Unit-1-单元话题满分范文必背(牛津译林版2020).docx

Unit 1 Back to school
单元话题满分范文必背
1．假设你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容如下:
1. 深表同情；
2. 提出建议并给出理由；(至少三条建议，如:参加学校社团活动，与朋友交流，做些户外活动等)
3. 希望建议能有所帮助。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Bill,
I am sorry to know you are having trouble with your life and study here. However, the situation is easy to change. Now, I’d like to give you some advice.
Firstly, join some school clubs, where you can make some friends. Secondly, communicate with the people who have the same interest with you. Maybe it can help you get rid of your loneliness. Thirdly, do some outdoor activities and they can make you relaxed. By doing all these, you can get used to your school life and live happily.
Hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信：假设你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容如下:1. 深表同情；2. 提出建议并给出理由；(至少三条建议，如:参加学校社团活动，与朋友交流，做些户外活动等)3. 希望建议能有所帮助。
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：having trouble with your life and study here（在这里生活学习有麻烦）；join some school clubs（参加学校俱乐部）；make some friends（交一些朋友）；have the same interest with you（和你有同样的兴趣）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
本文是一封书信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。Firstly, join some school clubs, where you can make some friends.句中where引导非限制性定语从句；communicate with the people who have the same interest with you.juzhongqwho引导定语从句；另外，However, Firstly, Secondly,等的运用为文章增色添彩。
2．假定你是李华，你的外国好友Lily最近成绩下降明显。请你用英语写封邮件，给她提些建议，内容包括：
1.保持良好的心态；
2.制定合理的学习计划；
3.多向老师和同学求助。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lily,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lily,
I’m sorry to know that you have gotten low grades recently. But don’t worry about it too much. Now, let me share some suggestions with you.
Firstly, I think it’s important to have a positive attitude towards study. Besides, you need to make good plans for your study, which will help you improve your grades little by little. Last but not least, you should turn to your teachers and classmates for help when you have any difficulty in study.
I do hope my suggestions will be of some help to you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给外国好友Lily写一封邮件，给她提些关于成绩下滑该如何改善的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→ advice/proposal
重要的：important→ significant/vital
提升：improve→ promote/elevate
困难：difficulty→ trouble
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Now, let me share some suggestions with you.
拓展句：Now, let me share some suggestions that I hope will help you.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Besides, you need to make good plans for your study, which will help you improve your grades little by little.(运用which引导非限定性定语从句。)
[高分句型2]Last but not least, you should turn to your teachers and classmates for help when you have any difficulty in study.(运用when引导时间状语从句。)
3．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。最近你的英国笔友Jim写信告诉你最近他学习压力很大。请你给他回信并提供一些关于如何处理压力的建议。内容包括：
1. 表示理解和关心；
2. 提出具体建议(不少于两条)；
3. 鼓励并表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Knowing that you have stress in your study, I am writing to give you some advice. As a senior high school student, none of us is having an easy time, but we still can do something to successfully get through the next three years.
The most important thing you should do is to take good care of yourself. Whenever you feel tired or depressed, spare some time to have fun with your families and friends. As for study, it is essential to find out what needs to be done. Then make a schedule and set time for each subject. That will ensure you enough time to review.
Anyway, don’t push yourself too hard. I hope you will make progress in your study.
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友回信，就如何处理学习压力这一问题表示理解和关心，给对方提出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
压力：stress→pressure
建议：advice→suggestion
照顾：take care of→look after
重要的：essential→important
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then make a schedule and set time for each subject. That will ensure you enough time to review.
拓展句：Then make a schedule and set time for each subject, which will ensure you enough time to review.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Knowing that you have stress in your study, I am writing to give you some advice.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Whenever you feel tired or depressed, spare some time to have fun with your families and friends.（运用了whenever引导时间状语从句）
4．假定你是李华，你和李明升入高中后在不同的学校。李明刚入学一段时间，就遇到了一些问题，请根据他所遇到的问题写一封回信并提出相应的建议。
问题：1.不适应，感到孤独；
2.学习英语有困难；
3.经常玩手机。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ming,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Hoping my advice is helpful for you and may you enjoy your new school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’m really sorry for your problems you are facing now. In fact, I also got into some troubles but finally I went out of them. So I’d like to share some ideas with you.
To begin with, you should be active and make friends with others so that you won’t feel lonely. In addition, to solve your problems with English, it will be helpful for you to communicate with your English teacher or turn to your classmates for help. Since you are playing smartphone too much. I advise you to let your parents keep your mobile phone when you are studying at school.
Hoping my advice is helpful for you and may you enjoy your new school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就李明升入高中后所遇到的问题写一封回信并提出相应的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
事实上：in fact→as a matter of fact
想要做某事：would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
有益的：helpful→beneficial
建议某人干某事：advise sb. to do sth.→suggest sb. doing sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, to solve your problems with English, it will be helpful for you to communicate with your English teacher or turn to your classmates for help.
