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作文高分技巧作文高分技巧 n1、卷面整洁，书写清楚n2、构思简单，少犯错误n3、中心突出，层次分明n4、固定经典，名言注目n5、重在变化，宁简勿滥 熟悉老师的评分习惯熟悉老师的评分习惯n n评分重点评分重点评分重点评分重点:文章的结构和语言水平文章的结构和语言水平文章的结构和语言水平文章的结构和语言水平n n两个基本点两个基本点两个基本点两个基本点:闪光点和语法点闪光点和语法点闪光点和语法点闪光点和语法点 n n应对策略应对策略:提问法、衔接词语、从句、提问法、衔接词语、从句、并列句、谚语总结法、灵活的词汇和并列句、谚语总结法、灵活的词汇和句型、以及被动语态等闪光点句型、以及被动语态等闪光点.n n“It is“It is not whatnot what you say/write,you say/write,but howbut how you say/write it you say/write it thatthat counts for much counts for much more.more.n n“Give the teacher exactly what“Give the teacher exactly what he/she wants to see.”he/she wants to see.”给阅卷老师最想要看到的。给阅卷老师最想要看到的。最常用的写作模式n n综观近几年的四级考试作文综观近几年的四级考试作文,尽管实用性提高尽管实用性提高了，但行文大多可以套用了，但行文大多可以套用:n n “中心句中心句中心句中心句1 1、2 2、3 3展开句展开句展开句展开句”模式。模式。模式。模式。n n每段第一句是每段第一句是topic sentencetopic sentence，改编自该段改编自该段改编自该段改编自该段相对应的中文提纲相对应的中文提纲相对应的中文提纲相对应的中文提纲，后面的，后面的1 1、2 2、3 3句是衔句是衔接词，每句后接分支观点接词，每句后接分支观点,尽量多用衔接词。尽量多用衔接词。尽量多用衔接词。尽量多用衔接词。n n利利:中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考生构思结构的时间。生构思结构的时间。生构思结构的时间。生构思结构的时间。n n弊弊弊弊:忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型,n n对策对策对策对策:多掌握常用词句多掌握常用词句多掌握常用词句多掌握常用词句,多运用不同的句型多运用不同的句型多运用不同的句型多运用不同的句型,多多多多使用不同的衔接词使用不同的衔接词使用不同的衔接词使用不同的衔接词 时间分配时间分配n n写作写作:时间共时间共30分钟，分值共分钟，分值共142分分 n n审题构思审题构思-3分钟分钟n n拟定提纲拟定提纲-5分钟分钟n n正文写作正文写作-20分钟分钟n n检查修改检查修改-2分钟分钟 n n考试作文的润色和修改润色和修改只需要达到三个目的：n n1.拼写正确，看文章中是否有汉字、多余符号、糊乱涂改、划线、和错别字；n n2.搭配正确,动宾,动词短语,形容词与副词,非谓语动词等；n n3.语法正确，特别是人称、时态、和单复数的不一致。衔接词衔接词衔接词衔接词是文章逻辑关系的体现，可用于各段是文章逻辑关系的体现，可用于各段,且且各段尽量用不同的衔接词各段尽量用不同的衔接词,多用为妙多用为妙.n n“起起”的过渡词：的过渡词：nowadays,in the first nowadays,in the first place,for one thing,on the one hand,place,for one thing,on the one hand,n n“承承承承”的过渡词：的过渡词：in the second place,for in the second place,for another,(besides,moreover,furthermore,another,(besides,moreover,furthermore,obviously,in addition,in other words,)what obviously,in addition,in other words,)what is moreis more；n n“转转转转”的过渡词：的过渡词：however,on the other however,on the other hand,but,instead,converselyhand,but,instead,conversely；n n“合合合合”的过渡词：的过渡词：last but not least,It last but not least,It followed that(followed that(由此可见由此可见),therefore,as),therefore,as a result,in short,in brief,in a word,in a result,in short,in brief,in a word,in conclusionconclusion。用于文章开头的句子：n n When it comes to,peoples opinions differ from each other.当谈及时,人们的观点各异n n There is a public discussion today about n nIt is said/reported/estimated/believed/suggested+that用于文章结尾的句子：n nAs far as I am concernedAs far as I am concerned,主句主句n nAs is mentioned aboveAs is mentioned above,we may,we may safely come to the conclusion that safely come to the conclusion that n nIt is high time that we should take It is high time that we should take measures to measures to n nIt is essential that effective measures It is essential that effective measures should be taken to should be taken to n nWhat really mattersWhat really matters is is that+that+从句从句 not thatnot that从句从句 重要的是重要的是 而不是而不是用于阐释原因的句子：n nSome reasons Some reasons are responsible forare responsible for it.it.n nThere are lots of reasons forThere are lots of reasons for the the dramatic growth/decrease.dramatic growth/decrease.n nThe phenomenon/change in The phenomenon/change in mainly mainly results fromresults from the fact that the fact that n nThe reason The reason whywhy is is thatthatn nIt is It is becausebecause1.对比论述型作文模版The Pros and Cons of Dormitory Life 1.很多人认为学校应该要求大学生很多人认为学校应该要求大学生住在宿舍内，理由是住在宿舍内，理由是2.很多人认为学校不应该强制大学很多人认为学校不应该强制大学生住在宿舍，理由是生住在宿舍，理由是3.在我看来，在我看来，.The Pros and Cons ofThe Pros and Cons of May 1st May 1st Golden WeekGolden Weekn n1、一些人认为保留五一黄金周，、一些人认为保留五一黄金周，赞成理由是赞成理由是n n2、另一些人认为取消五一黄金、另一些人认为取消五一黄金周，理由是周，理由是n n3、我的看法是、我的看法是结构模式：结构模式：n n第一段：导言第一段：导言+观点观点A。提出问。提出问题，阐明甲方观点及理由。题，阐明甲方观点及理由。n n第二段：观点第二段：观点B。阐明乙方观点。阐明乙方观点及理由。及理由。n n第三段：我的观点。