Unit-1单元话题满分范文必背.docx

Unit 1单元话题满分范文必背
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1．假如你叫李华，新学期开学两个月了，你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你到新学校后的感受。交流内容要求包括以下要点：
1、校园环境和教学设施；
2、师生给你的印象；
3、给学校的两点建议。
注意：1、词数 100 词左右；
2、信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数；
3、内容可适当发挥，要注意行文连贯。
Hello, everyone,
I’m honored to stand here to tell you something about my school life in the past two months………….
【答案】One possible version:
Hello, everyone,
I’m honored to stand here to tell you something about my school life in the past two months.
Our school is very beautiful with a woody garden, where we can take a walk, breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery. The advanced equipment in the classroom is just brilliant and it helps our teachers make their classes lively and interesting.
My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them. Fortunately, my teachers and classmates are all friendly and enthusiastic. I have already made several new friends here. However, the food in the cafeteria is very poor and I hope it can get improved. Besides, we are extremely busy doing homework every day. How I wish we could have more time for physical exercise!
Thank you!
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。
【详解】
第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你叫李华，新学期开学两个月了，你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你到新学校后的感受。交流内容要求包括以下要点：1、校园环境和教学设施；2、师生给你的印象；3、给学校的两点建议。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，校园环境和教学设施；第二段，师生给你的印象；给学校的两点建议。第三段，表示感谢。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: a woody garden，take a walk，breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery，advanced equipment,   keep up with, friendly and enthusiastic, get improved，physical exercise。
第四步：确定较为高级的句子: Our school is very beautiful with a woody garden, where we can take a walk, breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery. My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Fortunately，However, Besides。
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:where引导的定语从句 Our school is very beautiful with a woody garden, where we can take a walk, breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery. so…that 引导的结果状语从句My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them。
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
2．假设你是李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。
1.学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；
2.多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；
3.积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。
注意：1. 词数：100左右；     2. 可适当增加细节。
提示词：   adapt to     适应
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【答案】Dear Susan，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice. First, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。给她回复邮件提出建议。全文以一般现在时和二三人称为主。
【详解】
第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一封电子邮件，给Susan回邮件提出适应新生活的具体建议。全文以一般现在时和二三人称为主。
第2步：组织要点。1.学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；2.多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；3.积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词。adapt to，take one’s advice，communicate with other，、make some friends，take an active part in all kinds of activities。写作时注意邮件的格式和惯用语。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如having trouble (in) doing sth、communicate with other、forget your loneliness等等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句……which will help to make life more interesting.同时文章的一些串联成分，如first of all、secondly、thirdly等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
3．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友John对刚进入的高中生活不太适应，请你写信告诉他你的想法，内容要点如下：
1.鼓励其广交朋友；
2.积极参加体育活动，强身健体；
3.努力奋斗进入理想大学。
注意：1.可加入一些细节，使文章更加通顺合理；
2.词数100左右（信的格式已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I’m so pleased to hear that you’ve been in Senior High School. And maybe you need a couple of months to adjust yourself. Here are some good tips for you.
Firstly, a life without a friend is a life without a sun, so why not make a lot of good friends and enjoy helping each other. Secondly, we can take an active part in sports in our spare time so that we can get into shape which will surely be good for our further study. Besides, it’s our duty to study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true.
I believe you’ll get used to it soon and wait for your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给对刚进入高中生活不太适应的美国笔友John提出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
首先：firstly→first of all
一定：surely→certainly
此外：besides→what’s more
习惯于：get used to→be accustomed to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, a life without a friend is a life without a sun, so why not make a lot of good friends and enjoy helping each other.
拓展句：Firstly, a life without a friend is a life without a sun, so why not make a lot of good friends and enjoy helping each other, which will make you happy.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Secondly, we can take an active part in sports in our spare time so that we can get into shape, which will surely be good for our further study. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, it’s our duty to study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
4．假定你是李华，你的外国好友Eric将作为交换生到你市的一所高中学习。因担心自己不能快速适应这里的学校生活，特写信向你求助，请就此给他写封回信。要点如下：
1．乐意提供帮助；     2．提出具体建议；     3．希望能够帮到对方。
注意：1．词数100左右；     
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric，
I feel delighted to learn that you are coming to study in our city as an exchange student.
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Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
I feel delighted to learn that you are coming to study in our city as an exchange student. As for how to adjust yourself to the new school life here quickly, I’d like to give you some advice.
