道歉信全国卷(课堂PPT).ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,如何写道歉信,1,2016,全国卷,-,道歉信,假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：,1.表示歉意；,2.说明原因；,3.另约时间。,注意：,1.词数100左右；,2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,2,Dear Bob,I,m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you,in,Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to attend,to,an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too,much,trouble.,Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out early so that we,ll have more time to read and select book.If it,s convenient for you,let,s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If,no,let me know what time suit,ed,you best.I should be available any time after school next week.,Looking forward to your early reply.,Yours,Li Hua,短文改错,(5,处,),3,Dear Bob,I,m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you,in,Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to,attend,to,an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too,much,trouble.,Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out early so that we,ll have more time to read and select,book,.If it,s convenient for you,let,s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If,no,let me know what time,suit,ed,you best.I should be available any time after school next week.,Looking forward to your early reply.,Yours,Li Hua,4,Dear Bob,I,m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.,Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out early so that we,ll have more time to read and select books.If it,s convenient for you,let,s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If not,let me know what time suits you best.I should be available any time after school next week.,Looking forward to your early reply.,Yours,Li Hua,5,Dear Bob,I,m sorry to say that I,might,have no choice but to break my promise,of going to the book store with you.I,have just been informed that,our class is going to hold an important meeting on Saturday afternoon-,exactly,the time we shall meet.What an awful,coincidence,!I feel so sorry about it.,Now that I am not able to be present on time,shall we choose another time?I will be,availabe,any time after the meeting.Will Sunday morning,suits your convenience,?If so,we can meet then and I am sure we will have a good time together.,I,make an apology,again for not going to the bookstore with you as promised.I sincerely wish we can,have fun,next time.,Yours,Li Hua,学生习作范例,6,Letter of Apology,1.,我们在工作或生活中，有时难免会犯一些错误，写封致歉信就显得很有必要。也是高考的一个应用文的常见考法。,2.,通过刚才的范文，你能否总结出道歉信的内容？,道歉信通常包括：,表示歉意,3.,语言层面：,写道歉信的语言要,诚挚,，解释的,理由要真实,，不要显出丝毫的虚情假意。,（,1,）,_,（2,）,_,（,3,）,_,表示歉意、说明写作目的,说明具体原因、提出补救办法,再次致歉、希望得到理解,7,模板,1,：过去没有完成的事情,Dear,，,I am writing,this letter to apologize to you for my failing to,.,The reason is,that,.I am sorry that I cannot finish,in time,but is it possible that,I make up the loss by,?,If so,I will put everything else aside to,.,I do hope that,you can understand my situation and accept my apology.,Yours sincerely,Li Ming,8,模板,2,：过去没有完成的事情,Dear,，,I am very sorry that,./It is a pity that_.,I am writing you this letter to show my deep regret.,I do hope,you can understand me and excuse me for_.,I will be very grateful if,you are kind to listen to my explanation.,The reason,for my delay/absence,is,that,.,Therefore,_.,I sincerely hope,that you can accept my apology and understand it.,I would appreciate,your allowing me to _.Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.,Yours sincerely,Li Ming,9,模板,3,：将来不能做的事情,Dear,，,Much to my regret/I am terribly sorry that,I am unable to,.,It is mainly because,at that time I will be full occupied by,which is quite out of my expectation,and that conflicts with your,.,Therefore,I am forced to adjust my schedule and cannot make my presence on your,.,I sincerely hope that,you will enjoy a good time.By the way,can we have dinner together some time next week?I hope to see you soon.,I am really sorry again and I trust that you will understand.,Yours sincerely,Li Ming,10,开头,常用句式,I am writing to,apologize(to you)for(my failing to),I am writing this letter to express my regret,I am terribly sorry that,I am indeed very sorry,for,what I said/did,but believe I had no intention to,I would like to,express my deepest apology for not being able to,I must beg your forgiveness for,Please,accept my sincere apology for,e.g.Im writing to express my sincere apology for missing our appointment at 3 oclock yesterday afternoon,when,you planned/intended to give me advice on how to learn English well.,11,结尾,常用句式,Please allow me to say sorry again.,(Once again,)I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.,Will you please accept my apology?,I hope,you can accept my apologies.,I sincerely hope thatyou will be able to,understand my situation/think in my position,and accept my apologies.,I,would appreciate it if you could,give me another chance to meet me.,Would you mind,if I change the appointment time?,12,其他常用句式,I am sorry that I will not be able to due to,I feel,awfully,sorry about it and want you to know what happened.,I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience.,We assure you that,such a matter will never happen again.,我们向你保证此类事件不会再发生,In order to avoid happening again,I have,Would you mind if,I change the appointment time?,Would it,be convenient for,you?,13,Body,未能赴约的原因,:,look after a family member;,do a good deed;,get a bad cold;,pick sb.up at the airport,How to expand?,如何补充细节？,14,Body,未能赴约的原因,1.,我叔叔,/,阿姨从美国回来,2:30,时下飞机。然而，我爸爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接他。,2.,我妹妹生病了，她才五岁，不能照顾自己，而爸爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。,3.,在去见,Tom,的路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到医院,4.,本人生病，医生建议我呆在家里，好好休息。,15,未能赴约原因：,1.,我叔叔从美国回来,2:30,时下飞机。然而，我爸爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接他。,Yesterday afternoon,my uncle/aunt came from America and got off at 2:30,but my parents had no time to pick him up,in which case,I had to meet him at the airport.After that it was too late to meet you.Thus I missed our appointment.,16,2.我妹妹生病了，她才五岁，不能照顾自己，而爸爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。,My younger sister who was only 5 years old had a bad fever.She is too young to look after herself,and my parents were at work.,In that case,I had to stay at home to take care of her,which,caused me unable to meet you as appointed/planned.,17,3.,在去见,Tom,的路上我碰到一起交通事故，一位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到医院,On my way to the book store,I happened to see a car accident.An old man was badly injured,but nobody came to offer help.So I stopped a taxi and sent him to a nearby hospital.I stayed there for several hours until his son came,which caused me to miss our appointment.,4.,本人生病，医生建议我呆在家里，好好休息。,I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself.For my healths sake,the doctor advised me to,stay at home to have a rest.,18,道歉信常见问题总结,1.,原因无话可说，理由不诚恳，过于牵强，比如说自家房子着火了、家里的猪跑了等理由；,2.,写的过程中时态不对，明明是还没有发生的事情，结果变成了过去式，所以要分清楚过去没有完成的事情还是将来不能做到的事情；,3.,表达上常见的词汇和语法错误。,19,