择业观图表作文演示课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,1,图表作文注意事项,1.图表,小作文关键要,有数据,！,1)数据除了%表示外，还可以用分数，倍数，少了或多了多少表示，如less/more by 20%,2)如果数字很多，挑最明显的，如最大最小，最特别的,2.谋篇必须总体考虑！,5句必须总分总,1)总:说明图表展示的主要内容,2)分:以数字,比例大至小的顺序说明数据,3)总:结论,总的概括,其中分的顺序也要下笔前想好,如：从大到小或男女分开，,切记不要简单罗列,柱状图 graph 饼图 pie chart,长条图;条线图,bar chart,2,此次作文出现的问题：,1.结构不对：第一句（内容）和最后一句（小结）,2.数据表达方式单一，且数据表达没有重点且没有层次，比较杂乱。,3.直接用“teacher”“lawyer”指代内容。用指代内容。,4.名词的单复数。可数名词的使用.,好的方面：,1.用上了图表作文的专业用语和之前讲述过的高级句型：,There is no denying fact that,It is no far to seek that,According to the bar chart,we can obviously find out that,As can be seen from the graph,we can draw a conclusion that,2.过渡词：what is worth mentioning,nevertheless（不过，然而）,3.开头句表达呈多元化：,3,As can be seen from the bar chart,obvious difference has been shown to us about the outlook of choosing jobs between boys and girls.陈科文,What can be seen from the chart is the different opinions of choosing jobs between boys and girls.杨思殷,As can be seen from the chart,great different choices of the job have distinguished between boys and girls.蔡莹莹,Nowadays,a fresh and original survey was carried out,aiming at working out the difference between boys and girls in their passion for choosing the job.罗俊彬,4,Recently,a survey on the future occupational choice was conducted among all students in our school.,Evident in the graph,the choice of teacher,tops the girls list,with 35%,which is the,bottom option on,boys with only 5%,while the only common choice,lies in,doctor with 20%,respectively in both sexes,.,As for boys most favorite job,it,falls on scientist with,30%,followed by businessman,which comes in a close second by,5%less.,In the above two fields,the same quantities of girls,are going in for,them with 15%each and lawyer is,another,career showing the difference,with 15%in boys and 10%in girls.,Although,5 percent of students are still not clear about their future jobs,a conclusion is safely drawn that,the majority of students hold a positive attitude towards their occupational choice.,5,go in for,1.参加I am,going in for,an entrance examination next year.我明年参加入学考试。,2.喜欢Henry,went in for,swimming.,3.从事,They wanted me to,go in for,film work.他们要我从事电影工作。,6,此次作文写得好的同学：,潘致毅，范喆，李炳炫，苏栎文，罗俊彬，劳炜力，江旭明，陈宇恒，罗倩彤，李志伦，李亮，黄河，何婉华，庄超，陈远均，陈诗韵，,7,