第三段：我的观点。n n写作重点在以对比的方式展开两写作重点在以对比的方式展开两种对立观点种对立观点n n1)1)When it comes to When it comes to _,peoples opinions _,peoples opinions differ.differ.2)2)Many people believe that Many people believe that _._.3)3)For one thing,For one thing,_._.4)4)For another,For another,_._.填充内容：填充内容：n n第一段第一段 1）文章主题）文章主题 2）一些人）一些人的观点的观点 3）理由一）理由一 4）理由二）理由二 n n5)5)Some people,however,take a Some people,however,take a different attitude.different attitude.6)6)They regard They regard.as_.as_.7)7)In their In their views,_.views,_.8)8)Furthermore,Furthermore,_._.填充内容：填充内容：n n第二段第二段 5）另一些人反对）另一些人反对 6）另）另一些人的观点一些人的观点 7）理由一）理由一 8）理由二理由二n n9)9)As far as I am As far as I am concerned,_.concerned,_.10)10)On On the one hand,_.the one hand,_.11)11)On the other On the other hand,_.hand,_.12)12)So So _._.填充内容：填充内容：n n第三段第三段 9）作者自己的观点，看）作者自己的观点，看法法 10）论点一）论点一 11）论点二）论点二 12）总结上文）总结上文范文 1)1)When it comes to When it comes to whether university whether university authorities should require students toauthorities should require students to live in live in dormitory,dormitory,peoples opinions differ peoples opinions differ.2)2)Many people believe that Many people believe that there are there are great advantages of dormitory life.3)great advantages of dormitory life.3)For For one thingone thing,students have the chance of students have the chance of enjoying the friendship of their roommates.enjoying the friendship of their roommates.This can be the most precious memory This can be the most precious memory they have later in life.they have later in life.4)4)For anotherFor another,university dormitories do not cost much,university dormitories do not cost much,whilewhile leaving off campus can be very leaving off campus can be very expensive.Let alone the issue of securityexpensive.Let alone the issue of security.5)5)Some people,however,take a Some people,however,take a different attitude.different attitude.6)6)They They regardregard dormitory dormitory asas an undesirable place an undesirable place.7)7)In their views,In their views,since 4 to 8 people since 4 to 8 people live in one dormitory,there is not live in one dormitory,there is not enough privacyenough privacy.8)8)Furthermore,Furthermore,dormitory is troublesome because it dormitory is troublesome because it is very likely that one could have is very likely that one could have clashes with his dorm matesclashes with his dorm mates.9)9)As far as I am concerned,As far as I am concerned,students students benefit greatly from dormitory lifebenefit greatly from dormitory life.10)10)On On the one hand,the one hand,dormitory life provides dormitory life provides precious lessons on how to communicate precious lessons on how to communicate with others.with others.11)11)On the other hand,On the other hand,students do not feel lonely.There are students do not feel lonely.There are always people of the same age around.always people of the same age around.And when they have trouble,there are And when they have trouble,there are always helping hands in the dormitory.always helping hands in the dormitory.12)12)So So why live off campus why live off campus whilewhile there is there is good life right here?good life right here?Come and enjoy Come and enjoy dormitory lifedormitory life .2.问题解决型模版n n该类的作文通常首先提出一个有该类的作文通常首先提出一个有待解决的问题，然后要求考生就待解决的问题，然后要求考生就该问题提出解决方法、途径，有该问题提出解决方法、途径，有时还要求考生最后谈论适合自己时还要求考生最后谈论适合自己的方法。的方法。n nHow to Eliminate Fake DiplomasHow to Eliminate Fake Diplomas结构模式：结构模式：n n第一段：导言。描述现状、形势、困第一段：导言。描述现状、形势、困第一段：导言。描述现状、形势、困第一段：导言。描述现状、形势、困难，提出问题。难，提出问题。难，提出问题。难，提出问题。n n第二段：方法。列举说明处理某事的第二段：方法。列举说明处理某事的第二段：方法。列举说明处理某事的第二段：方法。列举说明处理某事的方式或者解决某个问题的途径。方式或者解决某个问题的途径。方式或者解决某个问题的途径。方式或者解决某个问题的途径。n n第三段：评价、建议或个人选择。第三段：评价、建议或个人选择。第三段：评价、建议或个人选择。第三段：评价、建议或个人选择。针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的评论，也可提出个人建议或选择，并评论，也可提出个人建议或选择，并评论，也可提出个人建议或选择，并评论，也可提出个人建议或选择，并简述理由。