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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,7.被动语态,我们要出台法律法规来禁止假冒伪劣产品生产和流通。,Laws and regulations should be worked out to ban the manufacture and circulation of fake and shoddy goods.,1.We are making great efforts to improve our English.,2.Because of social demands,there appear many evening schools.,3.We may think more of the elderly who live apart form their children.,be called into existence,1/23,8.倒装句,考试中，倒装句往往出现在结尾段，组成文章亮点，能够直接套用以下句型：,1.On no account/by no means can we do sth.决不能.,2.Only in this way can we do sth3.Not only,but also.,2/23,文体与结构,引言段（引言铺垫+全文中心）,主体段（段落主题+支持扩展）,结论段（过分总结+引申提议）,3/23,开头段落写法,一篇文章开头能够在很大程度上决定阅卷老师对其第一印象，同时也,基本决定,了得分。假如能有一个自然得体，引人注目标开头，必定会为文章增色不少。当然在重视开头段落同时也不要走入误区，堆砌经典句型，随意套用句型，效果适得其反。,写好开头段落惯用方法有：,背景介绍法，场景描写法，引用数据法,等。,4/23,背景介绍法,背景介绍法=背景概述+背景详述(+全文中心),On disposal products,Disposal products are gaining increasing popularity in China.,（Now they practically become part of our life:we have disposal chopsticks,disposal cups,disposal clothes,disposal cameras.）Indeed we are in a throwaway society.,背景概述,背景详述,5/23,Advertisements appear everywhere in modern society.（,背景概述,）When you walk along the streets,you can see large billboards with pretty girls smiling at you.When you read newspapers,you see half the pages covered with ads.When you turn on the TV,you see commercial advertisements again.（,背景详述,）Whether you like it or not,advertising pours into your life.,On advertisement,6/23,背景概述惯用句型,With the development of modern society.,Recently the phenomenon of has aroused considerable concern.,Recently the issue of has been brought into focus.,Recent years have witnessed a substantial increase in.,Nowadays one of the pressing problems confronting our society is.,These days.has become a common occurrence in our daily life.,These days often hits the headlines of newspapers.,7/23,在背景概述中能够加上一两句表示强调作用“经典废话”插入语，同位语，定从，it句型等，效果更佳。,Keeping a pet,Nowadays,is becoming more and more popular.,Nowadays,it is widely known to us(that),raising pets,such as dogs and cats,is becoming more and more popular in big cities.,It is generally acknowledged that,nowadays raising pets such as dogs and cats is becoming more and more popular in big cities.,Nowadays,as is known to all,raising pets such as dogs and cats is becoming more and more popular in big cities.,8/23,Practice makes perfect,Waste on campus,failure,9/23,Nowadays,waste is quite prevalent and serious on campus.Food is thrown away simply because it doesnt taste good.Newspapers and magazines are discarded,because they have been read.What is worse,students seem to be quite accustomed to such waste and dont have a feeling of guilt.But waste can do much harm.,10/23,2.Failure is a common occurrence in our daily life.As students we sometimes fail to get high scores in our examinations,when we play games,we might be beaten by others.And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work.All these failures happen naturally and almost every one of us has such experiences.,11/23,场景描写法,背景描写是一个最惯用开头方法，但假如只满足于用一些老生常谈clich,如“with the development of modern society.”轻易落入俗套。所以为了写出新意，能够尝试一开始就依据不一样主题设计不一样相关场景，一边给读者身临其境感受，这么才能现身多人给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。,12/23,A boom in adult education,Every Tuesday and Friday evening,sees,Miss Li,my neighbor and a secretary in a company,rush home,after a hard days work,gulp down,her meals and then,hurry out,to catch the bus for her English class.,Miss Lis case is not unique,and now more and more city adults spend their leisure time trying to improve themselves at school or college.,13/23,场景描写能够是一个小故事，一段小对话或独白,Health and wealth,“,If only I could,be a millionaire!”,Last time when I,went out shopping,I overheard a cry uttered by,a little boy when faced with thousands of toys on display.,In fact,nowadays,there are few places where you cannot hear such words from mouths of people of all ages,but,is wealth so important as to outweigh health?,14/23,大学生找工作难,“If only I could be offered a job,even with little pay!”last time when I was in a job market I overheard a cry uttered by a graduate,who,obviously,had been turned down for many times.These days it is known to all that it is increasingly difficult for college graduates to find jobs,what are the reasons?,15/23,It pays to be honest,“Lei Feng has died already,”some people say whenever they deplore the fact that nowadays no one in the street will come to a persons assistance when he is in trouble or in danger.The same view is voiced by many people who complain about the decline in the moral standards in recent years and hope that the spirit of Lei Feng,a model soldier who devoted his short life to the public good,will stay with us.,16/23,场景描写法,The case is not unique.,This is a common sight.,There are few places where you can not expect to find such stories.,Likein the story,many people have the same experience.,PS:设计对话或者情景+过渡句+中心句,17/23,Is stress a bad thing?,“I cant stand the pressure and competition,”explained one friend of mine when asked why he decided to quit his highly-paid but demanding position in his company recently.My friend may have his own reasons,but I dont think his decision wise in reality.,18/23,引用数据法,According to a recent survey,the average time an American spends with his family,declines by 25%,and the length of breakfast,shrinks by 40%,over the last three decades.,In recent years,on campus,the phenomenon of cheating in exam has become rampant.Statistics show that almost 80%students admitted they used to cheat once.Whats the reason cause that?(by Linda ),19/23,大意总结法句型,There is no consensus of opinions among people as to whether or not we should.,There are some controversies as to the view of.,When asked about,a divergence of opinions arises.,Nowadays,there has been a sensational debate on whether or not we should.,对于某个社会现象有不一样声音,一些观点认为,而另外一些人认为.,20/23,5.People who are against sth.hold that,others,however,argue that.,6.It is held that,while it is also held that.,7.Some holdwhile others take it for granted that.,21/23,大学生校外租房,There is no consensus of opinions among people as to renting houses outside campus.Some people held that renting houses outside campus allows students more freedom;While others argue that this practice will do harm to students concerned.,Is this practice good or bad?Is it really necessary for the students to do so?,PS:加上几个问句，这么不但过渡自然，而且新奇。,22/23,另外，我们还能够把大意总结法和背景介绍法结合使用,Nowadays the phenomenon has aroused considerable concern a larger number of college students choose to rent houses to live outside campus.As to the view of this phenomenon peoples idea vary from one to another.Some people held that renting houses outside campus allows students more freedom;while others held that this practice will do harm to students concerned.,23/23,