初中英语作文备课讲稿.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,第六级,第七级,第八级,*,初中英语作文,如何评价学生的作文,1.委婉的评改学生们的劳动成果,完成黑板上的例文后，在老师的指导下，请同学们对黑板上的例文进行评改，可以从单词评写，语法规则，短语运用，内容涵盖，过度是否自然等等方面着手。当堂批改例文，不仅仅让例文的作者有了直接深刻的认识，也让在座的其他学生对作文的要求有了更深层次的认识。教师在总结归纳的时候也不忘发掘该文章中的闪光点，要尽量做到语气委婉，适当的时候要给予鼓励的言语和评价。,2.自我修改作文,通过对例文的批改，同学们大体知道了怎么样批改一篇作文，可以先让同学们说一说一篇优秀的作文该从哪几个方面着手：,作者的观点是否明确,;,各个段落是否符合该观点的论述,;,段与段之间的过渡是否自然;语言的表达是否流畅,;,结尾是否做到了首尾呼应或深化主题,或提出了解决问题的建议等,。再让学生对照标准,评价自己的作文。这样做的目的在于让学生明白作文评分要从内容(,思想和材料),、语言和结构。从而，让自己有一个深刻的认识以及获得最直接最快速的反馈。,3.批改作文的原则,遵循传递教学信息反馈再传递再反馈的原则。,教师要,充分发掘学生的闪光点,，挖掘学生的,潜力,，切忌一味的责备和尖刻的指责。并适当的给予表扬和鼓励，让学生逐步树立自信心，激发其学习写作的热情。,4.考核的方面,根据提示用英语,正确,、,清楚,地书面表达内容，考查学生,用英语分析问题,、,解决问题,以及,用英语进行思维表达,的能力。,只有切实提高初中英语作文评改的实效性，充分调动学生的写作热情，提高英语写作教学的效果，,常见错误类型：,单词拼写,语法错误（时态，三单，情态动词，句子）,不会用逻辑词,要点不全，审题不清,标点，大小写（字迹，卷面等）,假如你是Bill，你爱好广泛，很喜欢音乐、运动、读书等等。请根据以下提示，给你的网友Fred发一封电子邮件，介绍你的喜好。,提示：,1你刚刚结束期末考试，很高兴有时间和他谈论自己的爱好；,2你最喜欢轻柔的音乐、传统的音乐，因为,3喜欢运动健身，因为,4喜欢阅读科学书籍及理由。,要求：,1包含以上要点，可适当发挥。,2词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。,Dear,_,Fred，,Thanks,_,for,_,your,_,e,mailI,_,have,_,just,_,finished,_,my,_,final,_,examination,Im very happy to write to youNow Id like to talk about my hobbiesIn my spare time，I like listening to music thats gentle and traditionalI think it can make me feel relaxed.I also like music that has great lyricsAs for musicians，I like those who write their own songsI often do sports to keep healthyI like books on science because I can learn a lot from themWhat about you？Whats your hobby？Please write to me,Yours，,Bill,解析,本题考查学生写作能力。写作时首先要仔细审题，确定人称，时态，文体。内容要点要全面，上下段要使用连接词做到连贯，内容力求简洁精练。我们在用词上应该仔细揣摩，准确清晰地表达我们的思想，剔除冗词赘语，使文章言简意赅。,当前，全市各学校正开展“好书伴我成长”活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给信息，以“Growing up with good books”为题，用英语写一篇100-120词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。,读书的益处,获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐。,存在的现象,听音乐，看电视，上网，占用了大部分业余时间。,发出倡议,多读书，读经典好书。向世界传播中国传统文化。,让读书成为我们生活的一部分,要求：,1.倡议书应包括所有要点；2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数。,Growing up with good books,My dear friends,Reading is very important.We can get knowledge through reading.It can not only open our minds,but also make us clever and happier.Our study can be improved if we read more good books.The more we read,the more we will learn,and the brighter our futurewill become.,However,some students spend much time in listening to music,watching TV or going on line to play games.It takes much of their spare time。So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books,especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.,Lets start reading now.And let it become a part of our life!,解析,首先我们应该注意文章的体裁是应用文，那就要注意应用文的写作特点和格式。其次要注意时态，用一般现在时态。再次要注意内容要点，不要有漏啦。最后要注意条理清晰，语言具有感染力。,某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛，请你根据提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下：,1尽管我们常常感到有压力，但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松；,2我们应该足够细心，因为“失之毫厘，谬以千里”；,3也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡，试着安排好自己的空余时间；,4任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会取得大的进步。,5有问题时，我们,要求：1内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；,2词数90个左右；,3第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2句话补充完整。,How to Deal with Our Study Problems,Although we often feel stressed,we should find suitable ways to deal with stressWe can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxedWe should be careful enough,because“a miss is as good as a mile”We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbiesTry to plan your spare time wellDont lose heart at any timeYou will make great progress through hard workWhen having problems,we can ask people around us for helpIts not wise to keep our worries to ourselves,解析,五点内容都写全，注意第五点用两句话补充，句子通顺连贯，少出语法错误，单词不会可绕行，写出意思即可。时态一般现在时即可。字数不少于90,当前，全市各学校正开展“好书伴我成长”活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给信息，以“Growing up with good books”为题，用英语写一篇100-120词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。,读书的益处,获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐。,存在的现象,听音乐，看电视，上网，占用了大部分业余时间。,发出倡议,多读书，读经典好书。向世界传播中国传统文化。,让读书成为我们生活的一部分,要求：,1.倡议书应包括所有要点；,2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数。,Growing up with good books,My dear friends,Reading is very important.We can get knowledge through reading.It can not only open our minds,but also make us clever and happier.Our study can be improved if we read more good books.The more we read,the more we will learn,and the brighter our future will become.,However,some students spend much time in listening to music,watching TV or going on line to play games.It takes much of their spare time。So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books,especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.,Lets start reading now.And let it become a part of our life!,解析,首先我们应该注意文章的体裁是应用文，那就要注意应用文的写作特点和格式。其次要注意时态，用一般现在时态。再次要注意内容要点，不要有漏啦。最后要注意条理清晰，语言具有感染力。,根据下列信息写一封电子邮件给你的朋友告诉他们你一天的生活。,6:30 a.m.Get up,3:30 p.m.Play sports,6:45 a.m.Have breakfast,4:45 p.m.Go home,7:00 a.m.Go to school,6:30 p.m.Have supper,7:45 a.m.Have assembly,7:30 p.m.Do homework,8:00 a.m.Have lessons,9:30 p.m.Go to bed,Dear efriends,Thank you for writing to me.I want to tell you something about my life.,Please email me soon!,答案：写作指导1.本文要用一般现在时态来写。,2.所给的提示信息必须全部用上，切不可臆造。,3.要按照正确的时间顺序来写。,4.语句流畅，没有语法错误。,Dear e-friends,Thank you for writing to me.I want to tell you something about my life.On weekdays,I usually get up at 6:30 a.m.every morning.Then I have breakfast at 6:45 a.m.After breakfast,I go to school at 7:00 a.m.We do morning exercises at 7:45 a.m.at school.Then I begin to have lessons at 8:00 a.m.After school,I play sports at 3:30 p.m.and I go home at 4:45 p.m.I have supper at 6:30 p.m.with my family.And then I do my homework at 7:30 p.m.I go to bed at 9:30 p.m.I am very busy but I am happy every day.Can you write and tell me about your life?Please email me soon!Yours,Li Ming,此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢,