英语作文辅导资料.doc

English Writing
一、例题精析
书面表达（满分25分）题目：
请根据下面的提示，以 My good friend为题，写一篇70字左右的短文来介绍你的好友Jimmy。省略号出自己补充适当内容。
1 阳光中学七年级一班的学生。家离学校不远，每天步行上学。大约要15 分钟。
2喜欢上体育，最喜欢打篮球，经常放学后和同学们做运动。
3作业不太多，有时间和同学聊天。还喜欢听音乐……
4 每天努力学习，希望……。
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯。2.包含以上所有要点。3.词数80左右。
【题目分析】
（一）审题可得
1. 文体：记叙文
2. 时态：一般现在时为主，还有一般时。
3. 要点把握：
1) Jimmy是阳光中学七年级一班的学生。
2) Jimmy家离学校不远，他每天步行上学。步行时间：15分钟
3) 他喜欢上体育，最喜欢打篮球，经常放学后和同学们做运动。
4) 每天作业不太多，有时间和同学聊天。还喜欢听音乐…
5) 每天努力学习，希望……。
（二）要点组织
1）Jimmy是阳光中学七年级一班的学生。Jimmy is a student of Class1 Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School.
2）Jimmy家离学校不远，他每天步行上学。步行时间：15分钟 Jimmy lives near his school. He goes to school on foot everyday. It takes him 15 minutes to walk there.
3）他喜欢上体育，最喜欢打篮球，经常放学后和同学们做运动。He likes to have sports lessons. His favourite sport is basketball. He often does sports with his classmates after school.
4）每天作业不太多，有时间和同学聊天。还喜欢听音乐…Jimmy doesn’t have much homework, so he has some time to talk with his classmates. He also likes listening to music.
5）每天努力学习，希望……。He works hard every day. He hopes he will be good at all the subjects/ a top student.

（三）分析题目，写好开头和结尾，恰当增加连接句子和连接词，使文章一气呵成。
My good friend
I have a good friend named Jimmy. He is a student of Class1 Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School. Jimmy lives near his school. He goes to school on foot every day. It takes him 15 minutes to walk there.
As we all know, he likes to have sports lessons and his favourite sport is basketball. He often does sports with his classmates after school. Jimmy doesn’t have much homework, so he has some time to talk with his classmates. He also likes listening to music.
Jimmy works hard every day, because he hopes he will be good at all the subjects/ a top student.
二、中考考点要求
1. 根据中文提示，写一篇100字左右的英文短文。(尽量不要超过120个单词)
2. 内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词拼写和标点符号正确，书写工整。
3. 有分段，有恰当的连词，有复杂句式。
三、作文七注意
（一）从整体着眼,提纲挈领扣题意
1.审清文体 2. 选准人称 3. 用好时态 4. 突出要点
（二）避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。句型可交替使用，以避免重 复和呆板。
（三）多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。
（四）注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
▲（五）谋篇布局——写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】
（六）检查修改文章:
认真检查，改正错误。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的 连贯性来给分，根据错
误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
1）格式是否有错。
2）拼写有无错误。
3）语言是否用错。
4）是否遗漏要点
5)时态、语态错误。
6)标点和大小写错误。
7）人称是否用错。
（七）写好草稿（如果时间允许的话）, 然后再抄到答卷上。书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。
书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。
四、谋篇布局——写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】
（一）作文万能结构示意图
Middle 正文
Ending
结尾
concluding sentence 结论句
----对全文的总结和概括。
【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】
supporting sentences 支持句
----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用连接词】
topic sentence 主题句
----说出文中的要点、核心问题
【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】
Beginning
开头

（二）开头、结尾和正文三大板块的训练
▲【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】Good beginning is half done.
1. 仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句
2. 造主题句训练Make a topic sentence.
1）Smoking
As we all know, smoking is a bad habit.
Many students say smoking is fun, but I don’t think so.
As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health.
2）The Spring Festival
I will never forget the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival plays an important part in our life.
Many people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival. But I don’t think so.
3）Learning English
As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.
Many people say it’s difficult to learn English. But I don’t think so.
4）To be a volunteer for the 16th Asian Games
As we all know, the 16th Asian Games is coming soon. I want to be a volunteer for it.
A volunteer plays an important part in the 16th Asian Games.
5）A School Trip
I will never forget the school trip last week.
▲【写好结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】
1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。
2. 结尾经典词组、句型：
At last/ Finally ... 最后
In a word, ... 总而言之
In short, ... 简言之
We hope that··· 我们希望
Let’s try our best to ....
I believe if we can..., ... will be ....
What a ...! / How...!
3.根据主题概括训练Make a concluding sentence
1）Keeping healthy
Let’s try our best to keep healthy.
In short, it’s important to have good habits and keep healthy.
2）Helping others
I believe if we can help others, the world will be more and more beautiful.
3）To be a green consumer(绿色消费者)
Let’s try our best to be a green consumer.
In one word, it’s necessary for us to protect the environment.
4）Beijing
How beautiful Beijing is! Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself
▲【正文：语言简洁，层次分明】
1.长句短句交叉使用最好。
2.基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用，基础好的同学要恰当写些从句提高档次。
3.把握要点，层次清晰。
4.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and ,so ,or, but, become
正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气
☆需要熟记的连接词有：
1、按事情发展的先后或时间顺序
1）Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly
2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally
3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the same time, not...until, before, after, when , while, during
2、表示并列
not only... but also, both... and, either ...or,
neither...nor，on (the) one hand…on the other hand
3、表示举例或补充
1）for example
2）besides / what’s more/ what’s worse
4、表示转折 however, but，although, instead of
5、表示原因 thanks to, because of，because
6、表示结果 as result (of) , so ，so...that, such...that,
7、表目的 in order to, so that
8、表比较 the same as, than, of all ...

五、作文步骤
1. 审题分析题目：找出作文的文体、时态、人称和文章的要点。
2. 根据要点的意思用英语进行最贴切的表达。注意每一个句子的主语尽量多样化，也就是说句子类型要多样化（能力的范围内尽量简单句和复合句交替使用），但文章的人称、时态应基本保持一致。另外，如果你有些要点不会直接表达，则注意转变成你会表达的英文去表达，但不要改变文章原本的意思更不能因为不会表达就放弃表达或者用错误的表达。
3. 多运用过渡词，连句成文，使全篇结构紧凑。每个点都要写全，并要有适当发挥,并按要点来分段，注意段落的结构，段落不可乱分，要有过渡。
4. 写好开头和结尾。
5. 复查纠错。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）是否遗漏要点。
5) 时态、语态错误。6) 标点和大小写错误。7）人称是否用错。
6. 注意书写，卷面做到无任何一处涂改。要求：打好草稿，并在草稿上改正。附：卷子的卷面很重要，要求有时间，都要草稿，特别是看图写句子。