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Unit1 单元话题满分作文

假设你是李华，三年的初中生活即将过去，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上帮助了你。在即将毕业之际，请你在给Sam的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段100词左右的留言，要求包括以下内容要点：
1.你在学习上曾遇到的困难；
2.Sam对你的帮助和建议：（1）多听多读；（2）多看英文电影，多唱英文歌曲；（3）……（自由发挥；不少于一项内容）；
3.你的收获及对Sam的感谢和祝福。
◆◆审题指导
1.文体：书信
2.时态：一般过去时和一般现在时
3.注意事项：注意段落布局和恰当使用复合句、连接词，增加得分点。
When it comes to the help..…
words to show thanks…
◆◆思路点拨
表达感激

My spoken English and written English were poor..…

描述困难

Firstly……listen more and read more... Besides，…watch English movies and sing classic English songs..…
In addition，…reading aloud..…

学习建议

Dear Sam，
How time flies! It's time for us to say goodbye!
When it comes to the help you gave me in my English, I think words to show thanks are far from enough.
I still remember three years ago, I had difficulty in learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying. I was weak in spoken English and written English too. However, I'm lucky that I met you.
Firstly, you advised me to listen more and read more.
And they really helped me a lot. Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classic English songs. In addition, you told me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning and reading novels before going to bed. As a result, I finally made great progress.
Thank you for all your help and best wishes for you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

1.【广州】你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。
Ben’s problems
Your advice and reasons
朋友少，感觉孤单
1.参加学校社团（club）—结识更多朋友
2.?（请你补充）
英语单词难记
1.多阅读英语故事、新闻—在英语单词运用中学单词
2.?（请你补充）
Dear Ben,
1am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that..…
...
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
注意：
（1）回信应包括所有要点；
（2）词数80左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计、入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Dear Ben,
1am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends.
I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. The second problem you mentioned in your letter is that you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day, it will be easier for you to remember more words.
1hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
2. 最近，你随机调查了你校50名同学的课外英语学习现状(结果如下表)。请你就此用英文写一篇短文，在英语课堂上进行汇报，并谈谈你的看法和建议。
要求:1.文章必须包括图表中四项内容，可适当增加细节；  
2.看法和建议至少两条；
3.词数：不少于90，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：more than超过；go over浏览；practice练习；the secret of...……的秘密； helpful有用的
课外英语学习现状
学习方式
读背单词
书面练习
复习笔记
听说训练
学生人数
47
42
18
7

I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class. Almost all students read and recite English words. They think vocabulary is the most important for English learning. More than 40 students do a lot of written exercises. Some students go over their notes they have taken in class. However, only a few students spend time practicing listening and speaking. In my opinion, listening and speaking are the secrets of becoming a good language learner. We need to do lots of listening and speaking practice, such as watching English movies and listening to English songs. Moreover, chatting with foreigners can be helpful.