专题06-应用文写作(解析版).docx

专题06 应用文写作
---2023年新高考八省最新名校联考试题汇编
(解析版)

1. 【2023届福建省漳州一中质量检测英语试题】

假设你是李华，你的外国朋友David对你们学校的书法社(Calligraphy Club)非常感兴趣，他向你询问该社团的相关情况，请你给他写一封信介绍该社团。内容如下：
(1)书法社的简介；
(2)书法社举行的活动。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)书信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
_________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
Learning that you are enthusiastic about the Calligraphy Club in our school, I’m delighted to introduce it to you in detail.
Founded in September in 2010, the club aims to help cultivate/ arouse students’ interest in Chinese calligraphy. The number of its members is increasing year by year. What’s more, attracted by its rich activities, calligraphy lovers take an active part. During each semester, activities like appreciating calligraphy works, exchanging ideas on practicing calligraphy and holding exhibitions of famous calligraphy works are always held in our school.
If interested, register for it before January 20. Looking forward to your participation!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友David一封信，给他介绍学校书法社的相关情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be enthusiastic about →be interested in
高兴的：delighted → happy
而且：What’s more → Moreover
成立：found → set up
2. 句式拓展
简单句变为复合句
原句：What’s more, attracted by its rich activities, calligraphy lovers take an active part.
拓展句：What’s more, because they are attracted by its rich activities calligraphy lovers take an active part.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you are enthusiastic about the Calligraphy Club in our school, I’m delighted to introduce it to you in detail.（运用了现在分词作原因状语和由that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Founded in September in 2010, the club aims to help cultivate/ arouse students’ interest in Chinese calligraphy.（运用了过去分词作状语）

2.【广东省六校2023年高三联考】
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Charlie询问你刚度过的寒假生活。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 分享有意义的活动;     
2. 活动的安排及原因。
注意：
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Charlie,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
Kind regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Charlie,
My past winter vacation was filled with so many memorable experiences that I’m thrilled to share with you what’s unforgettable to me.
To better serve my community in winter vacation, I seized the opportunity to participate in a volunteer service to run a book drive for kids in low-income families. The top priority for us is to reach out to more potential donors and promote the drive in multiple ways, including local newspapers, social media accounts, etc. With joint efforts, we proudly accomplished the tough task and gained a deeper insight into the community we live in. What impressed me most, throughout the whole activity, was commitment of volunteers, enthusiasm of donors and the happy smiling faces of those kids who got their beloved books. Most importantly, the kids are now guided by, so to speak, a lighthouse that illuminates their way, helping them navigate in the sea of life.
I would appreciate it if you enjoy my vacation story. I also look forward to your memorable moments.
Kind regards.                                                
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Charlie,
Knowing from your last email that you are interested in my winter holiday, I’m writing to share with you some details of it.
With great excitement and enthusiasm, my family embarked on a self-drive tour back to my hometown and thus had a chance to explore my hometown from a different angle. Upon arrival, what came into sight was a brand-new village with neatly-arranged houses and a crystal-clear stream running through it, which has been transformed into a favored destination for agritourism. It was the vast fields, distinctive rural home-stay and excellent ecological environment that kept me spellbound and helped relieve my pressure from study. Besides, since the Chinese Lunar New Year fell in the winter holiday, I was able to reunite with my friends and visit the elder, enjoying varieties of celebrations together.   
It goes without saying that not only did this trip offer me a chance to gain a deeper insight into my hometown, but it was also an unforgettable memory of relaxation and celebration. How about your winter holiday? I look forward to your memorable moments.
Kind regards.                                                
Yours,
Li Hua

3.【石家庄市二中2022-2023学年高三试题】

假如你是李华，学校要在12月底为高三学生举行一场成人节活动（a coming-of-age ceremony），你希望参加此次活动的策划工作。请根据以下提示，用英语给学校写一封申请信，内容包括：
1.对此活动的认识；
2.你的活动创意。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式写在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am applying for the activity planner for the coming-of-age ceremony falling on Dec 30th.
This once-in-a-lifetime ceremony, I believe, is a golden opportunity to impress upon us students the significance of shouldering responsibility and fulfilling our obligation as a young adult.
To make this event memorable, firstly, we will invite the principal to deliver an inspiring speech articulating the real meaning of being a mature grown-up. Then, we will walk through the Longmen, a typical signifier of adulthood, with our parents, with photos taken to mark this special occasion.
Hope my creativity above will land me this position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语给学校写一封申请信，参与成人节活动的策划工作。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织者：organizer→planner
机会：chance→opportunity
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
一瞬间：a click away=a split second
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then, we will walk through the Longmen, a typical signifier of adulthood, with our parents, with photos taken to mark this special occasion.
拓展句：Then, we will walk through the Longmen, which is a typical signifier of adulthood, with our parents, with photos taken to mark this special occasion.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This once-in-a-lifetime ceremony, I believe, is a golden opportunity to impress upon us students the significance of shouldering responsibility and fulfilling our obligation as a young adult. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] To make this event memorable, firstly, we will invite the principal to deliver an inspiring speech articulating the real meaning of being a mature grown-up. (运用了不定式作目的状语)

