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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。谢谢,第1页,3.常见土单词排行榜：,1）think,have been convinced that,be of the opinion that,cling to the perspective that,maintain contend assert,argue assume claim,第2页,2)many,a sea of,multitudes of,immense amounts of,numerous innumerable plentiful,第3页,3)people we us,private individuals,youngsters and teenagers,all children and adults,experts and professors,parents kids offspring,businessman,university students,第4页,3)very,pretty rather quite,exceedingly distinctly,outstandingly remarkably,extraordinarily especially,第5页,4)important,be of great significance,play a key role in sth,essential crucial critical indispensable,第6页,5)very,quite pretty rather,extremely especially,outstandingly remarkably,exceedingly,extraordianrily,第7页,6 写作无话可说时怎么办？,一 举例：,A,although so abundant cases can support my simple view,the following one is most favorable,.,B,examples to prove the view are abundant.The most persuasive one is the case of sb;,第8页,C,this can be illustrated by the example of sb,;,D,such stimulating/less impressive cases/stories are not rare in our daily life,yet the following one is definitely typical,.,第9页,举例：不要以貌取人：,once i had a classmate named xiaocui and she is so short and fat.thus,almost everybody was laughing at her.until one day,she,in our English class,sang a beautiful song bravely while other students were just sitting there because of shyness.from then on,we knew that she was really brave and beautiful.the story tells that donot judge a person by his appearance.,第10页,二 引用名人名言,there seemed a well-known writer in japan who stated that sth is to human beings as water is to fish 或者“sth is to human beings as nightmares are to poor kids.”,第11页,三 数据列举,in accordance with an investigation by the department of social science in an esteemed university,an increasing amount of adolesents are of the opinion that,sth,no wonder,is playing a key role in our daily study and life.,第12页,或者,sth,no wonder,is playing an less impressive role in our daily life and study.,第13页,7 文章,一 谚语警句类,第一段 引出主题+解释你对这句话了解,第一句,1.,Nowadays,there,remains,an increasing interest in,the topic about,;,2 Recently the issue ofhas been in the limelight/brought into focus,;,3.what is your idea as to,the topic about,?,it is my belief that,第14页,二句 三句：解释这句话意思,the meaning of the saying seems that.,比如：,不要草率,做,决定,seems that if you hope to do something successfully,please think it carefully.that is to say,it is foolish to decide it quickly.,第15页,二段 举例,三段 总结段,第一句,1.under no circumstances can we fail to pour attention into the importance/seriousness of,the fact that,2.it is,really,high time,that,we poured attention into the,fact that,第16页,3 it is,the fact that_,which,plays an essential role in our study and life,4 it is,the fact that_,which,really has a great influence on our study and life.,第17页,第二 三句话详细办法,for one thing/for another;,on one hand/on the other hand;,eg write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying“Happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them.”You can cite examples to illustrate your points and then explain,how you can develop your ability to deal with problem and be happy,第18页,办法一,父母采取办法,parents are supposed to spend more time eduacating their kids to do sth,eg to be happy facing difficulties.,to put eggs in different baskets.,第19页,办法二,awareness about sth could be cultivated to make ourselves lead a healthy and favorable life.,第20页,最终一句：,喊口号！,1),Only,by taking these action,can,people have a more brilliant and glorious future.,2)so,Shouldnt human beings pay much attention to the meaningful saying/problem?,3)so under no account could people divert attention from the issue of sth.,4)the more actively people face the issue,the more happily they will lead their life.,第21页,二 图画图表作文,13.12 父亲和男孩子对话，孩子说“Dad，I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon.父亲则回答“If you can empty the dustbin,you can do anything.说话间，手指着垃圾桶。