专题09-书面表达-2022年江苏省中考英语真题分类详解.docx

专题09 书面表达-2022年江苏省中考真题分类详解（牛津译林版）

【书面表达考情分析】
苏州市
写一篇以“Practice makes perfect”为题的短文投稿
扬州市
写一篇短文投稿介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得
宿迁市
写一篇题为“Enjoy study, enjoy life”的英语短文，与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活
连云港市
写一篇以“Happy Summer Vacation"为题给校报英语专栏的短文,为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由
无锡市
写一篇题为“The Person I Want to Thank” 的英文演讲稿参加比赛
泰州市
写一篇材料作文，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化
徐州市
写一篇材料作文，以“Me and my after-class course”为主题，结合所给要点提示写一篇作文。
镇江市
根据提示要点内容给报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你会选择的夏令营活动项目及选择的理由，并对活动提出建议。
常州市
某中学生英文报Your Voice栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法，要求以“交友”为话题，结合提示内容进行写作。

【真题详解】
2022年苏州市中考英语书面表达真题
第七部分书面表达（共1题；满分25分）
57. 《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你对该谚语的理解；
2. 你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）；
3. 你的感悟，
注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Practice makes perfect
Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean ____________________________
【答案】
Practice makes perfect
Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean that we should practice unfamiliar things again and again. We’ll be able to perform it perfectly.
The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. You can’t master English just by sitting at your desk. As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it. Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday. On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect.
【解析】
本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。本文采用一般现在时人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

2022年扬州市中考英语书面表达真题
B. 写作（计20分）
76. 最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。
Why you made it
help enjoy reading your favourite book（name, type of book, what you like most）
How you made it
Materials & Tools
● card
● scissors, glue…
Steps

● cut the card into…
● draw a picture of…
● write（your favourite sentence from the book or a famous saying or…）
● …
How you felt
…
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favorite book is the classic novel Journey to the West, one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying “Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.” on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself.
【解析】
本文以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，并结合表格中的内容，描述制作书签的目的和过程，可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍制作书签的目的，以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方；第二段重点描述制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程；第三段描述自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

2022年宿迁市中考英语书面表达真题
六、书面表达（满分15分）
71. 实施“双减”政策，推行“阳光作业”，我们同学可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培养兴趣爱好，陪伴家人、朋友。学校请你与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活，请根据下表提示完成一篇题为“Enjoy study, enjoy life的英语短文。
Enjoy study, enjoy life
校园
1.参加各种活动，如：绘画、舞蹈等；
2.多做运动，有益健康；
3.……（补充一点）
家庭
1.畅说梦想，倾诉烦恼；
2.帮做家务，学会一些生活技能；
3.……（补充一点）
注意事项：
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.
【答案】
Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
In school, we should actively participate in various activities, such as painting, dancing, football, etc. Through these sports, we can make our bodies healthier and stronger. If students have difficulties, we should also actively help them.
At home, we should live in peace with our parents. We should talk about our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time. Let parents know everything about us. With their support, we will get twice the result with half the effort. At the same time, we should also help our parents do some housework and learn some life skills. If you are in a bad mood, you can listen to some music or do something you like.
In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.
【解析】
本文以“Enjoy study, enjoy life”为题介绍如何合理安排课余生活，可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍在学校的安排；第三段描述在家里的生活。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

2022年连云港市中考英语书面表达真题
七、书面表达(共1小题;满分25分)
76.“双减”之后,如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义?请你根据以下图片及文字提示,以“Happy Summer Vacation" 为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。

注意:
(1)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计人总词数;
(2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Happy Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time,how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.
First, we can do some sports. We can go running every morning. It can help us keep healthy. Besides, we can do some housework at home. It is necessary for us to learn some life skills and look after ourselves. What’s more, we need to read some books. Reading helps improve our knowledge and opens up a whole new weold to us. We can also join some clubs, such as the Singing Club or the Dancing Club. It can help us develop hobbies.
I hope you can have a colourful vacation.
【解析】
本文以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题介绍如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义，文章可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍假期可以如何度过的方式以及各自的理由；第三段表达期待大家都能有一个愉快的假期。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

2022年无锡市中考英语书面表达真题
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank” 的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……), 请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
Influence
(...)
Experience
(example/story)
Introduction
(looks; personalities;...)

注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
The Person I Want to Thank
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The Person I Want to Thank
In my life, many people have helped me a lot, but Miss Wang is one of the most important
persons in my life. I want to thank her most.
Miss Wang is my English teacher. She is beautiful with long hair. She’s very kind and outgoing. She likes to help with others. She has helped me a lot in learning English. She is so energetic that her classes are very interesting and funny. Sometimes she’s too strict with us. I couldn’t do well in English before. With her help I started to take much interest in learning English. I’m good at English now. Not only did she helped me with my English, she also taught me how to face the trouble.
Thank her for giving me so much help. I will study harder and harder.
【解析】
文章属于比较开放的话题作文写作；文章主题是“我想感谢的人”，写作时要紧扣主题；第一段指明我最想感谢的人是谁，并且要对他或她的容貌、性格进行介绍；第二段举出我和他或她之间发生的具体值得感恩的事例；第三段叙述他或她对我的影响。文章采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时；叙述情感要真切。

2022年泰州市中考英语书面表达真题
八、书面表达（满分20分）
78. 我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。
要点如下：
1.变化是什么？
2.变化过程是什么？
3.你从中得到了什么启发？
要求：
1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
We grow up in change. Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on. The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time.
Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍变化是什么；第二段介绍变化过程是什么；第三段介绍从中得到了什么启发。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

2022年徐州市中考英语书面表达真题
六、书面表达（满分20分）
71. 你校在课后服务活动中，根据学生的需求开设了丰富多彩的课程（见下表）。你选修了其中的一门，收获颇丰。你校英文报正在组织题为“Me and my after-class course”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你选修的课程；
2. 你学习该课程的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
①运动（Sports） ②阅读（Reading） ③手工（DIY）
④绘画（Painting） ⑤声乐（Singing） ⑥……（自拟）
注意：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息；
3. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Me and my after-class course
In my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Me and my after-class course
In my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose the course of DIY. DIY literally means making things by hand.
My first assignment was to use the colored bubble mud commonly used by primary school students now, paste a colored blessing on the small board, and then make a frame with colored wool. Because I think everyone has a different understanding of happiness. I made a word Fu into color. It’s quite a test of a person’s patience to do some simple handicrafts, such as cross stitch, folding thousand paper crane...
Through this study, I learned that we can make handmade in many ways. Waste beverage bottles, wool, ice cream sticks and so on can become raw materials for handmade. We can create our own satisfactory works through our own imagination.
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。以“Me and my after-class course”为主题，结合所给要点提示写一篇作文。本文时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时先从表格里选择一个课外课程，之后再根据三个要点展开叙述。文章要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

2022年镇江市中考英语书面表达真题
七、书面表达(共1题;满分15分)
66. 假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织的劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。

要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life