4.【黑龙江省实验中学2022-2023学年高三模拟试题】
假定你是李华，你校学生会下个月将举办“国画大赛”，请你以学生会主席的身份在学校英文网站上写一则英语通知，告知学生们参赛，内容包括：
1.比赛目的；
2.参赛作品要求；
3.作品上交时间及地点。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：参赛作品entry，国画大赛 traditional Chinese painting contest
NOTICE
________________________________
Student Union
【答案】One possible version:
NOTICE
To promote our traditional Chinese culture, “Traditional Chinese Painting Contest” will be held in the school hall next month.
Every participant is allowed to hand in only one entry, which must be created by your own. Besides, each piece is to be displayed with a brief introduction. All entries will be submitted to the Student Union from December 25th to December 30th. Whoever stands out as one of the top ten will be awarded. The winners’ works will be posted on our school website.
Every student is welcome to take part.
Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校学生会下个月将举办“国画大赛”，请你以学生会主席的身份在学校英文网站上写一则英语通知，告知学生们参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
传统的：traditional→conventional
展示：display→present
此外：besides→furthermore
参加：take part→participate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To promote our traditional Chinese culture, “Traditional Chinese Painting Contest” will be held in the school hall next month.

拓展句：“Traditional Chinese Painting Contest” will be held in the school hall next month, whose aim is to promote our traditional Chinese culture.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Every participant is allowed to hand in only one entry, which must be created by your own.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Whoever stands out as one of the top ten will be awarded.(运用了whoever引导的主语从句)

5.【湖北省高中名校联合体2023年高三诊断试题】
假定你是李华，你因故不能按时上交关于中西文化差异的作文，请你向外教James写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 请求延时；
2. 说明原因；
3. 希望批准。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear James,
I’m Li Hua. I’m terribly sorry that I will fail to finish my essay on cultural differences which is due on February 5th. I’m writing this to request you to extend the deadline.
Something unexpected occurred to my family. My mother suddenly fell ill yesterday and I must leave for home today. I’m afraid it will take me a week before I get back to school. I have written an outline and a draft for the essay and I assure you that I will hand it in on my return.
Kindly grant me a one-week extension. I would appreciate it if you could approve my request. With best regards.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教James写一封电子邮件，告诉他自己因故不能按时上交关于中西文化差异的作文，请求延时并说明原因同时希望批准。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：terribly→extremely
发生：occur to→happen to
完成：finish→complete
请求：request→beg

2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I have written an outline and a draft for the essay and I assure you that I will hand it in on my return.
拓展句：As I have written an outline and a draft for the essay, I assure you that I will hand it in on my return.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m terribly sorry that I will fail to finish my essay on cultural differences which is due on February 5th.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could approve my request. (运用了it作形式宾语)

6.【湖南省长沙市长郡中学2022-2023学年高三试题】
假定你是校学生会主席李华，学校将举行“职业初体验（Experience Your Future Job）”活动，请你写一封邮件邀请留学生Jack参加，要点如下：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动安排；
3. 其他。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,
On behalf of our Students’ Union, I’m writing to invite you to participate in an activity called “Experience Your Future Job” to be held next Saturday.
Aimed at getting students prepared for their future job hunting, a variety of activities are designed based on real-life situations, where participants are free to try any type of occupations they are curious about. Besides, professionals will assist us during the process so that we can get timely help if needed.
Starting from 2:00 pm, the activity will last for three hours. If you are interested, please go to the playground 20 minutes in advance to get dressed up. I’m looking forward to meeting you there!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生Jack写信邀请他参加学校将举行的“职业初体验（Experience Your Future Job）”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
种类：type→sort
职业：occupation→profession
此外：besides→moreover
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Starting from 2:00 pm, the activity will last for three hours.
拓展句：The activity, which will start from 2:00 pm, will last for three hours.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed at getting students prepared for their future job hunting, a variety of activities are designed based on real-life situations, where participants are free to try any type of occupations they are curious about.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you are interested, please go to the playground 20 minutes in advance to get dressed up.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)

7.【江苏镇江一中2023年高三英语试题】
假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China)短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．提出建议；
2．阐明理由；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China,I’m writing to share my ideas with you.
If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country’s grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.
May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Mike就参加短视频大会的事情写一封回信提出一些建议并表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
报名参加：sign up→enter for
主题：theme→subject
智能的：smart→intelligent
设备：device→equipment
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you.
拓展句：Because I learnt you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture.(运用了虚拟语气在条件句中的运用)