,第22页,第一段：,一二句主语从句引出描述图画或图表；,it seems beyond dispute is that in the vivid cartoon/chart.,a son is telling his father that he is.while his father is saying that.,第23页,三句话 总接图画中心思想；,simple as the cartoon looks,its meaning behind is really so far-reaching-,if you desire to do something great,you have to do it from small things.,第24页,第二段 原因分析或举例,第一句 1,The majority of people would agree that sth has caused serious problems.,2 it is superficially a simple phenomenon,but when subjected to analysis,it has its fundamental reasons.,第25页,3 there stand at least two reasons,from my perspective,for the present phenomenon.,4 However,recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution.,第26页,to begin with 原因一,in addition 原因二,in the end 原因三,第27页,三段 处理问题,第一句,1,therefore,it is imperative for us,people in all walks,to take drastic measures to reverse this disturbing trend。,2 if we donot desire the trend to become a reality in the future,positive steps must be taken to put an end to sth right now.,第28页,3,my suggestion，to put an end to the negative situation,are the following steps.,4 the most important thing，confronted the current situation,is not to say,but instead to do.,第29页,第二 三句话详细办法,for one thing/for another;,on one hand/on the other hand;,第30页,办法一,父母采取办法,parents are supposed to spend more time eduacating their kids to do sth,eg to do little things well.,办法二,awareness about sth could be cultivated to make ourselves lead a healthy and favorable life.,eg doing current things,第31页,第四句,1),Only,by taking these action,can,people have a more brilliant and glorious future.,2)so,Shouldnt human beings pay much attention to the meaningful saying/problem?,3)so under no account could people divert attention from the issue of sth.,4)the more actively people face the saying/issue,the more happily they will lead their life.,第32页,三 论说文,举例：,信息大爆炸是件好事吗？,a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention,第33页,第一段 引出主题+个人观点,第一句,1.,Nowadays,there,remains,an increasing interest in,the topic about,;,2 the issue of,under modern conditions,has been in the limelight/brought into focus,;,第34页,3.what is your idea as to,the topic about,?,it is my belief that,第35页,二段 原因分析或举例,1,The majority of people would agree that sth has caused serious problems.,2 it is superficially a simple phenomenon,but when subjected to analysis,it has its fundamental reasons.,第36页,3 there stand at least two reasons,from my perspective,for the present phenomenon.,4 However,recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution.,第37页,三段,第一句,1,therefore,it is imperative for us,people in all walks,to take drastic measures to reverse this disturbing trend。,2 if we donot desire the trend to become a reality in the future,positive steps must be taken to put an end to sth right now.,第38页,第二 三句话详细办法,for one thing/for another;,on one hand/on the other hand;,第39页,办法一,父母采取办法,parents are supposed to spend more time eduacating their kids to do sth,eg to refuse some useless information.,办法二,awareness about sth could be cultivated to make ourselves lead a healthy and favorable life.,information exploration,第40页,第四句,1),Only,by taking these action,can,people have a more brilliant and glorious future.,2)so,Shouldnt human beings pay much attention to the meaningful saying/problem?,3)so under no account could people divert attention from the issue of sth.,4)the more actively people face the saying/issue,the more happily they will lead their life.,第41页,四 书信作文,举例：求职信,大学快要毕业了，需要找工作，写一封求职信说明申请工作原因和自己能胜任理由,推荐一个旅游景点。,第42页,一 称呼,文中已给出:,文中未给出：,1 dear sir or madam,2 dear Mr president/professor/editor,二 正文,第43页,第一段,自我介绍+写作目标,自我介绍：,I am senior from the department of _ in_ university,.,写作目标：,I,am,To be frank,writing the letter in order to,(文中一定给出）,第44页,第二段,按文中要求来写；,比如推荐旅游景点,there,to begin with,are so many beautiful flowers and trees on campus.you,undoubtedly,will enjoy it.,第45页,in addition,the university is quite famous among chinese for it has a history about 100 years long.,consequently,a sports meeting is held there and you could think about taking part in it and make some new friends with some foreigners.,第46页,第三段,一：文中已经做出要求,一句话来写文中要求内容,第二句话 表示感激或期待回信,二未给出要求，则是：,表示感激+期待回信,第47页,表示感激：,A My thanks to you for your generous assistance are beyond words.,B Words fail me when I desire to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kind consideration my requirement/application/complaint.,C I take the opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for your generous assistance you rendered me,第48页,期待回信：,A i am looking forward to your reply.,B I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.,C your prompt attention to my.Would be highly appreciated.,第49页,三 落款：,yours truly,liming,第50页,