第一部分--应用文写作-09-祝贺类--(练习版)(高考专用).docx

第一部分 应用文写作
类型09 祝贺类
英语中，祝贺信使用的频率很高，当亲友晋升、毕业、获奖等时会写祝贺信。祝贺信的用词应亲切有礼，表达出真诚的喜悦之情。结构一般如下：
①、点明祝贺事由并表示祝贺
②、详述祝贺的事情并肯定对方为此付出的努力
③、再次祝贺并表示祝愿
素材精粹
【高分句型】
首段：表明写信目的
1. I'm writing to congratulate you on...../Hearing that you.....，I'm writing to congratulate you.
我写信是为了祝贺你…/获悉你……，我写信向你表示祝贺。
2. Good news travels fast！Please accept my sincere/warm congratulations on.....
好消息传得快！请接受我对……真诚的/热烈的祝贺。
主体部分：陈述对方获得成功的原因
1. You would not have achieved this without diligence and perseverance.
没有勤奋和毅力，你是不可能做到这一点的。
2. Personally，it is your utmost efforts to......that lead to your brilliant achievements.
在我看来，正是你对…付出的最大努力给你带来辉煌成就。
尾段：再次表示祝贺
1. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career！ 祝你前程似锦/事业有成！
2. I'm sure a talented person like you will make greater achievements and live a fuller life.
我相信像你这样有才华的人将会取得更大的成就，过上更充实的生活。
佳作共赏
Dear Mr.Johns，
Good news travels fast！I'm so excited to hear that you have been rated as one of the most popular
teachers in our school.I'm writing to express my warmest congratulations to you.
I can sincerely say that you deserve the title.We have seen how much effort you have put in
teaching.Besides，kind and knowledgeable，you always have a way of making your class lively and
interesting.How lucky I am to be your student！I hope one day I can be a teacher like you.
Please accept my sincerest congratulations and best wishes.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
实战突破
Test 1
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Sophia发来邮件说她创作的一幅中国画被选为学校美术馆的展示作品，请给她回封邮件，内容包括：
1.向她表示祝贺；2.询问她作品的相关事情；3.对她进行鼓励。
注意：1.词数80左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sophia,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua

【答案】Dear Sophia,
I’m glad to hear that your Chinese painting has been selected for an exhibition in your school gallery. That’s amazing news. Congratulations!
You said you loved to paint pictures of nature. What’s your painting about this time? Is it a painting of some scenery outside or a simple picture of everyday life? I believe your work will surely stand out among all the other paintings in the exhibition.
With your talent for painting, I’m sure you will make more progress and create more excellent Chinese paintings.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Sophia回复邮件，向她表示祝贺、询问她作品的相关事情以及对她进行鼓励。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
会议：happy→glad
令人惊异的：wonderful→amazing
绘画：draw→paint
卓越的：remarkable→excellent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With your talent for painting, I’m sure you will make more progress and create more excellent Chinese paintings.
拓展句：I’m sure you will make more progress and create more excellent Chinese paintings because you have talent for painting.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m glad to hear that your Chinese painting has been selected for an exhibition in your school gallery. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] With your talent for painting, I’m sure you will make more progress and create more excellent Chinese paintings. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
Test 2
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信告诉你他被选为校学生会主席，请你给他回信表示祝贺。内容要点如下：1. 表达祝贺；
2. 对他成功原因的认识；
3. 再次表达祝贺并表示祝愿。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to convey my sincere congratulations on your being elected as chairman of students’ union of your school.
Through your e-mail and our online talks, I know quite well that you’re a person not only good at studies but also eager to hep others. What’s more, you have shown your ability to be a good organizer. I am sure that to be the head of your students’ union will prove ad improve your overall ability.
Please accept my sincerest congratulations and wish you a big success in your new post.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。假如考生是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信告诉你他被选为校学生会主席，请你给他回信表示祝贺。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的：pleased→ glad
渴望的，愿意的：willing→ eager
擅长于： do well in → be good at
能力：capability→ ability
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：What’s more, you have shown your ability to be a good organizer.
拓展句：What’s more, it is your ability that makes you be a good organizer.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Through your e-mail and our online talks, I know quite well that you’re a person not only good at studies but also eager to hep others.（though引导让步状语从句）
[高分句型2] I am sure that to be the head of your students’ union will prove ad improve your overall ability.（that引导的宾语从句）
Test 3
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 在中国象棋网络挑战赛(The Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition) 中荣获一等奖。现在，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺，要点如下：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 赞扬对方的付出；
3. 向对方学习 。
注意：1.词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
It's wonderful that you have won first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. I could hardly wait to express my sincere congratulations to you.
In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills. It is your devotion, diligence and determination that lead to your success . You set a good example for me and push me to move forward. As a chess lover, I want to invite you to teach me chess skills in order to renew my level.
Please let me know when you are available. Best wishes to you.