简述理由。简述理由。简述理由。n n本题型的写作重点在本题型的写作重点在本题型的写作重点在本题型的写作重点在“how”,how”,即解决即解决即解决即解决办法。办法。办法。办法。How to Succeed in a Job Interview How to Succeed in a Job Interviewn n1、面试在求职过程中的作用、面试在求职过程中的作用.n n2、取得面试成功的因素：仪表、取得面试成功的因素：仪表,举止举止,谈吐谈吐,能力能力,专业知识专业知识,自信自信,实实事求是事求是 n n1)1)With the development of _,With the development of _,_._.2)2)So it is of great So it is of great importance for us to_.importance for us to_.3)3)On the one hand,_.On the one hand,_.4)4)On On the other hand_.the other hand_.n n5)5)To _,we have figured To _,we have figured out many ways to _.out many ways to _.6)6)First,_.First,_.7)7)Second,Second,_._.8)8)Finally,Finally,_._.9)9)In a word,In a word,_._.n n10)10)To sum up,_.To sum up,_.11)11)It is It is high time for us to high time for us to _._.12)12)Therefore_.Therefore_.填充内容填充内容n n1）问题出现的背景）问题出现的背景2）提出）提出问题问题3）必要性或后果一）必要性或后果一 4）必要性或后果二必要性或后果二n n5）提出解决问题的方法）提出解决问题的方法 6）方法一方法一 7）方法二）方法二8）方法三）方法三 9）总结上文）总结上文n n10）重申主题）重申主题 11）进一步强）进一步强调主题调主题 12）总结上文）总结上文How to Succeed in a Job Interview 1)1)With the development of With the development of our modern our modern society,the interview is becoming more society,the interview is becoming more and more important in job-hunting.2)and more important in job-hunting.2)So it So it is of great importance for us to is of great importance for us to master master skillsskills on interviewon interview.3)3)On the one hand,On the one hand,if a if a job seeker can leave a good impression on job seeker can leave a good impression on the mind of the interviewer,he may be the mind of the interviewer,he may be lucky enough to get the job competed for lucky enough to get the job competed for by many applicantsby many applicants.4)4)On the other hand,On the other hand,if the job hunter gives a poor performance if the job hunter gives a poor performance during the interview,he is unlikely to stand during the interview,he is unlikely to stand a chancea chance.5)5)To To be successful in a job interviewbe successful in a job interview,we,we have figured out many ways to have figured out many ways to make an make an excellent performance in an interviewexcellent performance in an interview.6)6)First,First,the applicant ought to pay attention the applicant ought to pay attention to his appearance and manner of speakingto his appearance and manner of speaking.7)7)Second,Second,he is supposed to display his he is supposed to display his abilityability.8)8)Finally,Finally,a really impressive job a really impressive job seeker must convey a sense of self-seeker must convey a sense of self-confidenceconfidence.9)9)In a word,In a word,if the interviewee if the interviewee displays these characteristics and presents displays these characteristics and presents his most attractive qualities during the his most attractive qualities during the interview,the interviewer might make an interview,the interviewer might make an on-the-spot decision to take him on on-the-spot decision to take him on.10)To sum up,the job interview is indeed important.11)It is high time for us to pay attention to the skills.12)Therefore,if the interviewee has made full preparations for it and given a fairly confident and honest performance,his or her success can be ensured.Online Shoppingn n With the development ofWith the development of technology,technology,online shopping has become popular online shopping has become popular in peoples daily life.As many of us in peoples daily life.As many of us might have witnessed,more people are might have witnessed,more people are buying products through the Internet.buying products through the Internet.And to facilitate online purchase,And to facilitate online purchase,stores provide pictures of their stores provide pictures of their products