First, I recommend that you learn the school’s rules by reading its handbook first. If possible, you may as well visit the school in advance, so that you will know the school better. Besides, it’s quite necessary to communicate with your classmates and schoolmates, which enables you to make more new friends. What’s more, participating in after-class activities can be of great help too！By doing this, not only can you improve yourself but you will get yourself involved in the group quickly.
I hope you will find the suggestions practical and don’t hesitate to turn to me any time you need help.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文为提纲式作文，内容为回复求助信，提出建议。
【详解】
首先确定文章的主要要点，确定文章的时态为一般现在时，人称可用第二人称。文章可分三段：首先表达对Eric的欢迎和乐意提供帮助；然后提出具体建议；最后希望能够帮到对方。写作时要注意态度诚恳，要点全面，表达正确，条理清晰。
【点睛】
本文运用了较多从句，如：宾语从句I recommend that you learn the school’s rules by reading its handbook first.
状语从句：If possible, you may as well visit the school in advance, so that you will know the school better.
it作形式主语的主语从句 it’s quite necessary to communicate with your classmates and schoolmates,中。
定语从句which enables you to make more new friends.倒装句not only can you improve yourself.
此外，文章注意各层次之间的衔接：first， besides， what’s more，使文章很有条理。
5．假定你是高一学生李华，你叔叔家的弟弟小明也是一名高一学生但是他觉得不太适应高一的学习生活，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 与老师交流，征求老师意见；
2. 上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记：
3. 其它方面。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
I’m delighted to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m delighted to hear from you. Now，I’d like to share my study tips with you.
First, you’d better communicate with your teachers often. In this way, they may offer some great advice on both your study and life. Second, why not make yourself active in each class, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later? Third, it s a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.
I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】
第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 与老师交流，征求老师意见；2. 上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记3. 其它方面。第二，人称为第一、二、三人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主，兼用一般将来时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，引题。第二段，1. 与老师交流，征求老师意见；2. 上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记：3. 其它方面。第三段，希望自己的建议对Jim有所帮助。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:offer, attentively, carefully ,practice ,enjoy, be delighted to do sth ,hear from, share sth with sb , communicate with, make yourself active, listen to the teacher, take notes, take it fresh in your mind, be helpful to sb.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:so that 引导的目的状语从句Second, why not make yourself active in each class, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later? Which引导的非限制性定语从句Third, it s a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind. that引导的宾语从句I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:First, Second, Third.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:如so that 引导的目的状语从句Second, why not make yourself active in each class, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later? Which引导的非限制性定语从句Third, it s a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind. that引导的宾语从句I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
6．假设你是李华，你收到朋友李磊的信，他告诉你他不适应高一数学老师讲的课， 在学习数学方面有些困难，以至于跟不上其他同学，因此他感到非常着急。请你给李磊写一封信，想办法帮助他解决这方面的困难。
参考词汇：适应adapt to
要求：1. 不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Lei,
I have got your letter.______________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Li Lei,
I have got your letter. And I am very glad that you believe me. I have known you have some difficulty in learning Maths because can’t adapt to what your maths teacher teaches. Don’t worry about it.
I think the following may be of help to you. Firstly, you’d better listen to the teacher carefully in class and practise more. You can ask your Maths teacher to explain what you can’t understand after class. You should be confident and believe in yourself. I think you can make it .Finally , you can communicate with your classmates and get some advice on Maths.
Best   wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文属于提纲类作文，要求用英语写一封回信。
【详解】
要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】
本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：have some difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难，adapt to适应。还使用了宾语从句And I am very glad that you believe in me.和宾语从句.I think you will adapt to it and do well in it in future.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。
7．很多学生进入高中以来，因饮食不规律，导致了一系列健康问题，你校英文校刊饮食栏目针对这一问题，向全体同学征稿，请你以“Be a Smart Eater”为题目，为该栏目投稿，主要内容如下：
1. 健康饮食的重要性；
2. 如何做到健康饮食
3. 向同学们发出呼吁。
注意：
1. 词数80左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Be a Smart Eater
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【答案】As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet. Now I’d like to call on you to be a smart eater.
For us students, eating healthy food is of great importance because we need enough nutrients to keep our body functioning well. Having meals regularly is a good way to keep fit and prevent diseases. Besides, we should eat less junk food. By eating junk food, we may get sick easily.   
Let's change our way of living. Let's have a healthy diet from now on. By having meals regularly, we will grow up healthily and happily.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Be a Smart Eater”为题目，给校英文校刊饮食栏目投稿，呼吁高中生健康饮食。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
重要的：is of great importance → be importance
保持健康：keep fit→ keep healthy
由于：because of → due to
呼吁：call on→   appeal
2.句式拓展
简单句变复杂句
原句：Besides, we should eat le