英语写作[1].doc

英语写作六要素
一、审题要清
看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
　　二、要点明确
　　要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。
　　三、列出提纲
　　为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。
　　四、写顺全文
　　写短文时要做到五个方面：
　　1.避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。
　　2.多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型。
　　3.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致；注意冠词用法，例如：It takes Tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a；注意拼写，例如：fourteen，forty，ninth等不要写成forteen，fourty，nineth等;注意标点符号和大小写。
　　4.描写人物时，要生动具体，可以选择使用下列词汇，例如：外形：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，pretty等；颜色：red,yel-low，blue，white，green，brown，black等；心情：glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interest-ed等；情感：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等。
　　5.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间)，使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：并列关系：and,as well as,or…；转折关系：but,yet,how-ever…；时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,after that…；因果关系：so，there-fore，asaresult…；目的：in order to，in order that，so as to,so that…；列举：for example ,such as…；总结性：in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking…
　　五、没有病句
　　中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)看字数是否达到要求，看有无遗漏要点。
　　(2)看文体格式是否正确规范。
　　(3)看有无语法或用词上的错误。
　　(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。
　　(5)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。
　　六、先打草稿
　　考试中，书面表达应做到先打草稿，写完后多读几遍，检查是否有误，然后再抄到试卷上，注意字迹要工整，不涂、不画、不勾不抹，避免不必要的扣分。

英语作文样板
1.最近，教育部启动了“阳光体育”运动，建议全国中小学生每天坚持锻炼一小时，让他们健康、快乐。此项活动受到了广大学生的欢迎。李华对所在学校学生参加活动的情况和反映做了一个调查。请你根据下面调查表的内容，帮他给学校写一篇报道。词数：80词左右。报道的开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。
Interviewees
(调查对象)
Activities
Feelings
Reasons
most students
play sports
interested
have lots of fun
many students
skip rope
happy
keep healthy
some students
take a walk
relaxed
enjoy fresh air
a few students

worried
not enough time to finish their homework

The “Sunshine Sports” program is very popular in our school . Nearly all the students take part in it . Most students are interested in playing sports . They think they have lots of fun . Many students are happy with skipping rope . They believe it can keep them healthy . Some students relax while they are taking a walk . In this way they can enjoy fresh air . However , a few students are still worried that they may not have enough time to finish their homework .
No matter what students think about the program , they all like the idea , which will make them happy and keep them fit at the same time .

2.假如你是王欣，请根据以下信息写一封信给校长，推荐九年级一班学生刘建为电脑俱乐部主席。因为他有很多很好的个人品质：
（1）爱好广泛（如电脑、足球和篮球等）；（2）聪明用功（如合理安排时间、成绩好等）；
（3）热心助人，受同学们欢迎。（4）80词左右。
Dear Sir,
I think Liu Jian in Class 1 , Grade 9 is the best person to be chairman of the Computer Club .
He is not only good at computer , but also good at football and basketball . He is smart and always works hard and gets good grades . He knows how to use his time well to do things he likes . He is always ready to help others . We all like him , and he is very popular among us .
I will be thankful if you can think about my advice carefully and make Liu Jian chairman of the club .
Best wishes,
Yours,
Wang Xin
3.今年6月份中考结束后，你(Bruce)将迎来一个较为轻松的暑假。请把你的计划写成书信寄给(Tom)。信件内容包含以下要点：
（1）坚持每天一小时的体育锻炼；（2）与家人多交流，做些家务；（3）拜访几个老师与好友；
（4）安排一趟3-5天的旅游。 （5）词数不少于80。
Dear Tom ,
My summer holiday is coming . I have made a plan for it .
During the holiday , I want to go to visit some of my teachers and friends . In Grade Three , I was so busy that I had no time to talk with them . I will talk more with my family . I will try to do some housework . My parents work very hard . I should try my best to help them . I will have 3 or more days’ trip . Fresh air and beautiful views will be good for my health . Of course , daily exercise is important , too . I want be stronger .
How do you like my plan ? Would you like to share your plan with me ? Write me soon .
Yours,
Bruce
4.北京2008年奥运会志愿者招募活动已经开展，报名参加北京奥运会赛事的志愿者必须满足以下条件，请就此做一说明。词数：80-100。开头已经给出，不计算在内。
提示：
（1）law法律；related activity相关活动；（2）出生于1990年6月30日前；（3）必须遵守中国法律；（4）能够为奥运会连续服务7天或以上；（5）能够使用中英文进行交流； （6）可以参加赛前的各项培训和相关活动。
Voluteer wanted
Do you want to be a voluteer for the Beijing Olypic Games ? We are in great need of voluteers . If you want to apply for a job , you must meet the following requirements .
First , you must obey the laws of China . Second , you have to be born before June 30 , 1990 and in good health . Thirdly , you must be good at both Chinese and English so that people can understand you easily . One very important thing is that during the games you must work at least 7 days or more . Finally you must take part in some of the pre-games training and related activities .
Are you interested ? Come and join us .