Yours
Li Hua
【详解】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 在中国象棋网络挑战赛(The Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition) 中荣获一等奖。现在，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
急切做某事：be eager to do→ could hardly wait to do
祝贺：congratulate sb. on sth→ express one’s sincere congratulations to sb.
大量的时间：enough time→ abundant time
提升水平：improve my level →renew my level
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills.
拓展句: In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills, which is diligent.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] It's wonderful that you have won first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your devotion, diligence and determination that lead to your success .(运用了强调句型)
Test 4
假如你是某国国际学校的学生李华，你来自英国的同学John在你校上周五举行的春季运动会上获得了长跑冠军。请你写一封邮件表示祝贺。内容如下：
1.表示祝贺；
2.肯定他的努力和成绩；
3.对自己的影响。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
______________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
More than delighted to learn that you won the first place in the long distance race of our school sports meeting held last Friday. How proud I am to see your efforts rewarded. I can't wait to extend my sincere congratulations to you on your success.
As is known to all of us, your success is surly owing to your great endeavors and determination. I've witnessed your ambitions come true after all those years of hard work. I still remember how hard you have been training to attain this goal. No matter what difficulties you met with, you never lost heart but faced the challenge bravely. Your struggle in running field left a deep impression on me. No one could have been more deserving.
Your expertise and perseverance have been a real encouragement to me. I'm determined to spare no efforts to make great progress in my study and achieve my dream. Wish you still further success and a promising future.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生给来自英国的同学John写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在春季运动会上获得长跑冠军。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
回报：pay off→reward
表达：express→extend
由于：thanks to→owing to
实现，达到：achieve→attain
鼓励，激励：inspiration→encouragement
2.句型拓展
简单句改强调句
原句：Your struggle in running field left a deep impression on me.
拓展句：It was your struggle in running field that left a deep impression on me.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]More than delighted to learn that you won the first place in the long distance race of our school sports meeting held last Friday. 运用了that引导宾语从句和过去分词作后置定语。
[高分句型2]As is known to all of us, your success is surly owing to your great endeavors and determination. 运用了as引导非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型3]No matter what difficulties you met with, you never lost heart but faced the challenge bravely. 运用了no matter what+名词引导的让步状语从句。
Test 5
假如你是李华，你的好友王芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给她写一封祝贺信。内容包括：
1. 表达你的愉悦心情；
2. 向她表示祝贺；
3. 请她介绍成功的经验。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 the English Speech Contest
Dear Wang Fang,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Wang Fang,
I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.
You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English made a profound impression on me. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.
I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友王芳写一封祝贺信，祝贺她在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：pleased→excited
消息：information→news
口头的：oral→spoken
感激的：thankful→grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am proud of you!
拓展句：Because I am your best friend, I am proud of you!
【点睛】
[高分句型1] You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. (运用了宾语从句、感叹句式以及时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. (运用了that引导的主语从句，It作形式主语)