃圾被他撒的满地都是，课桌总是一团糟。

现在

自从老师和他沟通后，有了很大变化。（学习、与同学相处、生活……）

结果

父母、老师对他很满意。

希望

在即将到来的考试中取得好成绩。

注意：
短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
括号部分须用3、4句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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【参考范文】
Li hua has improved a lot this term.In the past he didn’t do well in his subjects. He often quarreled with his classmates. Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. His desk was always in a mess. He has changed a lot since the teacher had communication with him. Now he works hard at his lessons. He gets along well with his classmates. He often sweeps the floor. His parents and teachers are satisfied with him. I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.
【解析】
试题分析：本文的写作对李华的过去的情况进行描写，不擅长于功课he didn’t do well in his subjects.与朋友吵架quarreled with his classmates. 垃圾被他撒的满地都是Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. 课桌总是一团糟His desk was always in a mess.然后对他现在的情况进行描写，如与同学能很好的相处gets along well with his classmates.等，再对现在的结果是父母、老师对他很满意His parents and teachers are satisfied with him.最后提出希望I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.
点评：本文不难写，对于作文的写作要注意详略得当，学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采。

（三）
我们的生活中处处充满着爱，有父母的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱……请以“Love Around Me（我身边的爱）”为题，写一篇短文。内容要点如下：
爱你的人
爱的表现
父母
为你做早餐；送你上学……
老师
传授知识；照顾你……
同学
一起学习；和睦相处……
朋友
在网上交流；分享快乐与烦恼……

写作要求：1. 根据表格提示父母的爱、老师的爱、同学的爱和朋友的爱都要写齐。
2. 词数90词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名
参考词汇： receive love； get on ...with； chat online;
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. ___
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【参考范文】
Love around me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，以“Love Around Me（我身边的爱）”为题，写一篇短文。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There is……., Every day I can……, my lovely mother cooks……, I chat online with……, I make a decision to……, I should…….等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了在我的日常生活中有很多爱我的人，接下来介绍爱我的人的表现，最后我对他们的爱表示感谢。此处at school, look after, get on well with, chat with, make a decision, make great progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

（四）
最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。针对这个问题，某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中毕业生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents?”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。
一、写作要点提示
1.与父母和谐相处很重要。
2.与父母和谐相处的做法或建议：
（1）理解与尊重父母（如倾听与有礼貌表达想法）；
（2）多与父母交流（如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼）；
（3）为父母做一些力所能及的事。
3.与父母和谐相处的感受。
二、写作要求
短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯，词数控制在80－100词。
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【参考范文】
How to get on well with our parents?
It’s very important for us to get on well with our parents. But how can we get along well with our parents? Here is some of my advice.
We should understand and respect our parents. Parents talk much because they care about us. We are supposed to listen to them. When we want to tell them our opinions, we’d better be in a polite way. We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems. When we are free, we’d better help them do some things.
I get on well with my parents. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends. They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble. We love each other.
Let’s get on well with our parents because they are our parents.
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇提纲作文，要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。本题要求谈论怎样与父母和谐相处，根据提示，短文要从与父母和谐相处的重要性、怎样相处及自己的生活感受几个方面进行写作。短文用第一人称，一般现在时态，可以用恰当的情态动词来帮助表情达意。
写作亮点：短文第一段提出观点：与父母融洽相处很重要。开门见山，直奔主题。第二段是对如何与父母融洽相处的建议，详略得当，重点突出，中心明确。第三段谈论自己的生活感受；最后号召人们同父母融洽相处结尾。短文层次清楚，语言连贯。短文用should, be supposed to, had better等等不同的形式来表示人们的责任与义务，生动具体。其中用到的动词不定式，时间状语从句，宾语从句等，也增加了本文的文采。

1. I get on well with my parents.
2. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends.
3. They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble. We love each other.
4. Let’s get on well with our parents because they are our parents.
5. It’s very important for us to get on well with our parents.
6. There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.
7. On the other hand, I spent at least two hours playing computer games every day.
8. I think we should often communicate with my parents.
9. In this way, we can get on well with our parents.
10. In a word, wherever we are, we should behave well to be good students.
11. If we do, our society will be better and better.
12. I think it’s because we are too busy.
13. If you follow these, you can get on well with your parents.
14. If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile.
15. I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. 
Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

（一）
良好的家庭关系对青少年的健康成长很重要。但现实生活中，不少孩子和父母之间缺乏必要的沟通和交流。作为晚辈，我们应该如何和父母友好相处呢？请根据下面的提示，以How to get on with parents ？为题写一篇80词左右的文章。(文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数)
与父母友好相处的要点

· 主动交流：每天花些时间，与父母谈谈老师，同学和学校的事；
·创造机会：每周至少跟父母一起做件事，比如做饭、逛商店等；
·讨论问题：遇事多与父母讨论，他们会帮你更好地解决问题。

How to get on with parents ？
For teenagers, it's important to get on with parents.What should we do?
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