英语道歉信、感谢信模板式仿写与改写全江公开课名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,课题：道歉信、感激信写作之语段仿写、改写,一.学习目标,1.,acquire the skills of imitation and rewriting by practice,2.,acquire the basic patterns by learning,二.导学过程,1pre-writing,（1）Lead in,（2）present the imitation and rewriting 2.while-writing,（1）practice the method of imitation and rewriting,（2）role action,3.post-writing,（1）summary,（2）practice the basic patterns and skills,第1页,What is imitation and rewriting?,高考铭,分不在高，600就行。学不在深，高效则灵。千难万险，唯吾树旌。春来万山翠，谁知寸草心。参天有大树，试干九霄云。人生拼搏路，逞豪情。无真险之阻耳，恐本身之惧心。学海无涯路，书山攀登径。学子云：何惧之有？,思绪、结构、句式,关键点、人称、时态,第2页,Task1.,道歉信语段仿写与改写,假如你是李华，你班外籍教师Mike 组织全班同学于本周六到他家看统计片西部文化，你没能参加。关键点：,1.表示歉意,2.缺席原因,3.能否提供音影资料,I am really sorry to tell you that(道歉事情），and I am writing this letter to express my deep regret.,The reason for my absence is that (缺席原因1）,to make matter worse,(缺席原因2）I wonder if/I suggest that (补救办法等）,I am deeply sorry that,(某种行为）I hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.I also believe that this will not affect our friendship.,第3页,任务展现,假设你是李华。你班外教老师Mike组织全班同学本周六早晨去他家观看纪录片西方文化，你因故无法参加。请依据以下关键点，给他写一封道歉信。词数120左右。,1.表示歉意；,2.缺席原因；,3.能否提供影像资料。,第4页,1.表示歉意2.缺席原因3.能否提供音影资料,(道歉事情),I didnt go to see the film WESTEN CULTURE in your apartment with our classmates this Saturday,(缺席原因1）,I caught a bad cold.It is really difficult to arrange my time.,(缺席原因2）the doctor told me that I had to stay at hospital for two-day treatment,.,(补救办法等）,if you can lend me the music and video materials,and I promise to return it on time.,(某种行为）,I missed a valuable opportunity to know more about Western culture.,第5页,Task 2.,感激信语段仿写与改写,How is everything going with your life/study/work?Im writing to thank you for your,（感激原因）,During,you.First,you,详细帮助1,.Whats more,you,详细帮助2,.Another thing that I cant forget is that you,详细帮助3,./There is still one thing that I cant forget.That is.,Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Give my best regard to.,第6页,任务展现,假设你是李华，你作为交换生在英国学习期间寄宿在Wilson家，如今你学习期满，即将回国。请你依据下表内容给Wilson夫妇写一封感激信。,生活上，Wilson一家为你提供了舒适居住条件和可口饭菜。,学习上，Wilson夫妇经常帮助你练习口语，而且加深了你对英国文化了解。,另外，你们还成为了好朋友，而且他们也爱上了中国文化，这些给你留学生活留下了美好回想。,Para1（2-3句话）,点题,：学习期满，即将回国,启下,：代入法,Para2 采点与写点,Para3 结尾（2句话）代入法或换元法,第7页,Para.1 点题 启下Para.2采点写点Para.3 结尾,I feel very sad to say good-bye.Im writing to thank you for your hospitality and help,During my stay,you,provided me with,comfortable living conditions and delicious,meals,which made my life here really like,at home.,Besides,everyone in your family,often,helped me with,my oral English and,Ive,learned more about,your English culture.,Whats more,you,treated me as,a real friend,and your interest in Chinese culture,gave us so many topics in our communication.,All these will become,my precious memory,.,I will miss all of you.,第8页,Task 3 慰问信仿写、改写,假设你是李华，在得知汶川大地震消息之后，作为校学生会主席，你决定给灾区中学生写一封慰问信，主要内容包含：,1得知汶川发生特大地震，心情非常难过；,2看到你们表现得非常镇静、坚强，感动得热泪盈眶；,3患难见真情，全校师生向你们表示慰问同时，共计捐款12万元；,4美好家园能够重建，希望你们要看到希望、充满信心。,第9页,1.得知汶川发生特大地震，心情非常难过,2.看到你们表现得非常镇静、坚强，感动得热泪盈眶,3.患难见真情，全校师生向你们表示慰问同时，共计捐款12万元,4.美好家园能够重建，希望你们要看到希望、充满信心。,Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster,you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears,Im sad to hear that.as the chairman of student union,I am on behalf of all my schoolmates to express our most sincere pity and care for you,A friend in need is a friend in deed,Thinking about your present situation,we can not wait a minute to make every effort to help you expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty,A better hometown can be rebuilt.Therefore,never give up whatever happens.we wont be far away when you need any help!,第10页,