建议信 (2).docx

Unit 1 Reading for Writing
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出自己的建议和忠告。
2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。
3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语言得体且语气委婉。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
写作模式
首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，注意语气。
主体段落：提出具体建议并阐述理由。
结尾段：礼貌地表达希望收信人接受建议的愿望。
建议信写作的注意事项：
a．这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。
b．这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用语句
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料，表明写作意图。)
1.I am sorry to know that…
2.I am very glad to hear that you want to…
3.I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter.
4.I am writing to you for the purpose of ...
5.I am writing to share some advice with you .
6.It’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on...
7.I’m writing to offer you some advice about...
8.I’m writing to express my views concerning....
9.In my personal opinion, it would be helpful/ useful for you to take the following advice.
B.建议信第二段常用句式。(提出建议，阐述理由。）
1. Firstly, why not do…? If you do this, you will…
Secondly, you should /can …. Then/ That way, …
Thirdly, it would be a good idea if …. By doing this, …
Last but not least, …
2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
3.I would like to suggest/recommend that...should...
4.If I were you, I would ....
5.When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should ...
6.As for..., I suggest that you should....
C.建议信结尾常用句式
1.I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
2.I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful.
3.I believe if you follow my advice, you’ll ......
4.I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
5.Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象

1.Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性
整体三部分
2.Body
中心记述部分；层次分明
3.Ending
小结；呼应主题
书面表达如何写（三步骤）

Step1 list the key points
Step2 make sentences
Step3 form a passage and polish
写作训练：
假设你是李华， 你的美国笔友Jack正在位即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。
1.制定复习计划，树立信心
2.坚持锻炼身体。
3.保持良好睡眠
注意：词数80词左右
可适当增加细节，已使行文连贯
Version1
Dear Jack:
I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam. I’d like to give you some advice.
First, make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Second , take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last but not least, don’t stay up late studying. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.
I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.
Yours,
Lihua