拓展句：In addition, in order that you can solve your problems with English, it will be helpful for you to communicate with your English teacher or turn to your classmates for help.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m really sorry for your problems you are facing now. (运用了省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】To begin with, you should be active and make friends with others so that you won’t feel lonely. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句)
5．假如你叫李华，你的英国笔友 Alice 来信想了解你高一上期的学习生活，以及你面临即将到来的高一下期学习生活所做的打算以及你的期待。请你给她 写一封回信，要点如下：
1. 介绍你高一上期的学习生活；
2. 你对高一下期的学习生活所做的打算；
3. 你对高一下期的学习生活的期待。
词数：100 词左右
开头已为你写好:
Dear Alice,
I am more than happy to receive your letter. In your letter, you ask me about my study and living life in senior one. Let me introduce it to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alice,
I am more than happy to receive your letter. In your letter, you ask me about my study and living life in the first term of Senior One. Let me introduce it to you.
The study and living life in the first semester of Senior One is different from that of Junior. What I want to mention most is that the life of first term is more independent, study is more challenging and we have to learn 9 subjects. With the help of teachers and classmates, I was well accustomed to the life of Senior High.
With the new term coming, I make up my mind to try harder. Still, I will pay more attention to forming the study habit of preview and review, which is of vital importance to improve study efficiency.
Lastly, I have an expectancy that my study and living life of this new semester will be both amazing and fulfilling and I can have some time to join my favorite clubs.
Looking forward to your letter. Best Wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Alice回信介绍自己高一上学期的学习生活以及下学期的打算和期待。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy →delighted
帮助：help →assistance
习惯于：be accustomed to →be used to
必须：have to → must
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am more than happy to receive your letter. In your letter, you ask me about my study and living life in the first term of Senior One.
拓展句：I am more than happy to receive your letter, in which you ask me about my study and living life in the first term of Senior One.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】What I want to mention most is that the life of first term is more independent, study is more challenging and we have to learn 9 subjects.（运用了what引导的主语从句以及that引导的表语从句）
【高分句型2】Still, I will pay more attention to forming the study habit of preview and review, which is of vital importance to improve study efficiency.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
6．假如你是李华，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式和初中有很大不同，你给自己的英语老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。要包括以下内容：
1．开始学习高中英语时，觉得比初中英语难得多，几乎丧失信心；
2．后来认识到英语的重要性；
3．每天努力学习英语；
4．向老师和同学请教更好的英语学习方法；
5．现在英语取得了很大进步，对英语越来越感兴趣；
6．信的开头结尾已给出。
提示：初中 junior high school 高中 senior high school
词数：100左右。
Dear Mr. Li,
I am glad to tell you that ______________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Li,
I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student.
When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I realized the importance of English, so I got up early every morning, recited English words, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercises. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English.
Now, I’m improving my English greatly. And I’m getting more and more interested in learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的英语老师写一封信，讲述自己进入高中后的英语学习情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
开始：start→begin
方法：way→method
帮助：help→assistance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
拓展句：Thank you so much for what you have taught me in your class.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和since引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）
7．假定你是李华，最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题。你给笔友Allen写了一封信，希望得到他的帮助。内容如下：
1.学习热情减退；
2.作业太多，疲于应付；
3.……
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：减退weaken
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【答案】Dear Allen,
How are you? These days I am faced with some problems about my English study, which has confused me long. So I am writing this letter for your advice.
First of all, my wish to study hard and get good grades has been weakened with time going by. More often, I find English so boring that I fall asleep in class. Besides, it seems to have endless homework, and I have to copy others’ to finish it. What’s worse, I am becoming weaker and weaker in this subject. Is it necessary for me to find a tutor who can help me with my English?
That’s all. I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华，最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题。你给笔友Allen写了一封信，希望得到他的帮助。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
首先：first of all→first and foremost
此外：besides → what’s more
无聊的：boring→ dull
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What’s worse, I am becoming weaker and weaker in this subject.
拓展句：What’s worse, because I am becoming weaker and weaker in this subject,   I am very anxious about it.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】These days I am faced with some problems about my English study, which has confused me long.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Is it necessary for me to find a tutor who can help me with my English?（运用了it作形式主语和who引导的定语从句）
8．作为一名高一新生,你在学习和生活中遇到一些困难,特别是与新同学的相处,为此你有时会感到很沮丧。请你以日记的形式写下遇到的困难以及克服困难的方法,同时也表达你对未来的学习生活的信心。写作要点：
1.学习和生活中遇到的困难；
2.如何解决；
3.对未来充满信心。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】It has been almost two months since I came to this school. But now sometimes I suffer a lot. I meet with some difficulties in my life and study as well. In addition, as there are so many excellent students around me, I feel extremely horrible. However, I know it’s no use feeling sad and worried. I decide to count on myself and take some measures to change the situation. First of all, in order to make good use of my time, I should mak