together with other products together with other illustrations on the websites.illustrations on the websites.BesidesBesides,online products range from small online products range from small items such as clothes and books to items such as clothes and books to large ones like computers.large ones like computers.Undoubtedly,online shopping has Undoubtedly,online shopping has brought us many conveniences.Yet its brought us many conveniences.Yet its potential dangers to the consumer potential dangers to the consumer could not be ignored.One possible could not be ignored.One possible risk is that consumers might not get risk is that consumers might not get the exact product they want because the exact product they want because the information provided might not be the information provided might not be enough or reliable.For a simple enough or reliable.For a simple example,a consumer who wants to example,a consumer who wants to buy a pair of shoes might end up buy a pair of shoes might end up getting a pair with desired style but getting a pair with desired style but unfit sizes.unfit sizes.After all,people have to try themselves when buying clothes or shoes.Moreover,if consumers do not pay attention to the credibility of online stores,they might get cheated.n n Therefore,consumers should Therefore,consumers should firstlyfirstly be aware of the credibility of an online be aware of the credibility of an online store.store.SecondlySecondly,people should not,people should not jump on the bandwagon because not jump on the bandwagon because not all online shopping brings about all online shopping brings about convenience.convenience.Instead,Instead,they have to they have to make their own judgment as to the make their own judgment as to the kind of products that could be bought kind of products that could be bought online.Thus,they could avoid possible online.Thus,they could avoid possible trouble causing by inadequate or trouble causing by inadequate or inaccurate information provided by inaccurate information provided by an online store.an online store.3、道理论证型模版l l道理论证型道理论证型道理论证型道理论证型n n要求考生针对反映生活哲理的某个成要求考生针对反映生活哲理的某个成要求考生针对反映生活哲理的某个成要求考生针对反映生活哲理的某个成语、格言、谚语、警句等做出解释，语、格言、谚语、警句等做出解释，语、格言、谚语、警句等做出解释，语、格言、谚语、警句等做出解释，并论证其寓意的正确性。并论证其寓意的正确性。并论证其寓意的正确性。并论证其寓意的正确性。结构模式：结构模式：结构模式：结构模式：n n第一段：提出某种观点或现象第一段：提出某种观点或现象第一段：提出某种观点或现象第一段：提出某种观点或现象n n第二段：论证。用举例法或正反证法第二段：论证。用举例法或正反证法第二段：论证。用举例法或正反证法第二段：论证。用举例法或正反证法论述其意义。论述其意义。论述其意义。论述其意义。n n第三段：结论。再次强调主题，或表第三段：结论。再次强调主题，或表第三段：结论。再次强调主题，或表第三段：结论。再次强调主题，或表明自己的态度。明自己的态度。明自己的态度。明自己的态度。n n本题型的写作重点在解释和举例论证。本题型的写作重点在解释和举例论证。本题型的写作重点在解释和举例论证。本题型的写作重点在解释和举例论证。布局谋篇n n结合题目及提纲，可判定这是一篇道理论论证型的文章；文章的主题是做人应该诚实。n n第一段第一段 以说明文为主，列举社会上许多不以说明文为主，列举社会上许多不诚实的现象，比如考试作弊，报纸杂志广播诚实的现象，比如考试作弊，报纸杂志广播电视经常披露的虚假广告，众所周知的刘晓电视经常披露的虚假广告，众所周知的刘晓庆逃税案等。庆逃税案等。n n第二段第二段 做人应该诚实，诚实利人利己。通过做人应该诚实，诚实利人利己。通过正面展开论述。正面展开论述。n n第三段第三段 重述主题，结束全文重述主题，结束全文。It Pays to Be Honest It Pays to Be Honest1 1、当前社会存在许多不诚实的现象、当前社会存在许多不诚实的现象、当前社会存在许多不诚实的现象、当前社会存在许多不诚实的现象2 2、诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实、诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实、诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实、诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实n n 1)1)It is well-known that_.It is well-known that_.2)2)For For example,_.example,_.3)3)And_.And_.4)4)Whats more,_.Whats more,_.5)5)Even_.Even_.n n 6)6)However,_.However,_.7)7)First of all,First of all,_._.8)8)Meanwhile,Meanwhile,_._.9)9)And _.And _.10)10)Therefore,_.Therefore,_.n n 11)11)In a word,_.In a word,_.12)12)It pays It pays to_.to_.n n填充内容填充内容填充内容填充内容n n1 1）提出主题或现象）提出主题或现象）提出主题或现象）提出主题或现象2 2）举例一）举例一）举例一）举例一3 3）举例二）举例二）举例二）举例二 4 4）或）或）或）或 5 5）n n6 6）主题词）主题词）主题词）主题词 7 7）论证一）论证一）论证一）论证一 8 8）论证二）论证二）论证二）论证二 9 9）论证三）论证三）论证三）论证三n n1010）总结上文）总结上文）总结上文）总结上文 1111）总结全文）总结全文）总结全文）总结